I Just Want to Slack Off, Yet I'm Headed Straight for the Basketball Hall of Fame

I can read basketball stories, but I can't read stories like this where the protagonist tries to lose money but actually makes money. It makes me uncomfortable; it's just not for me.

Author, if your book will have crossovers with the main characters of your other books and delve into the plot, please mention it in the synopsis. Seeing someone who can't even speak English suddenly appear and go abroad to play basketball is really frustrating, like eating a lump of wet food. All the previous subscriptions were wasted.

I clicked in because it was free for a limited time, and despite feeling nauseous, I read up to chapter 275. I thought things would change, but it's still the same old formula. Judging from the synopsis, I doubt it will be changed. I seriously doubt whether the author has ever read this book from the reader's perspective.

Who was in the 2010 free agent market? It couldn't be LeBron James, could it? If they wanted to tank, they certainly wouldn't pick LeBron James. But who else was there in 2010? Someone who was bad back then but became very strong after a trade? I don't remember them? What about 2011? Would they trade their own DeAndre Jordan for draft picks and simultaneously pick Kawhi Leonard and Klay Thompson?

I don't understand why Lu Yuan suddenly appeared. We already have the fictional character Smart; can't we just stick to the historical figures? Adding another fictional one is really jarring. I can't keep reading. If I disappear from the story, please let me know so I can resubscribe.

I gave up. After a barrage of verbal sparring, LeBron James stayed with the Cavaliers for 10 years. Can you believe it? Big Smart and James are two people who have absolutely no connection. James is such a shrewd and profit-driven person, do you think he didn't know the consequences of running away? Why did he run away?

I suggest you stop messing around and just focus on playing basketball. You'll drive the readers away. They're already fed up with Smart's capriciousness. They're very unhappy.

Writing definitely requires talent. I can reread the long-finished "Basketball Ghost" two or three times. I couldn't even get through the first ten chapters of this one... The protagonist's cheat system really doesn't inspire any desire to continue reading.

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The concept is good, but the pacing is a bit slow. I initially thought it would be a business-oriented protagonist, but then he becomes a head coach, which feels cliché. Also, the penalties for losing aren't that big; a few arguments with the referee and the fines can cover the entire season. Team performance isn't that important.