Secret: Pursuing Audrey at the Beginning

Finally, there is a fanfic that is mysterious and follows Audrey. The author's brushstrokes are very good. I just wish he could be more detailed in his depiction. Don't cut it!

It's okay to earn a million gold pounds from selling books, but if your book costs ten pennies, how much can you sell in a month? In what era were so many people literate? Did you buy table legs or butt wipes?

It's probably impossible to write a mysterious book in this book, so you'd better refer to the book Paradox to write a more enjoyable article.

I don't understand why the protagonist thinks he has not been discovered, and runs into Yangen on his own initiative, disrupting the script. Even 008 can find the protagonist, let alone Adam and Night. You can say that there is a longevity stone to cover it up, but they also know that there is a special person next to "Secret". I think Old Neil's death and Ince's story are inevitable. They are all arranged scripts. What kind of mentality does it take to think that they will not be discovered if they are disrupted. I hope it's more rigorous.

I just like Audrey😍😍😍

Pursuing Audrey is good, but the Mystery fan who created his own path has not survived to finish the book. If you insist on cheating, it is better to write it directly in Mystery Cultivation than to go with the squid setting on the surface and actually tear it all apart. I hope the author can finish the book normally.

I thought she was turning into Audrey at the beginning.

If you think the writing is not good, you can save it so that you can criticize the author. There is no need to cross it out⌓‿⌓

It's a bit difficult to find the family to ask for 10,000 pounds at the beginning... I remember in the original article that when Audrey was underage, her parents would ask her if she spent a little more money.

The idea is good, but when money is gone, you can easily make a million a month and donate 100,000.

Audrey is also considered a top noble. She is worth 400,000 pounds. One million pounds is too outrageous. One million pounds can buy a thousand estates.

Alas, after reading the original version of Secret, I really don't know what to say when reading these fanfics. The finance, the minds of each character, what each force will consider or do, and the logic of each small direction of the event are just round and awkward. Except for the blank original, the others are really too novice.

I've only read about twenty chapters, and I'll give you a rough overview. The writing is good, but the writing is basically random. It belongs purely to the author YY. Writers who want to see the feeling of the original work should make a detour. This book belongs to the curly-haired baboon who wants to regain his health.

I have read more than 20 chapters so far, and I have a few questions: 1. It is Tingen, not Yangen 2. The author's financial data can be divided by 100, so that it can be barely reasonable 3. The author does not need time to write a book, and does not need time and channels to sell books. If he buys a factory, he will get the money directly, right? There are also people who read books. Even if everyone has a copy, at what price can the book be sold for one million in this era? Audrey, a rich woman, can only get 400,000 yuan after breaking up the family, and she is still the favorite daughter of a big banker 4. A Sequence Nine can unconditionally use skills of all sequences and all levels, and she is not afraid of spiritual consumption. It is outrageous to be able to use at least Sequence 6... 5. Just for With a professional identity certificate that can be revealed at any time, you go under the nose of the goddess and twist a sequence 7... You might as well use a faceless man to disguise yourself Finally, I still like the character of Audrey, and it's okay to fall in love at first sight, but I hope I won't do such tricks next time, my head hurts

Rather than mysterious fanfics, I would rather see someone write about someone who uses the mysterious system to make Goldfinger in other worlds, and is a reckless man with the dual paths of tyrant and twilight giant. How cool would it be?

Again, Dickens earns 4,800 pounds a year. I can't praise you for your incredible income. One million pounds = 1 billion. Potatoes don't even make as much as you.

I can't stand this name. It literally means awesome, but when I read it, it feels low.

Writing cool articles also requires writing style that is logical and reasonable; writing fan fiction also requires carefully reading the original work, digging into some parts that were not detailed in the original work, and creating new ones, in order to surprise people. Otherwise, it will be like a novel, like a castle in the air, without any logical support, and it will collapse in an instant.

It is predicted that he will be a eunuch, and there are not many mysterious fans in Qidian who are not eunuchs.

I feel that the psychological age of the protagonist needs to be improved. I always feel a little out of touch. I also don't understand that Secrets always likes to have a sympathetic protagonist. It's not that different from the protagonist in the original work. It's better to watch the original work.

The author can change the amount of money earned from selling the book to less than 100,000, otherwise it will be really a poisonous point. Many new readers may quit after seeing this. Personal suggestion

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Wow, this book is so good