Interstellar Talisman Cultivator

Um, can an online store be immediately shut down just because someone reports it without ever buying anything from it? Then all online stores would be out of business. And the coincidences seem too contrived. Once or twice is one thing, but doing it every time looks like a deliberately manufactured coincidence.

Actually, this type of story is quite good. If you didn't force the characters to be less intelligent and use all the same old plots, you would have already taken off. I'm truly impressed. I've seen every single one of these plots elsewhere. I like them, but it's really painful to read. Stop using those plots from years ago. Look at other authors and learn from them. This kind of plot is seriously holding you back.

It's no fun if we keep missing things. In chapter 54, Teacher Qin sensed the card-making aura and confirmed that the protagonist was alone in the dormitory, so wouldn't she at least ask something? Instead, she just left.

Coincidences happening 3 or 5 times are quite interesting, but 8 or 10 times get boring.

Although the story is good, there are too many coincidences and missed opportunities. It's a bit enjoyable at the beginning, but it becomes very frustrating later on. Moreover, even though it follows the same formula as "The Return of the Immortal Emperor," the protagonist is exploited too much.

The previous chapters were too long with setup.

Seeing this synopsis immediately halved my desire to read it.

Let's change the rhythm; there's a big problem.

How did it all turn into a fan meeting? So much fluff!

😏I came, I saw, I recorded.