Please Open Your Fuyaolu

This author is a capable person. It's a pity that I am proud and arrogant. If you are down-to-earth and calm. The possibility of getting results is very high. Now, it's not possible. Wenqing is not popular these days.

To be honest, I look so tired. I am always fighting. When I go to a place, I don't have to think about something happening. A book should have rushes and slowdowns, but you are so exhausted if you don't go overboard.

The writing is so desperate. Even if there is no sun for several years in modern times, there must be a lot of people. It is amazing that there are so many people left in the book. The key is that everything is fine at ordinary times. The protagonist starts working as soon as he arrives, right?

The fight was so tiring, Pig's Feet calculated A correctly, but A was a weakness deliberately exposed by the villain, and the protagonist guessed that A was a weakness deliberately exposed by the villain, so he used move B, but move B was calculated by the villain again, but move B that the villain calculated was calculated by the protagonist again. Repeated it over and over again two or three times. Are you tired? After calculating it again and again, I feel that the protagonist is very powerful, but it continues to be like this. In this fight, you might as well be simple and neat, and finish it in seconds with a single blow.

The author's creativity is actually very good, but it is really difficult for me to continue reading, mainly for two reasons: 1. The pace is too tight. After reading more than 70 chapters, there are as many as 6 incidents; 2. There are too many similarities between events and battles. For example, the battle process is: balance of power → desperate situation → counterattack. Judging from the feedback from readers, many people have the same idea as me. I hope the author can consider it and write better.

If you want to write about despair, keep writing about despair. Write everything a human being can hope for and then smash it into pieces. For example, trust, love, family affection, justice, and expectations for tomorrow have all been shattered. Let the protagonist go through it all, and then what will the protagonist tell you after experiencing despair?

Can you please not have something happen to you as soon as you arrive in a new place? It would really ruin your life, right? Let the protagonist take a breather. The plot is too compact

It's too difficult. People in this world, wherever the protagonist goes, there is no grass. The protagonist himself is also living a very painful life, often on the verge of death. It's too difficult.

The writing is okay, but a bit fragmented The author underestimated the darkness caused by the absence of the sun, the damage to people's mental health, and the impact on the entire state of society Obviously the darkness and the human heart in the small mountain village at the beginning were okay But the supporting characters I met in the mountain temple later gave me a state of ordinary life, deliberately lowering my intelligence The daughter of an official family has a guard, right, if there is only one, I will I thought I was awesome, but I ended up exercising. That person named Li, no matter how well-protected your family is, you are already halfway out of your home. It is impossible to say that you have not encountered any storms in this dark ecological environment. This kind of mentality and the people around you are not at all like the background in the article. Instead, it is a psychological character portrayal in a normal social environment. It can only be said to be very fragmented. If you don't improve in this aspect, it will be difficult to have a strong sense of involvement.

It's considered a piece of food, but it also has a lot of poisonous points, and it won't be corrected. If you don't have a book, just read it. If you have a book, just read it.

The writing is good, but life is already hell. At least the world of the novel makes people relax, asshole!

It's well written, especially the beginning. It's very attractive to me, but there's no need for all the places where the protagonist passes to die. It feels a bit too much.

Why is this book not popular? I feel like it's well written!

Advantages: full of atmosphere, attractive story Disadvantages: too fast pace, restrained, shallow logic, one-sided characters? (Referring to the female doctor, the second young master who had a better standing just threw it away) Summary: Excellent work.

I came to see the protagonist save the world, not to see the protagonist destroy the world. It's hard for people to watch this. It's okay if some small places are destroyed. All big cities are destroyed? Even if it's a game, if you do it like this, who will play it?

It is already considered an excellent work, at least in this time period, and the writing is no worse than those of great writers.

I thought of it yesterday, and the chapter titles of these recent chapters have a long-lost sense of romance.

Without a monthly income of 6,000＋ I am afraid that the author will fail.

It is recommended that there be another warm snowfall later🐶😎

Is it you who wrote the author's book "Demon Lord Against Fate"? It was too early to give up at that time. The flow of fate and the martial arts you wrote have a very ancient dragon feel. It's a pity.

Damn... Well, if you follow the drama until you have no time to write, then it doesn't matter if you update it every year or every month. What the hell are you just a eunuch? The original setting is that the male protagonist travels into a soul-based game. The fighting scenes are not enough. Playing a few games, fighting a few bosses, and retelling the scenes in which he fights monsters is enough.

Come on, author, I've given you the monthly pass, I hope you don't need tj

No. 1

This book reminds me of Ren Qiuming's "There's Something Wrong with This Assassin". I like to use "and", and I have some personal preferences in the sentence fragmentation in certain places.

Therefore, whether the protagonist is Zhang Lu or Zhang Shuai, the listening and reading function is inexplicable.

Not bad food+, 2 monthly passes

With this little update, do you think brothers have no money?🙂🙂🙂

This book is good, I recommend it to old bookworms!

I voted for you with both monthly votes, come on