Reborn into a Globally Mutated World

If you don't go crazy for loans in 7 days, you will owe a few Dabuliu, and then you will end up picking up garbage everywhere, and your IQ will be worrying.

It starts with heavy rain and mutated creatures, at minus 78 degrees, how many people do you think can survive in the world?

This tentative heroine is a failure! Regardless of whether she is the heroine in the future, a stranger appeared in such a dangerous situation, and it was so weird that it was almost written on his face. The protagonist just let him into the team calmly, and he was approached unpreparedly many times. The author did not position his perspective clearly when writing. The boundary between God's perspective and the protagonist's perspective is blurred. Assuming that the temporary heroine who suddenly appeared is a bad person, the protagonist group has been destroyed by the group because the author knows that she is a good person. , She joined the group inexplicably, as if the protagonist knew he was a good person In fact, not only the heroine, but also many people in the team joined the team inexplicably. The author wanted someone to join the team, and the protagonist believed him inexplicably.

Complaints Sister, do you want to write about half-father and half-mother? Why do you want to write about the relationship between other people and your sister? You want to write like this Can't you set the sister as your biological sister?

Ah, can you change the settings? It's the end of the world, but we still have love and love.

Let's complain. The first chapter describes the protagonist's previous life and directly persuades many people. Anyway, I think the protagonist's brain in the previous life is dead. Don't be reborn. Is it worthy? The past life can be described as miserable, but being miserable does not mean that the brain is bad. Didn't the protagonist simply not grow a brain in the previous life? What's the point of being reborn?

The following are some complaints and I hope the author will take a look at: 1. People with superpowers can be seen everywhere. It is also mentioned that many people with superpowers have awakened in the army. The protagonist is still trying to hide his abilities. Even if the storage function is exposed, many places in the plot will not look like he is tied up. 2. The family relationship was described with great emphasis before, but when Sister Su was seriously injured, because she didn't want to expose her abilities, she left her outside at low temperature, followed the team, and secretly fed her spiritual water. It was ridiculous. As mentioned earlier, she cared about her very much, and almost died. She was also afraid that her teammates would think about other things. It was inexplicable. 3. We have the world's production capacity and have collected a lot of materials, but it is unreasonable to take risks for materials that have no characteristics. We have spiritual water, meat, rice, fruits and other spiritual staple foods, but we also run around for some garbage and import biscuits? Instant noodles? Purified water? And why does the Carrying World keep focusing on depicting animals that need to be delivered? There are hundreds of each type, and some are set to grow very quickly. 4. We don't get together, but we don't have reliable teammates so far, so why don't we write it out at the beginning, and just run around with my sister and the Black King; Gu Ning is okay, but Yu and Qi don't trust each other to push forward. Sister Jiang and Lei saved their lives, but the protagonist still dare not trust them. Lei was a great man in his previous life, but he was written as a 13-year-old boy who couldn't walk when he saw a woman. Why did he write these teammates? I want to form a team, but I don't have the backbone of the team, and I keep mentioning that the protagonist dare not reveal his abilities 5. An inexplicable single female protagonist appears, and the plot arranged when she appears is unreasonable, and she is said to be a tentative single female protagonist; the protagonist who is originally very defensive about others, even his current teammates You don't want to reveal your abilities, but you meet a person with superpowers in the wild. Without knowing what abilities he has, let Sister Su, a person with no special abilities at present, be alone in the same tent, and just use a look to make everyone feel at ease that she can gather information? ? 6. After the book is on the shelf, I have some affection for the character. Suddenly a female character appears, and the author even comes out and says that she is the tentative female protagonist. Which reader can accept this? I originally wanted to develop a relationship with my biological sister, female neighbor, and Sister Jiang who are not related by blood, but ended up with this plot? It would be better to show it from the beginning. 7. What does the author think are the current characteristics of this book? The protagonist has no powers, and his special abilities are not stronger than those with other powers up to the paid stamp. He relies on teammates he doesn't trust yet and doesn't want to let them know his abilities. He goes abroad to buy weapons and displays them, but he fights with fruit knives and fists? Using a saber or a fire ax is more reasonable than writing like this. In a world with self-produced capabilities, there is no need to search for daily necessities, and I don't want to cooperate with other people. So I don't understand what you want to write as a feature, risk? Are you motivated or currently capable? It was a bit unreasonable and I could continue reading it, but after seeing this, I still feel that I still don't have an outline. Do you need to first think clearly about what kind of story you want to express to attract readers?

It would be better if the author's apocalyptic book is released to a female channel. The author is not confident in the male channel's rational thinking and party-oriented thinking and whether it is reasonable or not.

After reading Chapter 29, I just couldn't bear it any longer. I subscribed for one chapter and just wanted to say that your sister's character has persuaded many people to quit. I wanted to curse people after reading it several times, so I only read Chapter 29! Being so taciturn, I almost wanted to curse.

The data is intuitive, the progress is there, keep working hard! That's enough to add another chapter.