Sword Art Online: Beginning with the Aria of the Sealer

Now that I have read Chapter 78, let me tell you my personal feelings first. Sword fandom is a small minority in the first place. There are only a few who are willing to delve into the settings and write carefully and write well after eating a mouthful of IP. This book is considered to be the best among the ones I have seen. Please read it and cherish it. Be sure to read it. Don't let the author feel chilled by cutting it off halfway, that's the real chill... Please look at this anniversary before discussing CP) Look, let's break down Tongya, in fact, even if the part added by the old thief has been revealed in advance There is a sense of emotional line in it, but you have to admit that, based on the timeline that our readers (referring to the original party) looked at, we first saw Sarch, that is, the death of Xing, which then led to the destruction of the Black Cat Knights, and then the star In the scene where he was forced to abandon his treatment and kill his name, he collapsed due to exhaustion, and President Ya successfully captured Kirito in the battle (don't tell me that there was a secret emotion in the first-level crusade. If Kirito hadn't been a bit autistic and didn't talk about his closed beta experience, I wouldn't have been implicated by the little brat who opened the treasure box randomly). The original work also had some meaning of harem party struggle in it, although it was shown that Aya was sitting in the main palace seat and sharing Kirito (bushi) with Ujo. Since it was written that Tonga was separated, luck could not exit and could not be given to the protagonist. In this way, even if Silica and Kirito, the only Pokémon players in the whole game, met later, for the recipients of the hostage For Kirito, who is influenced by the horns, his SAO will not change no matter what (the appearance of the protagonist is equivalent to inciting the butterfly wings, but not completely inciting, I beg you to be nicer to Kirito) Looking at it this way, the goal of the harem is actually very clear. In addition to the foreseeable Li Te in the picture above, Silica and Lisbeth are within the category that can be considered. (Silica's sister-control attribute is suitable for Kirito x, and it is reasonable for Lisbeth to introduce Asuna to Kirito to make swords out of friendship). But after all, I am a little curious about how to deal with the Fairy Kingdom chapter... After all, I feel that if I go with the idea of defeating Sao from the beginning, the leader should not give the power beyond the system to this strange-looking man... In addition, since Yuuki has already appeared, so according to the captain and Kirito himself, Yuuki should have obtained the two-sword style. There is no such thing as a two-sword style in the Odachi... (Right?) Then where should my Kiriko go... (Silence) It is better to transform Kirito into Kiriko, right? (Happy)

First, you must persevere. Don't give up midway, get stuck, or end up unfinished. It's normal to not update as expected, but don't give up. Second, don't be afraid of poor writing. Take it slow and work slowly. For writing fan fiction, as long as the cause and effect of the matter are clearly described, the person who writes it is not a professional writer after all. Real professional writers probably can't write fan fiction. Sometimes there are areas where they are not good at plot description, such as the fighting process and psychological activities. You can focus on it and think twice. You can also refer to the plot descriptions of some well-written similar novels to continuously enrich yourself. Third, some parts of the plot of the original story can be abbreviated, but cannot be omitted. For the original plot that is considered unimportant, it must be briefly described without omitting the past. What you want to write is a complete story, not a diary. At the very least, people who have never seen the original work can roughly understand what happened in the middle. Fourth, try to enrich the description of daily life, psychology, body movements, psychological expressions, the enemy and the enemy and other multi-angle story plots. The original story plot can also be appropriately modified or extended. But you must also be careful, because most readers of fan fiction sometimes don't go too far into the plot that the author has worked hard to create. When seeing such an unfamiliar chapter, most people will choose to skip it. It's okay to change the original plot, but it can't be done in one go. Fifth, except for the protagonist and supporting characters, the author's fictional characters should not exceed his or her control over the plot. If there are too many characters in a certain work that are not in the original story, it will be difficult for readers to accept it and they will not be able to figure out the relationship between the characters. It is recommended to think twice before acting. Necessary characters can be fictional, but try to control them within your own overall story concept. New fictional characters should have prototypes as much as possible so that readers can adapt to them as quickly as possible. Sixth, be able to withstand the abuse and stick to the principles. The psychological quality must be good. No matter how you write, you will be criticized, insulted, intimidated, ridiculed... The work is your own, and you must insist on your own creation. Let those who curse die. Seventh, try not to wear random clothes. In a work, try not to mix characters from other works, except for comic novels. You can also learn from the plots, skills, character prototypes, etc. Of other works. Eighth, the settings should be clear. For some unique settings, explain them in the story instead of writing them in related documents. Many readers don't look at the relevant settings. Ninth, YY is the kingly way, don't be afraid of criticism. Without YY, there would be no point in writing fan fiction. It is precisely because of YY that it attracts attention. Tenth, don't go back. Unless there is a flaw, don't go back and make changes. It is advisable to continue writing. Do not follow the advice of some readers and go back to change the plot. It is recommended that a slow start is the best pace. Don't be afraid of boring and low income. This will be of great benefit to your writing skills and future income. Eleventh, what you like is the most important thing. If you create or adapt stories and characters that you don't like, fan fiction will lose its vitality. Twelfth, don't be afraid to overturn the original settings and deliver packages. Many novels and animations constantly overturn their own settings, and a story without flaws is incomplete. Thirteenth, chapters should be clear, and avoid no titles or chapters. The number of words in the title should be between 4 and 15 words. If the chapter is not clear, many readers will forget where they last saw it after the author updates it. 14. The number of words in each chapter should be controlled at around 2,000-5,000 words. Too short or too long will affect the reading effect. 15. Try to explain the unfamiliar terms, geography, etc. That appear in the novel.

Sword-themed novels haven't appeared in many years

Jiangjiang is here, bringing Xiao Sheng Pan-fried Buns, Fried Soybean Noodles, hot fried dumplings with scallion oil and egg custard to support her. I strongly support the great book, yeah yeah!

It's great. For people like me who have never read sword novels, it is a book that I can read with my heart. It allows me to re-experience the power of the sword worldview.

This Sword Art Online fanfic is very interesting and has the writing style of the original work. I recommend it!

It's been a long time since I've read a sword fanfic. The threshold for entry into this book is quite high I suggest those who want to read it xd to re-watch the anime before starting again, otherwise the game terminology will be quite confusing.

I just finished reading Chapter 39. This is the first time a sword fan novel has made me so immersed in the story. The writing is smooth and it is a rare masterpiece among sword fans. I hope the author will continue to keep up. Although I haven't read the last chapter yet, I will follow up on the new chapters released by the author. Come on, author. I will reward you with 1500. It is not disrespectful to be small.

Guys, please recommend some good-looking sword and sword fandom.

Asuna

Grandpa Tong actually kept his 🐔, I can't believe it

Mitter Rabbit Fukasumi

I have read dozens of sword fanfics, but I have only read 3-4 in a long time. (The one I have persisted with for the longest time is the one about Kiriko who basically changed the original novel to write a myth in the later period.) Personally, I feel that a common problem with sword fandom in China is: The writing is "broken". The same goes for this book by the author. To put it in more detail: (1) Time jumps quickly and the distribution of words and ink in each time period is extremely uneven; (2) There is basically no description of the "preparatory work" plot; (3) The story line is written through the protagonist. Originally, this is nothing, but when combined with (1), it will create a "broken" feeling; (4) It is easy to have the problem of too short descriptions of scenes and too small a single scene. This is not a flaw when reading carefully and slowly, but when reading continuously, it will produce a particularly serious sense of boredom and fragmentation. The above 4 points combined with 2-3 points are what I think are the common faults of most sword fandoms. Well, to be honest, I am very optimistic about this book by the author (let's talk about the advantages first): 1: First of all, the "closed beta" mentioned in one stroke can be used as a dark line to be interspersed in the subsequent text, and the dark line can be combined with the bright line in a reasonable and clever way. It can create unexpected narrative methods and story tension; 2: Secondly, the setting of "God's Set Collection" is equivalent to digging a big hole to facilitate hydrology (bushi); 3: Next, the writing style is average, this is my personal feeling. 4: Finally, the author's homework for the original work was very detailed. Among the sword fanfics I have read, the level of rigor is definitely at the top level. Then let's talk about the shortcomings (purely personal opinions): [1] The description of reality at the beginning is too hasty, and the protagonist's character image is not established at all. The Kiriko book I have read the longest, half of the first five chapters are spent on reality. They are not about social relationships, but about the protagonist's past life and preparations for SAO (the latter is the focus). The author's depiction of the protagonist's deliberate practice of swordsmanship was very touching, and I still remember it vividly. 2The emotional line is slow and has no sense of existence. This is a matter of opinion. My requirements for the heroine are really very low. I can do it with or without her, and I can do it with her if she doesn't have too many to the point where she becomes a poisonous point. But at least be careful. As for the scene where Asuna is in danger and Mitt is worried, my expectation is that you can at least write a whole chapter or two small chapters... And this is the result. 3Basically do not write about the "preparation" plot (it overlaps with shortcomings [1] but it is worth mentioning separately for criticism). Twenty or thirty chapters later, I just couldn't find a place where "preparation" was described in detail, as if the protagonist's strength was just to "level up" and then "bang bang" jump up. Hmm... Maybe the author is not good at writing this? With so many personal feelings, the advice I want to give is to read the advantages 1 and disadvantages [2] and [3] I wrote above, no more...

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I think it would be better to bring out the attributes of the game. Not to mention anything else, it would be easier to fight the pervert and the death gun who imprisoned Asuna in the future. Otherwise, I have a physique that has been in bed for two years. Emmmm, even multiple female protagonists may not be able to handle it.

The writing is good, the setting is quite satisfactory, the protagonist is lawful and kind, the article is more of a supplementary setting, and there are no ups and downs.

Regarding the bathing easter egg that everyone mentioned, it was a scene in the movie sequence battle - Asuna taking a bath. I watched it on TV, but I couldn't find it later (sad)

Ah? It ended after a while? When will the new book be released?

It would be even better if the protagonist is Grandpa Kiri. Sword is the first anime that I watched. I really don't want Asuna and Grandpa Kiri to be demolished. I remember the first time I watched Sword, my uncle took me to watch it 😐

I'm so stupid... How can I finish it with only 500,000 words?😭 I'm still looking forward to the bad girl Quinella😭😭😭😭😭[ fn=12]😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭You're done before I kill you

Ah, are you raising yourself to death?

Eliminate! The author did not finish reading the book and lost a few points of investment income 😭

{"NickName":"It's a pigeon","UserId":374535917} Do you still write books?

New readers from 2026 are here. Are there any extras and missing chapters?

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Boss, why did your new sword book suddenly come off the shelves?

Pigeon, when will the new book be released? (I can't log in to QQ for now, but I think it will be available on QQ in a while)

I don't seem to have seen the group. If you don't want to finish it, shouldn't you write the follow-up parts?