Awakening from the Devouring Starry Sky

The logic is a bit contradictory. From the previous chapters, it can be said that the child was poisoned, and the protagonist was in a burning state. However, after finding the detoxifying plant spirit "Lotus Seed", he did not go back to detoxify immediately. Instead, he stayed to fight against the king-level monster and exercise his body skills. I was also drunk. I shouldn't have gone back to detoxify first. Do I come back when I have time? Judging from this behavior, the protagonist is not in a hurry at all, and he is not very concerned about the safety of the child, because he has just broken through the planet level. In theory, it is risky to fight against the planet level 2, and it is not safe to go to the wilderness. Who knows if other monsters or people will come to snatch it. After all, there is another group of people who are also looking for this plant spirit.

I'll be fine if I'm full. What's the use of keeping a mystery about one's life experience? The strongest person on Earth is Hong, and those Alliance families are nothing in terms of resources. Shamelessly asking a strong person to help the family even though they have nothing to do, they are just dragging their feet. If you come up with an extraterrestrial life experience, I will obey you. We need resources, we need secrets, we need secrets, we need secrets that can help the protagonist grow quickly, but families like these on Earth are just a burden and have an awkward image.

The earth is trained by the Mountain Rider, and the plot starts with the final say of Hong Lei Shen. Please don't add any background. In China, only Jia Yi is the strongest. Don't say anything about hiding. No matter how strong you are, you can't develop anything online. The earth has been destroyed. Don't say anything, let alone think about any special life. What the Mountain Rider wants is the soul. He can't give you too powerful adventures. So if the author can write about the feelings of protecting the family and the country in the end of the world, it's okay. If you can't write it, contact the universe. As long as you don't deviate from the big setting, no one will care about you.

To summarize some of the problems we have seen so far in this book: The male protagonist has obviously been practicing in the wilderness area for so long, but because he ate a spirit of vegetation, he took off his clothes and took an underwater bath in the wilderness area without any weapons. It was as if he had lost his mind. And you have the spirit of grass and trees, why don't you just eat them all and increase your strength to the limit. You said you want to leave some for your companions and wife to eat. I understand, then you should at least eat it until you can't absorb it. If you leave so much, your strength has not been increased to the limit. If something unexpected happens and the things are lost, it will be a big loss. And why do you have to write about a family? A family on earth will not be of any help to you after you go to the universe. On the contrary, it will add many uncertain factors to you. People in the family cannot beat you, but in order to force you to do certain things, they can take away your children and wife. What should you do at that time? (If it involves the necessary plot later, I didn't say it) And sometimes there are too many swear words, which makes it look funny and unnecessary. And the character of the male protagonist is not very clear. The male protagonist is an orphan. He grew up alone. Now he has a wife and children, so he should be more cautious in doing things. As a result, he challenged a good congressman for a brother. I know he wanted to be angry, but couldn't he wait until he broke through to the planet level before fighting? I have to let the whole world know that I am a God of War and that I can beat planets. Is there any benefit? Let the villains all over the world be afraid of you. If they fail to win over you, they will want to get rid of you. If they can't defeat you, they will target your family, just like Li Wei's parents in the original work. Even if your wife is also a warrior, your son is not. Your son cannot be protected 24 hours a day. There are too many ways to kill the male protagonist's son, such as car accidents, fires, robberies, bombs, so it is better not to be exposed at all and wait until he becomes a planet to seek shelter from Hong or others.

Hammer, in fact, the essence lies in the Earth chapter. I think Earth should be written well. Now that we have entered the universe, it is actually not that important.

After reading more than seventy chapters, the protagonist is like a child. He does whatever comes to his mind without considering the consequences. He cannot withstand any setbacks. His key emotional intelligence is also low, and he has no sense of authority.

I used to like to complain about the Qidian Orphanage when I read books, but now I find that everyone writes about the orphanage and there is indeed a reason for it.

It's really ridiculous. I've written dozens of novels about orphans, but I have to write about parents, siblings, and a foreigner. And then, that's not enough. I want to write about my own child being poisoned at birth. I really don't understand how you can write a cultivation novel more like a romance novel?

The world of Swallowed Starry Sky looks very, very big, but it cannot accommodate the second cultivation system that is separated from the ten principles.

The Earth chapter is not well written and there is nothing interesting about it. I feel that it has no sense of substitution with the original work. Unless you like watching eunuchs, I would prefer to find someone other than Xu Xin to be the heroine on Earth. It doesn't matter if you have a harem or not. It's just that the heroine shouldn't create her own. A harem is better.

You're just kidding, children born from intermarriages within the four divine beast families are born with soul mutations? Do you think there are so many four divine beast families in hell that there is no intermarriage within the clan? It's too ridiculous for you to mass-produce soul mutations of four series. Mass production of Hongmeng controllers, right?

So many big worlds have reached the highest level, and then lost a switch copy and started over, the result is even more like a country bumpkin, abandoning his wife and children and cultivating a lonely life

After looking at the author, the number of works was actually 21, but I found that many of them are still being serialized. . . . I feel like the author should update less and it's hard to maintain.

Skip to the Panlong chapter. Good guy, there are a lot of soul mutations in the family of his descendants, including those in the third and fourth series. You think all of them are Lin Lei. According to what you write, let alone the first-level Hongmeng controller, Qin Yu estimates that there are no places for the third-level Hongmeng controller.

It can be seen that the author wanted to avoid the poisonous spots, and then he changed the map when he couldn't get around it. In the end, he created various new poisonous spots. Generally speaking, he still didn't write his own thing, which is not much different from a large number of fan fiction.

It's a bit uncomfortable to watch 😣 Next year's time travelers still don't know how to find opportunities, and their growth is too slow. They have all been inherited and do not know how to develop in an alien virtual universe, but they have always stayed on earth. Many places are illogical and frustrating.

That's awesome. Those who didn't know better thought you had created an original novel. You are still crowning the king after almost 600 chapters.

It's a pity to build a family with mixed blood. It's a pity to abandon it if it's tasteless. To be honest, strength is the foundation in the Devouring Star Sky. Even if there are plants and trees that will eat the spirit and keep it, Luo Feng can't do it. After all, Luo Feng only stopped after eating it until it is useless. In addition, ordinary families are really not suitable to appear in the Devouring Star Sky because the timeline is too long. If you must create a family, get a peak race bloodline. Come on, like the star beast, there are few family members. No matter how many years it develops, there will be no overcrowding. Otherwise, the protagonist will definitely be cheated to death. One day, the protagonist will become the second Li Yao. Because countless descendants are difficult to manage, it is easy to become scum. When the time comes, there will be a time-traveler who defies heaven and is even more awesome than the protagonist. Maybe the clan will be exterminated directly.

Recommend a new book, (Swallowing the Starry Sky: The Beginning of the Giant of Light), the Great Nirvana Begins, Don't Seize Luo Feng's Opportunity. After reading too many fan works, I felt itchy, so I decided to write one myself.

I always thought that he wrote it in the summer bar, and he became a fool by suppressing the level. The main lines and straight lines were all messed up💀💀💀💀💀

It is recommended to build a virtual universe in the Three Realms of the Wild World, where all the immortals and monsters can access the Internet.

I've read at least 30 fan novels about Swallowing the Starry Sky, and I've never seen you so good at it. You have to start a few chapters to get a base, and you have to write a few chapters to get the money. I still admire you for being able to write 800 chapters.

I look down on the unremitting cultivation of the clones of the Eighteen Yongshu. I want to create my own, eighteen times the strength, and save my life first. I have this eye-catching attitude that the master is inferior to the skill, and it has not been corrected for trillions of years

Recommend a fan novel "The Eternal God Brain of the Swallowing Star Sky" [Single heroine·Ai Chen] The protagonist travels through the Swallowing Star Sky and obtains the Eternal God Brain. The Eternal God Brain can integrate all things and turn into its own clone. It has its own innate abilities and can evolve infinitely! Integrate with computers, gain computing talent, and evolve into the most powerful brain in the universe, capable of performing calculations tens of trillions of times in an instant. Integrate the immortal-class spacecraft of the mechanical race, obtain the talent of mechanical creation, follow the path of mechanical style, and create mechanical treasures that are better than those of mountain riders. Integrate with the Zerg Mother Queen, gain the talent of genetic analysis, and integrate various powerful bloodline genes in the universe to create a perfect divine body. ...................... Zerg: Damn it, how did this human Li Xin create warriors that were so much stronger than my Zerg? Mechanical Tribe: We are the worst off. Originally, we had the most advanced technology in the universe, but now human technology is even stronger than our Mechanical Tribe! Yaozu: Let's not talk about other things first. Why is the gene multiplier of human beings now higher than that of our royal family? Human: We don't know these questions of yours, you can ask him yourself. Each alien tribe: We sent people to ask, but every tribe member who went to ask died and could not even be resurrected! Li Xin: Why didn't I find anyone asking me?

Bring the book "Swallowing the Starry Sky: The Era of Nirvana" to come and visit me. I will give it a thumbs up~ If it offends you, please delete it. If you like to watch the plot of Nirvana, you can watch it~

I would like to recommend my own book, "Swallowing the Starry Sky, Starting with the Weakest Special Life", the beginning of the Prison Clan

The third episode of Earth Chapter is too strong, but the later chapters are better.

This book is very attractive based on the name of the introduction. But the main reason is that the plot is too complicated. It's not easy to write just "devour". And I have to write other things, so it becomes more difficult to write when they are strung together.