The Senior Is Still Here, So Junior, Please Behave

Shangguan Qi

In the new book issue, there is no follow-up reading or even recommendation. Brothers, please support me more! I really need to keep reading and let the author live on, thank you!

Su Han Su Mei

The first part looks good, but the second part is really hard to describe. I feel like it has completely deviated from the original outline!

How about this little fish?

I'm here to read urban literature. What do you mean by cultivating immortality?

Su Mei Su Han

Fish Young Wei

This book looks okay, but there are still some contents that need to be mentioned. First of all, this book is a system rebirth article related to entertainment, so there will be a very embarrassing content. There is no business war content, and the protagonist does not have much money. This leads to a lot of content in the middle of pretending to be a cup and slap in the face, which feels very old. Secondly, it may be to foreshadow the content of pretending to be a cup and slap in the face, which leads to some content in the book. It's very blunt. When the protagonist and Su Mei go home, I feel that the protagonist's emotional intelligence is a bit low. Grandpa Su's family asks the protagonist if he can play chess. Although the protagonist does not know how to play chess, there is a 50-50 system. You can be humble and say that you know a few things, and then write it in a gentle, cheerful and polite way, so that readers will not be too disgusted when reading the subsequent cup content. It seems to be a matter of course. If the writing is too blunt, it will be a bit uncomfortable to read, but both the description of the emotional line and the description of driving are pretty good in the book, especially the photos at the end of the article are very comfortable to look at, so I would like to give some personal opinions. By the way, although this is an entertainment article, you can actually write some content about business war and opening an entertainment company. However, it depends on whether the author is sure about it. If not, write about entertainment as usual. The content of the book is also good. The second thing is that whether it is the title or the acceptance, it is actually more about writing about feelings. Don't let the protagonist participate in competitions and get cups because of the 55-open system. I remember a book I read a long time ago about being reborn to make a movie or something. After writing it, the protagonist became a protagonist running around participating in various activities and competitions to get cups, and then it collapsed. I hope this book will not be like this.

Sun Yan