Interstellar Talisman Cultivator

Um, can an online store be blocked immediately if it is reported by someone who has never purchased anything? Then there is no need to open all online stores, and the coincidence is too deliberate. Once or twice is okay, but if it happens every time, it looks like a deliberate coincidence.

In fact, this genre is quite good. If you didn't forcefully reduce your intelligence and use the same old plot, I feel that you have already taken off. I really admire it. I have not seen any of your plots in other places. I like it. It's really uncomfortable when you write it like that. Don't use those plots from a few years ago. Look at other authors and imitate them. Really, this kind of plot will seriously delay you.

It's boring to keep missing out. In Chapter 54, Teacher Qin felt the presence of the card maker and was sure that the protagonist was the only one in the dormitory. Why would you ask? He actually left directly

Coincidences happen 3 to 5 times and it feels interesting, but coincidences 8 or 10 times feel boring.

Although the story is good, there are too many coincidences and misses that no one can find. It was a bit exciting at the beginning, but it will be uncomfortable when you watch the end. Moreover, it is obviously the routine of "The Return of the Immortal Emperor", but the protagonist is also squeezed too hard.

The foreshadowing in the first few chapters is too long.

After seeing this introduction, my desire to read was immediately halved.

Please change your rhythm, it's a big problem

It turned into a fan meeting anyway, water, water

😏I come, I see, I record