I Became a Mythical Creature

Nice! I feel it is easier to understand than Zhulong Zuo. His literary style is too heavy.

Inexplicably, the author's handwriting seems to be trying hard to create "this is a mythical world" for me. In summary, this book is like a child of a beast king. He is only young, but he is destined to be the king. Rather than the myth you wrote, because it didn't give me the feeling of immortality or divine energy.

I feel that something with shortcomings seems to have no divinity. Well, there are no like-minded gods. This is the feeling. The world is so big, how can there not be a single divine comrade? The book "Zhulong" was not written because of human beings and disasters. In this book, I personally think that the protagonist's consciousness and divinity should be written about. There are also like-minded people, Qihuo, I will read it.

Nice! Let's add some elements from Classic of Mountains and Seas, hey 2 monthly passes for you. The Classic of Mountains and Seas The stories of the Alien Beast series are always fascinating

The world of Taixuan is like fairy grass, and when you return to reality, the game instantly becomes a joke.

It's a pity that my monthly vote is gone, what a pity! Can't give it to you

Classic of Mountains and Seas! What a magnificent epic of mountains and seas. It's a pity that so far, I haven't seen many powerful authors who can grasp it. Most of them don't have enough writing skills to master this theme.

I'm really tired of writing about beasts that are both swords and humans...

The jellyfish with a trace of delusion has become a buffoon, and he is not worthy after all, Master.

Gave

Okay, it just so happens that the author of "Zhulong" is on the left, so I'll give you the vote.

What you wrote is a bit deliberately cold and weird.

It's well written (￣▽￣) (coming from the left side of Zhulong). I felt very immersed in it when I read it, and it captured the taste I imagined. (¯ㅂ¯Crimin)

I don't understand. I'm leaving.

How a novel attracts readers is like cooking a dish, with all the flavors and flavors. In the novel, the protagonist's joys, sorrows, emotions, and desires must be written vividly, and the plot must have ups and downs to attract readers. No one likes the ordinary. Looking at the character of the protagonist vertically, he is as calm as a robot, which really makes him quit and leave

Young Master's Enlightened Nine-Hen Staff Technique Shi Mo's lineage alone transmits martial arts, and it is also a necessary method to use the "Demon-Subduing Treasure Staff", which is as important as a thousand pieces. The names of the moves are all derived from the chapter names in "Journey to the West". They are also the prototypes of the three disciples of Xuanzang in "Journey to the West", namely Wukong, Wuneng and Wujing. The name "Nine Marks" may come from the "Jiuxi Scepter", a magic weapon held by Xuanzang. Tricks: Thousands of mountains all over the world are bowed down, Nine Netherworlds and Ten Categories are eliminated, Sumeru Lingji fixes wind demons, Heart Monkey appears holy and destroys all evils, Bajie fights against Liusha River, Nine-Nine Counts are completed and all demons are extinguished, Three Three Elements complete the path and return to the root, Saint Monk blocks the water in the sky at night. Is the author a fellow Taoist?

Is there anyone who gave up on the first chapter like me? I'm curious.

Want a eunuch?

The author's name reminds me of Su Yue Mo Yu in Jiuzhou Piaomiao Lu

How can I put it? There is no big problem with the author's writing style. It may be because he is a newbie. The world view may not be stable. And as for the mythical creatures, the feeling of myth is missing. It only has the feeling of the appearance of myth, but lacks the inner charm of myth |･ω･｀) I hope the author will work hard. I will pay attention to the next book. (¯ㅂ¯Յ) If you have ideas in the future, I hope you can come back and continue writing (ω< )★

It feels a bit like an anime movie from about 10 years ago. Did the author draw lessons from it?