Lord of the Mysteries: From the Start, I Pursue Audrey

Earning a million gold pounds from selling books is fine, but you're selling them for ten pence a book, and you're selling that many in a month? What era are we living in? Are there really that many literate people? Are they buying them to prop up table legs or to wipe their butts?

It's probably impossible to write something with a mysterious or eerie feel in this book. You should probably refer to the book "Paradoxes" and write a lighthearted, enjoyable read instead.

I don't understand why the protagonist, believing he hadn't been discovered, deliberately went into Yangen, disrupting the script. Even 008 could find the protagonist, let alone Adam and Night. You could say it was due to the Immortal Stone's cover, but they also knew there was a special person near "The Mystery."

I just love Audrey Hepburn. 😍😍😍

Pursuing Audrey is fine, but no self-created mystery fanfiction has ever survived to completion. If you're going to force a cheat code, you should just write it as a mystery cultivation story rather than superficially fitting the squid setting but actually tearing it all apart. I hope the author can finish the story normally.

I thought I'd start as Audrey.

If you think it's poorly written, you can bookmark it for future reference and criticism of the author. There's no need to swipe away. ⌓‿⌓

Go up and ask your family for 10,000 pounds. It's a bit hard to break down... I remember in the original story, Audrey was still a minor when her parents would question her about even slightly higher expenses.

The idea is good, but the money is all messed up. People are making millions a month and donating 100,000 all the time.

Sigh, after reading the official version of Mystery of the Unknown Sinners, I really don't know what to say about these fanfics. The finance, the characters' inner thoughts, the actions each faction would consider, the logic of each event's subplot—it all feels forced and awkward. Apart from the blank original piece, the rest are just too simplistic.