I Can Gain Experience Points in Genshin Impact

The ancient kingdom of Kanria calls the ruins guards cultivators, which is actually a rather cruel name, because in the eyes of these people, these guards are used to open up territory, and they have a reputation as "the land is not plowed with farm tools, but fought for with blood and flesh." The author can take a look, I don't want to argue with you, but there are not many Genshin Impact fans, and I hope it can be better

There are more than 100 chapters in Mao Xian's Stallion story, and so far I have only had to give artificial respiration to Little Amy because of suffocation. If it weren't for the good impression there, I would have doubted whether the male protagonist was a eunuch.

The sauce is here, along with salty tofu puffs, fried dough sticks, hot fried dumplings with scallion and mutton buns just out of the pan. I strongly support the great book, yeah yeah!

It can be regarded as making up for the regrets in the game.

I dare say that your next book is well-designed, but I would like to give you a small suggestion, lest your writing skills get better and you start to pursue too much depth when writing fan fiction. Fan fiction does not need too much depth, it needs to be popular, because the people who fan fiction attracts the most are players and fans, and the rest are those who don't understand. Bai, if you write too deeply, players and fans may not necessarily buy it because they have their own ideas, but novices will not understand it and will be confused. The fandom space is very small, but there is always an audience, and originality relies entirely on writing, which requires talent. Having said so much, I hope you will have a good ending and will not be disturbed by the comment area.

I have read a lot of original God novels from Qidian, and the quality is uneven. Let me talk about the characteristics of most of the original God novels: First, the chapters are self-explanatory. Most of the three golden chapters at the beginning of the article will encounter the female character calling her wife and so on. When Zhongli encounters Zhongli, he directly breaks people's privacy and preaches his own opinions. It is very brainless and there are countless similar plots; The second is the writing style. In most articles, the protagonist's personality is off-kilter, the language is frivolous, and the speech is average. The male and female characters in the game plot repeatedly tease the players in real life and give them distorted names. In reality, such characters are annoying. If they have no strength, they will only be crushed to death by the plot characters. This is also one of the objectionable aspects of most original sacred texts, which are illogical. Third, the content is superficial. Most of the mainstream Genshin Impact novels have weak worldview construction. Many characters and content appear suddenly, which is incomprehensible to readers who have no foundation in Genshin Impact games. In addition, because most of the authors' writing skills are not good and they lack the ability to construct plot logic, they will basically add some plug-ins that are not suitable for the Genshin Impact world and follow the traveler's main line. The vast majority of readers are lost, and in the end, they write 200,000 to 7.800,000 Words and end dimly. Of course, there are some well-written ones, such as The Incense Bearer, Still the Spear, The Sword Master, Inazuma's Daily Monsters, etc., All of which are remarkable. At first glance, they can be seen as articles with a clear outline and logical plot, which the author can learn from. The above are all words from the bottom of my heart. I hope the author can take the essence and discard the dross, and strive to write it well without being a eunuch.

Regarding the harem, let me chime in. I hope the protagonist will enter someone else's harem.

My evaluation is, don't listen to what they say about writing about a harem. If the writing is not good enough, it will lead to a dead end. It's better to feel free to write an order or not.

I understand that everyone is commenting on whether this book is a harem novel or not. I didn't explain it to you immediately because I didn't think carefully. This book was already determined before I started writing. It is a harem + daily + upgrade text that focuses on girls gaining favorability and gaining experience points by defeating monsters. However, it is not a book that can guide girls in one go. Although it cannot write about unforgettable love, it will also have a simple process of mutual acquaintance, familiarity, understanding, and emotional development. There will be a little bit of reasonable foreshadowing, and everything that should be there will be there in the future.

I hope it's not a harem, I'm tired of reading harem stories

There are 45 female supporting characters for one male protagonist. Have you really never seen a woman?

The second picture, panel painting

Why does the protagonist always want to return to Earth? If you like the earth so much, what is the reason for the protagonist to travel through time? Could it be that the purpose of traveling through time travel is to go back? What's the point of traveling back through time? If you become stronger and return to Earth to show off? Since the protagonist knows that he is traveling through a game world, is there really an earth in the starry sky of this game world? Or to return to Earth, what is needed is to break the dimensional wall.

I don't quite understand why Liyue's identity must be lied about. Liyue and Mondstadt have not cut off contact. If you want to check, you can just send a letter to Yuehai Pavilion. Could it be that this kind of behavior is very clever in the eyes of the protagonist? Teyvat's environment is as leaky as a sieve. It is better to just say that you have lost your memory than to fake a fake identity. I can't understand this kind of clever thinking that treats others as fools.

I read a comment saying that the stragglers should be written to death. In fact, if I really want to write him to death, I think the young master is ranked N01. The role of the young master is really disgusting, but a bunch of idiots regard him as their husband and dare not criticize him. The young master's character cannot be washed away from the moment he releases the Demon God of the Whirlpool. If Liyue cannot be defended, countless people will die. The young master will do whatever it takes to achieve his goals, and he regards human life as nothing. Although he managed to hold on in the end without much sacrifice, this was not a reason to whitewash the young master. Just like the devil's attempt to massacre the city, is it difficult to say that he is not a devil?

Hope is a harem, my evaluation of this book is a must-fire

Author, I hope you can write down the birth of the skirmisher. Speaking of this, I feel angry. The grass god I worked so hard to save is tied to a birth. Damn it, why? He killed countless people? Why is he a war criminal? Or is it because he has a so-called tragic past? I hope the author will seriously consider my suggestion. I have ordered all chapters 1 to 300 of your book. If you can write this plot, no matter how bad your subsequent writing is, I will order them all. I hope the author can meet my small request

You are too weak as a character. In the normal timeline, you can already defeat the young master in a one-on-one fight. However, you can't defeat him in a three-on-one three-on-one with the protagonist Ke Qingzheng 😅

The first few chapters got me hooked. When Noelle and I were facing off against the treasure thief group, I felt that the maid was just a pendant. She was not like a maid at all. The maid could single-handedly challenge the Rockhelm King and hold off against several ordinary treasure thief groups. With a sword that was several meters long and Noelle's strange strength, it was just a matter of charging and sweeping with a few sweeps. It was just to set off the protagonist. It was so disgusting.

It's boring. In order to highlight the protagonist, they crazily weakened the strength of other characters. Noelle defeated King Qiuqiu in the invitation. He has proof in the Eye of God. They are all outstanding people. As a result, it took a long time to kill a large slime. He couldn't deal with 4 treasure thieves faster than the trash protagonist defeated two treasure thieves. A maid with the Eye of God is not as good as the protagonist, right?

Why do you always substitute game mechanics? What kind of elemental combat skill, Elemental Explosion, has no other abilities except these two skills? Can I just throw a fireball? Are you going to write down elements corresponding to slime immunity later? Are the Seven Gods a joke? How did Thor kill the Thunderbird? Can't beat slime

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I think it's a good write-up, and I've given you a monthly pass, so keep up the good work.

Let me talk about some common sense that I have seen. 1: Wild monsters will not approach the teleportation anchor point or the Seven-Heaven Statue. 2: There is no missile in Teyvat. The missile called the Ruin Heavy Machine in Mondstadt is called a fireball.

The number of words describing Shui's appearance in the early stage was a bit too much, but in the middle I felt that the writing improved and the plot became more enjoyable. In the later stage, the problem of pushing girls in the main line (mainly because it adds one favorability point in a few seconds, and then directly reaches the level, which is too abstract) and the unlimited expansion of combat power is a bit big.

It's tasteless to eat, and it's a pity to throw it away. It's written like a game NPC, and it's fake and not like real people.

૮₍ ¬ ᴗ ¬₎ა The new book hasn't been released yet?

Excellent!

New book is released, the original God system of the full-time mage is disrupted 🤭👍

Isn't this the Genshin Impact's version of Nomoo to Mu😆