The Days I Spent Taking It Easy in Great Ming

After reading the article, I also browsed the comment area and made a comprehensive comment. 1. The practical application possibilities and impact of alcohol in the historical environment at that time. (The problem is that the impact of this matter is not on the production, and the so-called optimal disinfection concentration of 75%) 2. The actual operation problems of caesarean section and medical journals and the handling of the sense of violation. (You condensed two very professional things into a few chapters, but it is not that simple even now) 3. The sense of violation caused by the direct use of nouns in the modern discourse system. (For example, journals, papers, etc., I get goosebumps when reading them) 4. The title of the book does not match the content. Reading the whole article, it can be called the king of volumes. Why is there such a thing as "catching fish"? 5. The issue of characterization of history and characters. This part involves your outline. Looking at it from the front, are you planning to enter modern industrialization? There is not much character development. After dozens of chapters, it is just about "career" without emotion. But this is not like a simulation development article, which makes people confused. 6. The ability of the protagonist. There is no system, no plug-ins, the protagonist is a modern ordinary person, who is like a god coming to the world in ancient times. He knows everything, and seems to have max leadership, etc. To sum up, this book looks a bit weird at the moment. It seems that there are loyal fans in the comment section and this chapter. I just ask the author to keep working hard. It can also be seen that the author has checked some information. However, you still need to think about what kind of book you want to write, which readers you want and how to retain them.

The officials of the Ming Dynasty were the worst among all dynasties, bar none. Zhu Yuanzhang was also the worst among the emperors, on par with Liu Bang, and Zhu Yuanzhang was very brutal in killing officials. Officials of the Ming Dynasty generally did not work for a short time, but the most upright person in winning the country was the Ming Dynasty.

After reading a few chapters about the protagonist opening a medical clinic, my opinion is that if you don't understand, don't write something very professional. If you want to write, check it out, and don't make people feel full of questions... The protagonist only knows that alcohol can sterilize, but does not know that there are requirements for the degree of alcohol; the protagonist purifies alcohol as a way to make money, but in fact, in the Yuan Dynasty, distillation can be used to make wine with a temperature of over 50 degrees, but it is not popular among the people; the protagonist Physiological saline is made by adding salt to water, but this thing also has concentration requirements. Too high or too low a concentration will cause electrolyte imbalance, and edible salt does not only contain sodium chloride. The main character gave a cesarean section to pregnant women, which is the most speechless part for me. In the era without antibiotics, the mortality rate of cesarean section was very high. The woman who had the first recorded cesarean section died 25 days after the operation... And why did the protagonist have a cesarean section? This is not common sense. If you want to be a surgeon, you must at least be a primary surgeon 🤔

A meritorious official who has benefited the country and the people has given an advice. This is not a direct advice, but a remonstration by others. If you don't agree with it, just reject it. Backhand to the woman from Jiaofangsi, do you think the relationship between the emperor and his ministers before the Qing Dynasty was master-slave? The king chooses his ministers, and the ministers choose their king. With such a decree, other ministers dare to serve you? They were forced to resign in large numbers. If you dare to force officials who have done so much to burn incense and build shrines, the common people will point their fingers at you and scold you.

Damn it, if you don't get red even after having sex, you are no longer a bastard. What's going on?

The official eldest son Zhu Biao will still be buried with him when he dies

Screening readers, this author is serious about it. Other authors do it to please their readers. There are many ways to do it, and you are humble and small. And this author shows everyone what it means to stand even if I don't want to eat.

I won't talk about the poisonous points, lest they be deleted, but I just want to say that most of the protagonists who travel to the Zhu Yuanzhang era are either his sons, Zhu Yun✘, or have taken refuge with Zhu Di. For a penny salary, if you give him 10 points of work, he will only ask you to do 20 points of things. When you do 20 points of things, he will doubt whether you are too powerful, whether he can control you, whether you sincerely surrender, and various temptations will come. Lao Zhu's official, even a dog, is not suitable. So, judging from the title, if the protagonist is a salted fish, it can still be watched. But as for the result, all kinds of amplifying tricks are rushed to deliver, which is cheap. How does it match the title?

What do you write about after meeting a woman?

There are no small poisonous points, but there is a major poisonous point in more than 60 chapters. The key is that the author is stubborn and does not listen to advice. Brothers who want to read it are recommended to skip chapters 60 to 70.