Traveling Between Two Worlds, I Became a Villain with Increased Attributes.

Low emotional intelligence: It's an old routine from a few years ago. I can't stand it by pretending to be a slap in the face with a combo of moves. High emotional intelligence: It has the flavor of the Renaissance and instantly makes me ten years younger.

This book makes me ten years younger

Wearing the skin of time travel, writing about urban pretense and slap in the face

Forcibly pretending to be slapped in the face, once doing weightlifting, and once going to that girls' school to deliver documents. It disgusts me to death. If you don't know how to write, don't write this. The setting is pretty good, but the writing is messy. And buying a motorcycle? If you buy a second motorcycle, don't you just go to Haiqiao? Kawasaki has a top speed of 400 per hour, and you can buy it for more than 3 million for your collection.

A bit renaissance-y.

It takes me right back to my high school days, so awesome

You don't care, it's none of your business. . . You are just a fake husband who gets paid to do things, but you really think of yourself as someone else's brother-in-law. . . If you don't do your own thing, you'll write so many chapters without doing anything useful. . .

It was okay at first, but recently I started to treat illnesses. Are you renaissance? I couldn't bear it, so I slipped away.

Once upon a time, a girl learned to make tomato and egg soup. After the tomatoes were laid, she saw on TV that beef was rich in nutrients, so she cut two taels of beef into it. Then she remembered that the egg yolk mooncakes were delicious, so she added two salted egg yolks. Later, she heard someone else say that the fat-headed fish soup was delicious, so she threw in another fish head to cook. If your book is just about another world, or a school showing off, or a wealthy family, it will be a little awkward but still readable. If you put all the elements together and add the NPC's awkward chat, it will not be readable.

What can I say? If you haven't read novels in the past few years, you can still read this one.

Why does the protagonist, in this situation, just want to stay in the country and have sex? Isn't it more convenient to go abroad?

The ghost house is showing off, it's so embarrassing, the author should change it, I'm really trying to persuade him to quit.

Maybe it's because the protagonist needs to develop in the early stage, so it needs to focus on urban plot, but the contradiction you added is really too poisonous. I want to believe that the plot will get better in the future, but you really can't stand it when you poison Jiang Zi from the beginning. Although the writing is fairly smooth, the plot is not too draggy, and conflicts are consciously created to advance the plot, I just couldn't bear it, so I ran away first. Finally, I wish the author can write better and better.

Sure enough, reading this book can make you young

It's a Renaissance! The author and others are thinking about how to write about new themes. You just go back to the Renaissance.

How to say? If you don't write about four or four families, it's actually okay if you write well. But the problem now is that the Internet is so developed that everyone knows those big groups and rich people. What kind of look does the aristocratic family look like? Your writing like this makes people feel that you are going backwards. The creativity is quite good, and the different world is also quite imaginative, but the positioning of your article is not clear. Basically, I have memorized it, and written dozens of more chapters, which will be used as writing accumulation, and then change to the next article!

Very pretty (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

I can't watch these chapters straight... What about trying to persuade me to quit?