A Ruined Hogwarts

Happy, I suddenly found out that there are more votes, so let me vote for one By the way, I want to point out the word count: First of all! ! The book is good to read. Anyone who is passing by a bookstore or a reader who has no bookstore can click in and have a look! ! ! To be honest, I started reading Harry fandom because there were so many regrets in the original work that could not be compensated for that I was extremely surprised every time I thought about it. Of course, even though I said that, as an old bookworm (although I used to be a prostitute for a long time because I was an underage, amen) I saw that the author changed the plot and it was not a good person. I also think the thread is very good and recommends increasing the effort (乐). The plot of this book so far is considered reasonable, but there is one thing I really want to complain about: although the protagonist Owen-chan has a fun-loving style, only a group of friends are aware of it so far, and the professor does not have much plot-related emotions in the fun-filled drama. It feels almost boring, and there is always a feeling of not taking it seriously when facing the threat of Voldemort, but there is no sense of urgency - at present, Lao Deng is going to ascend to immortality early, and No Nose may be resurrected early and come back early and cause trouble in school - the description of the study of magic is somewhat lacking, and it seems that Owen has no motivation. Or is completely unimportant. At least when I look at it, I always feel that there is a lack of urgency that my life may be threatened. However, pure blood is not a reason to sit back and relax. Even if you want to temporarily surrender and work hard, it is a little bit meaningless. Of course, it may also be related to the fact that the plot that has only been written at the beginning of the second year has not much context. It's a bit incoherent, because I am an engineering student with poor language skills, so I don't know if anyone can understand what I want to say after writing such a lot of nonsense or whether I have expressed my thoughts correctly (lucky), but this does not prevent me from saying that this introduction is really unclear (you), and the author's introduction skills need to be improved! PS: (Pile up in advance) If this little bad book review is criticized, maybe it is because I missed the foreshadowing or I didn't read it carefully or there was something wrong with my understanding. Forgive me, it's my first time to write so many words, just spray lightly😿 👍Anyway, the author, please do your best! Will continue to watch! I wish this book will get better and better results! 👍 PS2: I want to see you update hard! Renew! Renew! 😾

To tell the truth, what piqued my interest the most in this book was the crazy spoilers of Fax Machine, the Source of All Evil, which changed the plot. The protagonist walks on the tightrope of the Abyss and uses the Philosopher's Stone to toss Quirrell in a fancy way. Harry enters Slytherin and is tortured all day long and wants to lead his friends to make rapid progress. Voldemort fights with Tom and so on. (There is also the empathy and concern for the fate of the individual characters reflected between the lines, which is something that many non-positive protagonist fanfics lack) But I don't know if it is because I am afraid of spoilers or what. These interesting points are not reflected in the introduction at all. Just reading the introduction, I can't even figure out whether the protagonist is a student, teacher or something else. I am even more confused about what he wants to do or what he does and how it relates to the original character. If the complete synopsis is not spoiler-friendly, then it would be better if the whole synopsis only tells a plot, only throws in a plot, or only conveys a will, without mentioning the content that cannot be covered in one or two hundred chapters.

Let me talk about some of the weak points of this book that I personally feel. The first is the division. This is really a pity. The fantasy division is quite lifeless now. Fans are better off investing in light novels. Even if they are fantasy and urban, it might be a lot better. Secondly, I feel that the introduction is too complicated. Generally, it is best to keep the introduction of novels within 8 lines (introduction on the book details interface). An introduction that is too long cannot highlight the key points and is difficult to attract readers. Probably the above two points are the main weak points. There are no big problems in the plot. Some people don't like to follow the group, but there are also some who like it. The author mainly doesn't know much about the environment of the Qidian platform, but if you write more, you will naturally understand it. I hope the author's books will get better and better.

This introduction. . . I didn't even want to click in to watch it because I was drunk. According to the introduction, the protagonist wants to expose magic to ordinary people!

Three a day, let foreigners know that we Chinese despise novels

I really can't understand the protagonist's brain circuit. Magic is real and he has an inexplicable obsession with magic.

It's good to watch, I hope it doesn't have a female protagonist, the ones that do have a female protagonist are boring. The main character of the magician is so good, and I think it is suitable for props, such as playing cards that can stimulate magic. The Dark Devil's Bodyguard is also pretty cool, almost like a p5. It would be nice to cut it up and make a vest. The greatest magician or fraudster at the end of the century feels quite handsome. It's a pity that only black magic has come to an end.

By the way, is anyone really watching? ?

If you have any suggestions, please share them below, especially regarding poisonous spots. The author himself can't see any toxic points, and there are almost no chapter comments. He can't change it even if he wants to... Save the children😭

Owen

Oh my god, it's so good-looking^ω^. It's very imaginative, but the most important thing is that it's logical. It makes people feel very comfortable and makes them feel that it is indeed the case.

Come on, author, this is really one of the best Harry Potter fanfics I have ever read. It is hard to imagine that it is not popular.

It feels like a pity. It was obviously very well written (in my opinion), but it has become cold after the update was stopped.

It's okay to pick up the corpse, so why was the fanfic posted in the fantasy category in the first place? I feel like it might have done better if it was a light novel.

The author has great potential, but is he a trap? A novel must first have a beginning and an end, and then it will achieve great things. I am surprised that I have never heard the name of this book before, it is at the forefront of HP classification. I look forward to continuing to write and continue to pay attention.

I just watched two of them, and I thought they were pretty good, very nice. This introduction of yours is really a bit bad. There are a lot of them packed into one lump. The introduction still needs to be well written, and it's better to have that kind of eye-catching feeling. To be honest, if I hadn't read the other Hogwarts fanfics and had that recommendation at the end, I wouldn't have been able to find this novel.

Pinch Owen

I realized it was unfinished when I saw it on the shelves. I didn't dare to read it. Why was it so unfinished? Although it has flaws, it looks better than many HP fans!

Don't be a eunuch, brother, keep writing.

Recording every day of missing Irving ... I was touched by my ideas day 64

I can't bear to sentence Owen to death... But I can't force him to pick up a pen and write a book, right? If possible, please remember that at least one of your books has been on my mind waiting to be updated... At least I really like this book... I have written a lot of reading comments intermittently in the memo, including predictions of plot development and so on. I want to post it step by step for everyone to read...

Owen understands what he is thinking. Doesn't he know that black magic is more suitable for him? Nope. But why, from the way he changed the subject and evaded silently when facing Harry's questions in the article, I found out: Even if he does not count the Dark Guard, Owen even rejects and does not recognize the black magic he actively learns. Why do you hate black magic so much? You can openly admit to Harry that you are learning black magic and have been rejected by white magic. Why can't you take a step forward and say bluntly: 'I know that black magic is suitable for me, and I have no regrets or the right to choose again. Now I sincerely regard black magic as the path I want to take' - but Owen has been avoiding this problem. Be wary of black magic and understand: being tricked into distorting part of your kindness, always facing the risk of losing yourself, and often having to carry out "sacrifice your life" experiments over and over again in your mind - oh, the taste of death is much more painful than having your heart cut out... These are all the price of black magic. Owen has to work hard to keep himself from getting lost, which is destined to be a difficult and dangerous road But none of these things prevent Owen from liking black magic! ! Is it possible that he thinks that identifying with black magic and the path he has chosen will lead to further erosion by black magic? But, hasn't Owen already transferred this corruption away through the Black Devil Guard? Why are you still afraid of it? Of course it is necessary to be cautious, but when Owen is talking about black magic, isn't he also studying the black magic that is most likely to distort human nature, is the most powerful and dangerous... Doesn't he understand that people can't be used as wallflowers? What did black magic do wrong? It is just an existence without self-awareness. I, well, I came up with an explanation for myself: I think it is because of the mental defect caused by the black devil guard (the paranoia about the good intentions of a certain part of the heart), and the obsession caused by the fusion of the original pursuit of good in the heart. And Owen himself didn't even realize his stubbornness. Or to put it more simply, once he was bitten by a snake and feared for ten years, Owen was deceived by Voldemort for the first time when he thought that the most fundamental, precious and pure joy of being a magician - the patron saint of cats - was gone. At the time, he didn't feel anything, but as time went by, Owen found that he was becoming less and less like the free-wheeling, happy and leisurely self he had originally been. As he resented Voldemort more and more, he also regretted the pleasure he had lost. Coupled with the influence of the Black Devil Guard to a certain extent, it has directly escalated into an obsession: to return to the kind me. But this "obsession" is only the product of the side effects of black magic, and does not originate from Owen's heart, so most of the effects have not taken effect on Owen. However, Owen was careful about the details. This "obsession" merged into Owen's dissatisfaction with the erosion of the self by black magic, and once again escalated into a hatred of black magic, which led to Owen's avoidance of Harry's questions. …I don't know if it has been explained clearly In short, black magic with side effects has become Owen's power system. Agree with your choice, don't regret it, and move forward.

This book is very good. Why is it a eunuch?

Can you continue writing?😭😭😭😭It's very nice.