Douluo Simulator: A Semi-Divine Artifact from the Start

Since you need to contract a soul beast, why not travel around instead of following the original storyline? Or do you not understand the geographical location of the game? My impression is that you write whatever comes to mind without an outline.

The pacing is too slow. It's mostly about romance and slice-of-life stories. The semi-divine artifacts that appeared at the beginning only exist for occasional system space checks. The plot is also bland and tasteless. It's neither useful nor worth abandoning.

Your simulation is going on and on, it's already several chapters long.

Writing fanfiction with secondary settings and adding a bunch of personal opinions overshadows the main story. It lacks originality and insists on rigidly adhering to the plot. The overall impression is: self-indulgent.

The plot is bland and uneventful, lacking both exciting battles and displays of power, offering absolutely no satisfying moments. There's no knowledge of the protagonist's strength, no battles against opponents stronger than themselves, no acquisition of treasures to boost their power, and no satisfying moments of obtaining trump cards (the protagonist even forgot the Soul-Devouring Carving Blade…

Shennong's Sharp Commentary: No Whitewashing, No Criticism This martial soul is quite strange. If I were to write it, it would be a "freebie-stealing" story. From Tianmeng Ge to Di Tian, there are so many soul beasts that are about to undergo Heavenly Tribulation, why don't you go looking for them? You're only thinking about the two cats your family gave you.

The part about the rainbow, while inexplicable, was barely acceptable; it served as foreshadowing and provided background for the protagonist, allowing him to focus less on Tang San, given Tang San's intense focus on Douluo Continent in the Douluo Continent II setting. The main problem, however, is the later scene where he goes to Tian Dou to rescue Tang Ya.

You've contracted with five soul beasts, all of them female. What are the odds? Even Huo Qubing didn't have this much.

What do you think is the biggest difference between the author and the water god?

The part with the rainbow was completely baffling. It was so distracting.