Titan Behemoth: Evolving Since the Cretaceous

Reading mainstream angst novels is exhausting; the protagonist is either being tortured or on their way to being tortured. It lacks the feel of Titans. Titans evolved over hundreds of millions of years, while you? A mere few years? Are you rushing to be reincarnated?

Does the protagonist seem a bit dim-witted? Why does he always have to risk everything? Is he using his protagonist halo just because he's the main character?

The author's concept of toxin immunity is utterly absurd; any creature can poison the protagonist, making it seem like having it or not makes no difference.

Swordfish.

Most monster-themed stories start with different creatures that eventually evolve into the same dragon. Hopefully, the author can write something different.

Every few chapters, the protagonist will inevitably face a life-or-death crisis, and then just at the perfect moment, he will survive.

And let's change the term "family retinue". It originally had a kind of evolutionary feel to it, but then a word commonly used in Western fantasy suddenly popped up, which really broke the immersion. This feeling is really too conflicting. Even if you change it to "pet" or "little brother" or something, it would be better than "family retinue".

It's understandable for the protagonist to collect pets, after all, the main character is still a person, and it's about humans taming dogs. As for the effectiveness of taming, we don't know anything about prehistoric creatures, so let's not talk about that. This is just a case. But you give me a jellyfish collecting followers, which is really jarring.

He's the protagonist, otherwise he'd be dead a million times over. For example, when he was very weak at the beginning, he gave up on ocean evolution (it's explained in the book that he swims very fast) and directly evolved legs to try to go ashore, but he was chased around like a chicken flying through the air. He survived because of the protagonist's power.

That's a bit far-fetched. How could you possibly identify which tussock shark attacked you? They all look pretty much the same, and they don't stay the same forever. By the time you grow up, it might not even be here anymore, or it might have been eaten by another creature, while you're still stuck here thinking about it.