Hong Kong Variety Show: Cao Dahua Is Undercover by My Side

Ba Guan has been very busy recently. He always lends money to the protagonist before he is killed. It's so miserable!

There are many problems, the first of which is the problem of dialogue. It is too detailed and fragmented, making it difficult to distinguish who said each sentence, and it is out of touch with the description of the scene. There is also the problem of atmosphere rendering. The characters' actions are basically pure action descriptions, which looks very embarrassing. For example, in the chapter about "Brother" when you withdraw your left hand, the description of the action when leaving can be changed to [raise your hand, wave it casually, and say casually: "Thank you for your hard work, so-and-so"]

Why does the protagonist become more and more jerky as he gets around? No matter how small a policeman is, he can fight against the protagonist and imitate Liang Shou to trick his whole family.

It was okay before. The biggest boss of the Hong Kong society suddenly went to jail. I couldn't bear it. Then when Wang Bao appeared on the stage, he went directly to help the police and was speechless. He also made it clear that he wanted to help the police to stop the evil. The contrast between the characters is a bit big. Are Ma Jun's group your relatives? Why was there such a sudden contrast when you were doing all kinds of bad things before? .

I don't quite understand why the author asked the character not to call Big Brother or Big Brother, but Ah Da. What kind of name is this? It's so awkward!

I will wait until the book is exempted before reading it. Is there any legal provision? Can those who have inconsistent quality before and after the novel is put on the shelves be punished?

One thing to say, this protagonist is really awesome. After becoming a big boss, I often go out on the street alone, and no one ever shoots me coldly. Most other protagonists who dare to do this become a 50-50 captain because of cheats, but this one doesn't seem to have that process.

Inexplicably, I went on a trip with a shabby tour group that posted bad news. I had no idea why. People along the way called him a jerk. He had no temper at all. A big shot shamelessly posted bad news. I was confused the whole time.

The water is too much, text version hardcover chasing girls? Shouldn't I just watch the movie? Deleted, goodbye👋🏻

Most of the people who watch Hong Kong TV dramas come here for the cool stories, do you agree or disagree?

The protagonist is seen traveling alone. Don't look at it. If he feels that he has lived enough, he will die, and he will be caught by his opponent and suffer. Rich people hire bodyguards. You, a gangster, don't think you have no enemies, do you? Or no one knows you? Still traveling through time. I don't know what the author was thinking. Others feel that the same people are not safe enough. Does the protagonist feel that he is safe? And the previous protagonist left everyone behind and drove the car alone. Also, a tire punctured somewhere I don't know in the middle of the night. The author feels that the protagonist has no rivals or enemies. Everyone loves him and protects him? In short, I can't stand it anymore. Goodbye!

Guan Xiumei really can't do it! So ugly... She's also a dancer-turned-Mama-san. I would rather have no heroine than this!

The best Hong Kong drama series I have watched so far, one is Feng Chao Huang and the other is Liang Sheng

Can you cut off the fine tongue for me? Either she should stop stammering when writing, because I am one of those who feel uncomfortable listening to the book. You just need to stutter a few times. If you stutter every time, is there anything wrong?

The writing collapsed. The travel writing is confusing at the beginning, and here comes Wang Fengyi, an idiot girl who always wants to help others, and makes a lot of sense.

I'm planning to delete the book. Come to the comment area and take a look. Now I feel free to delete it.

Use a little girl as a treasure! This book is unreadable

The first hundred is okay, but the rest is basically unbearable. They are all written based on movies. I won't say it if it's free, but it feels like a waste of money if you pay.

If you didn't pass the Hong Kong Comprehensive Examination, why do you want to hang out? Just because you traveled through time?

The protagonist has been single and been a monk for many years, but suddenly he has true feelings for Ruby, who was born in Mamasan, and then leads to the plot. This ugly heroine is still a naughty person and does not understand the author's brain circuit.

What makes this book uncomfortable is the dialogue that is in vain and ordinary. It is extremely uncomfortable to read.

There are some plots in the book that really cannot be left out, and the protagonist cannot get involved. If the explanation is vague, there will be no sense of picture, and the overt and covert struggles between the parties will not be reflected. If you skip a few sentences, those who have never seen it will be confused and lose the immersive atmosphere. We can't ask everyone to simply watch the movie and then read the book. Nowadays, it is a popular movie. As the number of words increases, what should I do if it becomes an unpopular movie or a TV series? After watching dozens of episodes of the TV series, even if it is shortened, others will not be able to withstand it. When I wrote the plot, I focused on the portrayal of characters, psychology and behavior, which is also the reason why this book has a better atmosphere. Everyone who can participate in the protagonist will participate, and those who can't will participate. If the plot is blurred, people will not know what the protagonist is doing, as if there is a missing clue, and it would be too reluctant to force it in. Some plots are really unavoidable. I originally wrote 5,600 words, but I just kept 2,000 and passed the plot in one chapter. This book is not only for book lovers who have watched many Hong Kong movies and TV series. There are also many new generations of people reading books, and most of them cannot watch movies or TV series from 10 to 25 years ago. Just like how few people now look at classic animations from 2006 and 2009, the style of painting is wrong. Yesterday, the rhythm was flying. I really had no choice, otherwise it would only get worse. Please understand, writing a book is not easy. I will mark the chapters so those who have seen the movie can skip it, and those who have not seen the movie can take a look. When you get to the paid chapters, just skip them if you haven't read them yet, and just watch the short video explanation.

It's extremely boring. I feel like this book has no main plot, it's just a story about a Hong Kong movie.

Why does it feel messy and not smooth?

The plot of Infernal Affairs is over, but you haven't seen the first chapter of Infernal Affairs yet?

The ending is too rushed. When will there be an extra chapter to highlight Cao Dahua's story?

The plot hasn't changed much, it's exactly the same. Isn't this just water?

Kill your competitor and hook up with your sister-in-law

Does the author plan to write a new book? I've reread this book several times and I'm tired of it! 😁😁😁

"An old man who time-traveled and picked up rags and made a living by making bad movies" [Mental patients have more happiness] A director graduate from his past life accidentally time-traveled into an old man who smelled like sheep and picked up rags. He was arrested for killing people at the beginning. He had a miserable job in variety shows. He was professionally incompetent, and he blackmailed people with group performances. Broadcast begging and exploring ghosts to scare people, crack down on counterfeit goods and sell fake goods, make horror videos to scare people, make short skits to scare people, and make bad movies to extend your life After that, you can travel to infinite planes and other worlds, collect movie materials, and return to reality on the big screen to scare the audience