The Strongest Dragon in the Era of Beast Control

Let's talk about your feelings after reading Chapter 450: 1. The protagonist's image creation is obviously insufficient. Although it is mentioned that the protagonist wants to become the strongest dragon master, judging from the content of the text, it does not feel that the protagonist has a strong personal belief. He has participated in various secret realms many times, all of which are passive participations. The author forcibly creates various objective conditions for the protagonist to participate in the secret realm, and then every time it must involve an epic or legendary beast contest, it feels like it is completely forcing the drama. Can't normal exploration of secret realms enhance the protagonist's strength? 2. The main line is unclear. Various events lack priority, and the descriptions of important events and general events are all in the same words. As a result, the current feeling after reading this book is that there are too many events, too complicated, and two chapters are needed for insignificant supporting characters, which is a waste of readers' enthusiasm for reading. 3. The article is too watery. Things that can be explained in short words have to be expressed in a few paragraphs. As a result, the content of each chapter promotes the development of the storyline very little, which leads to the slow progress of the overall plot.

I really don't understand why? The writing of the male protagonist is so cowardly and frustrating. I read it and I felt aggrieved. Sometimes the writing is good, and sometimes the writing is like garbage, like shit. You are the author, when will you die? Aren't you the one who has the final say?

When I read the first chapter, I thought it was okay, but the further I read, the more boring I feel. Also, the protagonist's talent is identification and dragon power. It has been a year since he awakened. Why doesn't the protagonist do part-time identification this year? Does he have to be a master of beasts to do part-time work? What are you doing in your sophomore year of high school? There is still potential. The upper limit of the pet beast is not stated. Write these potential levels. Are you sure you don't introduce the upper limit of growth? Then what do you do with this potential?

Saw the latest in two days. To be honest, I was a little discouraged in the early stage. If it weren't for the lack of books, I might have given up on it. Let me talk about a few advantages and disadvantages. The advantage is that the writing is relatively smooth, at least there are no poisonous points, and the setting of the carrot as a hidden boss is quite interesting. As for the shortcomings, first of all, the female supporting characters, emmm, I always feel like I am reading an old book from ten years ago, and to be honest, the so-called beauties are not well described, basically uninteresting, and the plot seems awkward, like the previous apprenticeship bet. The second is that the description of pet beasts in the pet novel is not very good. Except for Carrot and Snake, the following pet beasts feel a bit too strong. Then I would like to give the author a small suggestion. I feel that the order of the article is a bit confusing. To put it simply, the combat power is somewhat out of control. If you plan to go to Invincible Flow, I feel like you can focus on designing some exciting plots to speed up the game, for example, sneak attacks on some seniors. Or just slow down the pace a little and leave some words for the beasts. Now it feels like it's a little bit neither up to par, it's a bit cool but a bit stiff, and some of the villains are a bit too bad, such as the island turtle. There are some descriptions of pet animals, but not much, like the Ragdoll, which feels like a tool man. Moreover, it is no longer interesting to beat some students with excessive combat power. It can be seen that the author is very open, but sometimes if he wants to fully bloom, the leaves may fall everywhere. My personal suggestion is to focus on the key points. Monthly tickets are provided, but I will keep them for a while after that. See you next time.

Let's just call it a fan, it's mainly some weird species and beasts from my imagination. As for what the fanfic is about, it may be a weird germline illustration in the original worldview, it may be early academic garbage in the original worldview, or it may be a carrier for people with ulterior motives to spread filthy knowledge. This depends on the author's subsequent updates.

What happens if I can't buy chapters?

Can you change the routine? First you were questioned, then you were ridiculed, and finally you were slapped in the face by pretending to be cool. This routine has been used from the beginning to now, isn't it annoying?

After seeing the evolution and fate of cats, I can't stand it anymore. First of all, the author's description of the characters' appearance is the kind of marginal description five or even ten years ago, and many women who only appear once or twice have to describe how big they are. It's annoying. Moreover, I was really impressed by your description of the main character surrounded by women. Don't tell me that I forgot about it because I watched it for a long time. I saw it in two days. Secondly, do you have no outline? I don't want to read it when I see it. It's because of your inexplicable adventure and then the inexplicable conflict. What kind of island turtle is this? If you don't add this island turtle going crazy, how can you die? Without adding this paragraph, wouldn't it reflect the preciousness of this thing? Also, please be more careful. If you want to break the admission ranking, you can only describe the fight between the protagonists. Why are you writing about the battles between the supporting characters in such detail? It's three o'clock in the morning. I'm tired of reading this paragraph. I'm sorry for the bad tone.

The author describes less about the character's appearance and more about the character's personality. Your descriptions of the female characters' breasts, faces, lips, and legs are completely unnecessary and even offensive. What age is it now? Even female protagonists are no longer popular in online articles. It is really unnecessary for you to still write these lightly brushed descriptions of women. You show your character more through your words and deeds, which is much more attractive than your third-rate description of appearance. And if you insist on writing about appearance, then I advise you to write less about people and more about animals. To be honest, those of us who read about beast control don't care at all what the person looks like. As long as you write about beast control well and brilliantly, people will read it.

I feel that the transition of the plot is not smooth at all. It is an old problem that when the protagonist is at a very low level, there will always be plots with top characters. For example, when the protagonist is still around the third level, he has already started to meet the legendary beast master and this dragon and that dragon. There is no need to engage in such plots. You can encounter the transformation stage every day during the foundation period. This is not a great thing. The protagonist's luck has been low to a certain extent. If he were not a protagonist, he would have died countless times. , And I can't understand this when the third level meets the eighth level. The third level is around the middle of the fucking Qi training, the fifth level is the perfect Qi training, the sixth level king belongs to foundation building, the seventh level overlord golden elixir, the eighth level legendary Nascent Soul, and the ninth level demigod belongs to the transformation god, I just To use an analogy, how can you encounter the Overlord Legend every time? It's outrageous. No matter how powerful you are at foundation building, it is just foundation building. In the garbage Yuanying, it is still Yuanying. This is just like leveling in the game. If you are level 10 and go to level 50 monsters, isn't that a joke? Occasionally, it's okay to make a transition and show a high-level sense of existence. You are obviously not the one. Nowadays, novels always come up with stories that can withstand the pressure of the strong, which proves that you have a good character. Isn't this a fool's theory? One sentence to describe this kind of person is that one who is ignorant is fearless. It is because you are "ignorant" that you are "fearless". The best book that has been written for so many years is Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. Lao Han really said that when I practice qi, I fight with those who practice qi, and fight with foundation building. How can there be a situation where my Yuanying fights with the transformed god? I don't know whether I respect the strong or not, but I am not as strong as you, so I will stay away from you. How can I be like you? Like this, keep trying, and finally you are invincible, then you can stop eating beef, I can do whatever I want on horseback. If your strength is not good, then you are a fellow Taoist. It is raining heavily, and that mustache tells Old Han to get out. Old Han didn't say any nonsense. His strength is not as good as others. Isn't this normal? As a result, if anyone says this to the protagonist in these books, Daozu will fight with you. I can't understand.

It's funny, isn't it? In Chapter 190, you were attacked by someone and you didn't tell the teacher to take it back and just have fun by yourself? Weird

The early stage of this book is similar to that of a certain Lu's book. However, the protagonist there applied for graduation after entering college for half a semester. After graduation, he has been exploring various secret realms or earning evolutionary resources. In comparison, the one here is inferior. He used a routine from beginning to end and read 450+ chapters. In just two words, I feel really exhausted after reading this.

I just came to see the dragon, but you told me to get a cat?

There is really nothing sinister about it, the writing is very smooth, the plot is not boring, and I can read it in one sitting. Sometimes you can get one or two laughs in the chapters. It's quite humorous and the atmosphere is relaxed. I like it very much. I'm very satisfied with what I've seen so far. Cheers, author!

It's a waste of a dragon talent, just like someone with the awakening talent of the Pokémon Dragon family trains a snake or something else.

Why do all the protagonists become so mean and greedy by the middle of the book? He's always cheating.

The racial levels themselves are already divided into enough categories, and after the high extraordinary levels, there are also subdivisions of the Xuanhuang of Heaven and Earth. It's annoying to look at such a big list, so don't worry about the potential levels of pet beasts. It's really thankless, why bother...

1. Your background is an era when humans and alien beasts compete for supremacy. The plot you describe is similar to that of Pokémon, which makes people feel disconnected. 2. The protagonist is so shy and embarrassed when he meets a girl that he almost gets cancer from embarrassment. 3. Some plots are similar to novels I have read before. Personal thoughts: Dragons do not have to be Eastern dragons, there are also Western dragons (although they are always criticized for being big lizards, but they are still very handsome as mounts), and dinosaurs (can be set to become saints in the flesh). In this way, a system of assisting and controlling the Eastern Dragon, the mage and warrior Western Dragon, and the human shield and Berserker Dinosaur comes out.

When I saw Chapter 224, I didn't understand it. Is the author's attribute restraint based on Pokémon? In Pokémon, the water type restrains the ground and rock types, but since there are five elements in this book, shouldn't the earth restrain the water? Why does Guan Qingxin's water-type arowana have an advantage over the earth-type?

If the author can't write the expression, demeanor, and tone, don't write it. Too much blandness will soon fade away from PTSD. And can we arrange a few positive male characters? They don't all have to be backdrops, clowns, and villains. In an environment where they are all beauties, there is no need to emphasize the beauty of every lady, okay?

Let me tell you what I think is the most uncomfortable thing about this book (just scold me if you don't like it). The main plot is not concentrated and under the condition of this number of updates, it is difficult to have a good reading experience. Evolution took almost a week. Unless I like it, I really can't stick to it, and the reading experience is not very good. It is recommended that if the number of updates is difficult to change, write more pet growth and evolution battles at a faster pace. He is a relaxed and happy beast-controlling style. It doesn't matter if he is an unscientific beast-controlling style and is invincible. You have to have fun. If it is not invincible, it will be cool. You can start him at level 9, but it may not give me a good reading experience. If it has had a bad impact on you, feel free to scold me and express it.

There is one question I have never been able to figure out when reading about beast control: why pure blood must be stronger than mixed blood, and does it have to reflect bloodline? Why can't it be like Digimon, where the types are interoperable and you can develop your own😁

I just read Chapter 29, and the first thing that made me speechless was that every woman was introduced properly, either because she was good-looking, introduced her hands, etc., Or because she had big breasts. Isn't that normal?

The subject matter is very good, and the concept is also very good, but there is a big problem with the definition of combat power. It is a pity that I can't read it in the early and middle stages. Maybe this is the difference with great writers. This book is quite a pity.

This book is quite impressive 😭 The plot is too bad and the pet beasts are well portrayed. It's a shame.

It's strange, it's over a thousand chapters now, but I looked around and didn't see anyone posting pictures, neither before the evolution nor after the evolution.

Asking for the essence Asking for the essence! !

Such a good book, why are there so few discussion posts?

I tweeted, "Who is cultivating immortals when they can control beasts" It is a story about a beast control master traveling through the world of cultivating immortals. If you are interested, you can read it, it is not bad.

It's very well written, keep it up (><)