American Comics: Starting with Luke the Maker

Do you need to give me a monthly ticket for this comment? I have to say that the existence of the protagonist is like a background board. Serious fighting scenes skip at the speed of light. Whether it is the product of the protagonist or the actions of his subordinates, it only shows that this event happened and "I" participated. Full text What is water cannot be water anymore.

I really admire this author. Although the description of the protagonist Goldfinger at the beginning is detailed, the source of his abilities is not clearly explained. I can search for this later and watch a few popular science videos and that will be fine.                        ！ The background of the light world and the plot of the original work are covered in nearly two chapters. It would be fine if you were a less popular movie, but you wrote Pacific Rim, a popular movie, in such detail, which made it very uncomfortable for me, who doesn't like to skip reading and is just a listener of books! And I don't know what to say about your introduction. When I first saw your introduction, I thought it was a mindless invincible novel. If I hadn't seen it several times when I was looking for a book, I wouldn't have wanted to click in.                                     The writing style of one sentence can be very detailed, but it is too jB watery and a bit out of focus, and the introduction does not really match the content.

It looks good, but there are too few 😆

As long as the protagonist's ability is DNF Apostle, I'll watch it. I used to think that the power of these apostles is quite suitable as a template for the protagonist of the novel, but there are very few of them.

I really like this kind of American comics about starting a company. There may be some inventions whose origins are unknown, but they are useful, as long as there is no mismatch in combat power in the later stage. Come on author

After reading the previous few pictures, for someone like me who doesn't know what Luke the Maker is, the only way to understand the origin of the protagonist Goldfinger is in this book. However, what is written in the book? The writing of Luke is awesome and his talent is very strong. Then we developed a company in five years, and we didn't say what level the company was at. I recruited a team leader who turned traitor, went to a dungeon and wrote more than a dozen chapters, and the first two chapters of the dungeon also introduced the background story of the dungeon. But what I saw after reading these is that the author only said that my protagonist is awesome, so why not write about it? When watching the movie Iron Man, what made him awesome was not the title of playboy or genius scientist as mentioned in the introduction at the beginning of the movie, but the fact that he used a hammer to knock out a suit of armor in a dilapidated cave. This allowed the audience to intuitively understand how awesome he was. The author has written so much, but where does the protagonist show his scientific and technological strength? I have written so much. The first thirty chapters and a dozen chapters have been copied to the copy. In the dozen chapters, some concepts and settings of the book are introduced. However, the concept settings of the book are not very understandable. What technologies the protagonist has that can be used as a trump card and make the readers feel really fucking awesome are not mentioned. What is your primary purpose at Marvel Universe Development? Aren't you thinking about using money to promote technology and arm yourself with technology? It's really like an urban commercial article writing a story about the Marvel universe! You have written so much, not to mention punching Thanos or kicking the Ancient One. At least you write about some technologies that can be used to give readers a better understanding. The protagonist you wrote is so talented, why don't you have any protective technology? The content of the article is scattered, and the main line is not clear. There is a hammer here and there. The setting is novel, the content is too watery, it is tasteless, and it is a pity to abandon it.

Lord of Hyperion, Maker Luke, one of the Twelve Apostles! He was the one who built Silent City, and was eventually tricked to death by his second sister! Poor Becky has no grandpa!

As the Lord of Hyperion, Luke's most important talent for light and darkness is.

The setting of a teenager who is a scientific research genius and runs a company is useless. Goldfinger is dispensable, and you still need this and that to upgrade, which makes it feel like completing a mission, which is boring. He's traveling all over the place... Why go to Pacific Rim... Luke still needs to build a mecha cup?

Why write about Gwen and Peter's daily love life? It has appeared more than once, and the details are very sufficient ~ very sufficient. What the protagonist does not have, but the supporting role does, is it that the protagonist does not deserve it?

The writing becomes more and more complicated and there is no climax at the end. The plot is similar to the few Marvel books I have read before. First, the vampires are used to create immortality elixirs, and then they open a bank with the dimensional demon to lend money. If there is something later about the Wakanda Leopard God not keeping up with the times and having to learn how to lend money, it will basically be considered a plagiarism 😵

The writing is too long-winded. There is no need to talk about one thing over and over again. Pay attention to the key points.

I thought it would have unlimited streaming, but when Pacific came back, it started developing the ninth session! The time-traveling shadows are all gone, so it's time to break up with the ancient Odin. The rhythm is too chaotic. Do you really think that Marvel is just a Thanos?

I regretted subscribing. I thought it was Zhu Tianwen, but ended up traveling into a different world. I kept doing things in Marvel. The appearance rate of the protagonist was not high. The appearance rate of S. H. I. E. L. D. Was higher than that of the protagonist. The plot was bland, so I quit it.

I quite like the overall framework of this novel and the main character's route, but I feel there are a lot of flaws. Please give me some suggestions. First, the author may have subconsciously omitted some content when writing because he was a newcomer, some of which were plot and some of settings. For example, for Black Nightmare, the author spent a long time writing about how to use it, but I didn't even know what Black Nightmare was and what it did. Only after reading the comments did I know it was a setting in DNF. It is impossible for all of your readers to have played dnf, and even if they have, not everyone knows the story and settings in the game. Don't do this sort of screening of readers. In the plot of Iron Overlord, the fighting scenes are too simple. I think it's understandable that I don't include the exclamations and sighs of Tony and the people around him. However, the specific details, such as Tony's response when he sees another person joining the fight, can be written more. For another example, the protagonist and Tony cooperated to enter the energy industry. I only saw the word cooperation. How to cooperate specifically? You provide energy and I provide channels. What is promoted is Tony's Ark Energy or the protagonist's new energy. There is no concept at all. All I know is that they collaborated. There is also the Sky Ladder Plan. When announcing to the outside world, there should always be a rough blueprint, which is to draw a pie. For example, "Stark and Hebron will fully launch the Space Ladder Plan. We expect to build the Sky Ladder a few years ago and how many spacecraft will be launched into the universe." Instead of "We have projects such as the Space Ladder." In fact, it's not much different, but it will be more three-dimensional. From time to time while reading this book, I would have the illusion that I was reading an outline. Second, what I really want to complain about is some of the protagonist's secret behaviors, such as helping Tony find Obaday, then using a trumpet to tell Obaday that Tony found out, and controlling Rokoson's space-based weapons to attack SHIELD's base to cause trouble for Rokoson. I believe that the protagonist's skills can leave no trace, but many times you can be found based on your motive and ability to commit crimes, and why do you appear every time. The protagonist and Tony had just had a conflict with Roxon Oil, and Roxon's space-based weapons inexplicably hit SHIELD's base. Don't you doubt me? And in fact, if you control a space-based weapon to attack a large open space near New York, it will cause great trouble to Roxon. Why attack SHIELD's base. If there is no evidence for the former, the most he can do is pay attention to the protagonist. Even if he knows that the protagonist did it, it will be fine. The latter will definitely get to the bottom of it. Just because you have the motive and ability, they will keep an eye on you. Why bother?

The feeling is still the same as the previous Luke, there is nothing exciting, the plot is not well conceived, and I don't remember whether I read it when I posted it or reposted it again. It just highlights that it fails to grasp the core and is purely superficial.

After reading more than 30 chapters, my final thought is, why do you want to join the Avengers? Obviously you can achieve your pursuit without joining. Also, you, the maker Luke, are so far from the ones in the game. Goodbye👋

To be honest, I quite like this kind of American comics. Not bad in strength, and rich. Like all the Marvel comics, the content about immortals, demons, and fire ninjas is very strange. It's like writing a diary. Today I pretended to be a B in New York and flew around. Then someone called SHIELD invited me to join, and finally I did a mission in SHIELD. A plot like this unfolds. In the capital world, the most important thing is money, followed by power, and then buying some various dimensional equipment for the younger brother to conquer various strange forces and alien tower defense strategies. The boss should play the game for life. Isn't it good to lie down and watch other people's performances

Luke is as weak as a little old man and can rub the Silent City with his hands. Do you still need to go to Pacific Rim to get a mecha?

Half dead, all book friends, please withdraw! Pay attention to this missing author next time

In fact, this book could be renamed "Nick Fury's Daily Life at SHIELD". There is basically no plot about the protagonist and heroine in the back. It is all about the plot of Marvel characters.

There's a side story! ! I feel so uncomfortable when you are stuck.

The writing is good, but can you write faster?