Prehistoric Creation

The overall feeling is not very good, it is too vernacular. This is not the way to speak and deal with things in the prehistoric times. It reads very awkwardly.

Don't mind if I talk about the author casually here. The author lacks consideration in many aspects. It's okay to read, but it won't be right after reading it a few times. It's not delicate enough. And how big the heart is, how big the prehistoric times are. You, the author, did it, but it was a bit far-fetched. There was no good transition between the two major events. The author should write in a detailed and appropriate way, rather than being indifferent and having too many supporting roles. It's best to summarize it in two or three sentences, as long as it doesn't affect the main body of the novel. I feel that sometimes the article is very redundant. Why do we have to describe it in detail when we can obviously omit it? Moreover, the description of the characters' personalities and qualities is lacking. I hope the author can improve. We book friends have seen the author's great perseverance and hard work, and I support the author. ❤️

At the beginning, when the protagonist is in the fragments of the Jade Certificate of Creation, the description of the space is only a huge and boundless space, filled with gray air currents, and white light flashing in the sky. So the question is, what is the protagonist's state in space? Is he floating in the air or standing on the ground? If it's floating in the air, why sit cross-legged? Isn't it tiring? If you are standing on the earth, there are no words to describe the earth. It's even more ridiculous for the protagonist to find out that he has become bigger. There is no reference. If he refers to himself, how can he find that he has become bigger? The protagonist went out to look for treasures, and all the "innate spiritual jade" that "jumped out of the ground" and "hidden in the ground were found." It is said that at this time, chaos has not yet opened, and the world has not yet been judged. Where did the earth come from? Pangu was a giant one hundred thousand feet tall. How do you define this one hundred thousand feet? In ancient times, people defined the distance from the extended thumb to the middle finger as chi, and later defined the distance from the wrist to the elbow as chi. Units of length such as dimensions and feet are all defined. The protagonist is a soul traveler. There are no familiar things in the void from his previous life. How to judge the length? Use yourself as a measure? Okay, the horn itself can now become larger or smaller. All in all, there is no reference.

This novel is really bad, the worst I have ever seen. Zhen Yuanzi was born before the First Tribulation of the Long Han Dynasty, Yun Xiao transformed into the Lich clan before the Lich clan appeared, and Kong Xuan and Hong Yun are the most rubbish prehistoric novels in history. I just wrote it before I even understood it.

As soon as she met a good thing, Zhujiao's sister wanted it, but when she refused to give it, she either frowned or frowned, looked unhappy, and couldn't even act coquettishly. When she met monsters at first, she either killed them or ate them. Later, after being persuaded by the protagonist, she just disabled them. The prehistoric era was so chaotic, it was really no different from being dead. As soon as there is a hard investigation, move the protagonist out and let the protagonist clean up. It was really disgusting to watch, and it would be even more disgusting if the actions of some playboys with their names (Shui Bingling, Lingling) matched her.

At the beginning, my brother and sister couldn't bear it anymore

This is a standard white text, and the author doesn't even have any basic common sense.

I just want to ask in which chapter does that Shui Bingling thing die? If you don't die, bye bye

The whole book was ruined by that idiot Ice Spirit

Why do I feel like reading the sea when reading your novels? All novels! ! ! !

Since you can beat Hongjun, why not kill Hongjun to take revenge? At least Hongjun should be forced to swear an oath that Hongjun will not come out if the prehistoric era is not destroyed. Otherwise, what kind of talk about Xiaoyao Xian! ! ! ! There are many books written about lichs in the ancient world. Even if they have the ability, they still see the ancient world shattered. This book in particular is the most disgusting. The female villain was killed by someone. She has the ability to take revenge but does not take revenge. She lives alone and sulks. Isn't the author looking for death?

Ruined by setting up such a disgusting sister

I tasted all kinds of herbs without dying, and finally became the fruit of Hunyuan Dao. Today, I was fortunate to receive the Supreme Divine Book. After reading only four chapters, I ended up dead and the Dao disappeared. The road is vast and vast. The author is an ant.

This is one of the most rubbish ancient novels I have ever read.

Is the Jade Certificate of Creation the ancient Pangu? Only when Pangu opened the sky was broken did the fragments appear! Pangu was not born yet! There are no innate creatures in chaos. Innate creatures only appeared after Pangu opened up the wilderness! !

I really can't see it. What kind of ghost protagonist is this? He unites with the Demon Lord of the West to kill Hongjun first to seize the Taoist disk, and then kills Sanqing, Nuwa, and the West, and turns them into puppets, or kills them. If he doesn't become a saint, no one can think of it, and he will kill everyone above the Daluo realm! After becoming a saint, if you do not follow the Tao, you will create your own human race, and the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors will place the soul seal on you, or you will die! Then we share the Hongmeng Purple Qi, and those who become saints are all our own, so we are afraid of a hammer!

Niubi, it has only been ten thousand years since Pangu opened the world, and there are all living things on the earth. The earliest innate gods have just been conceived. To be alive, you must at least have a lot of energy. I am speechless...

What kind of prehistoric novel is written like an urban romance?

Pindao lacked magic power and was poisoned to death.

Urban literature, pediatric literature. No thanks

No logic, can't stand it, give up the book

The middle part is about conferring the title of god. Is the pig's foot dead? Why is it all rubbish in vernacular? I thought the author was a diamond, but it turned out to be a blank slate...

There are some imperfections in the writing style of this book. Every plot is very attractive. Although there are many characters, they all have their own characteristics and are very vividly described. The atmosphere in the book is also well written. The most important thing is that every time the story reaches the end, it gives people a feeling of a new village. It can be seen that the author has a good idea of ​​how the plot should work.

Come on, author! The author writes about thousands of worlds in his heart, and tells thousands of ideal stories. Although he is fabricating, he is writing about his microscopic understanding of life, life, and the perceptual world. Reading novels is not about the length, but about what you read. Reading novels is no longer about clicking, but about what to express in the grudges and hatreds. Write with your heart, speak with your heart, and tell readers your dreams with your heart.

The first three chapters persuade me to quit. Korean oppa?

Strength persuades you to quit, this book is really a piece of cake.

I used to have a lot of comments, but now I have over a hundred comments.

Good guy, a 13-year-old book!

I read three and a half chapters. I really can't stand it any longer. The jade dish created by the unopened sky has been broken into pieces. Innate things have appeared, and they are all over the earth. So what exactly did Pangu open?

This is the first time I have seen a novel with such unanimous reviews, all of them are criticizing and no one is praising it.