Battle of the Road: Extras

If Xuanhun Daozhang were of this style, it would really make me laugh out of my dreams. With more than seven million words, why am I so short of books? It's obviously written by the same person, but I just don't like it. I hope that the writing style of the next book will still follow the main road. The creativity and subject matter can be changed, but the style should not be changed.

I hope Brother Dao, the next article can write something similar to the cultivation concept system of the Shepherd God, the Tao realm, the realm, and the realm does not need to be so strict. The road to the world is ultimately made by people, but it does not mean that other roads will not work. It just means that this road of sentient beings is a shortcut explored by predecessors. Other roads want to There were too many setbacks and problems, so I took the path of all sentient beings and wrote a story about a normal person who has both losses and gains, and gains wisdom from every experience. It doesn't hurt to grow up faster, but you still need to have many behavioral habits, such as the behavioral habits of a person who has been with you for a long time. Even after this person leaves, you will still subconsciously shout , ask, create a kind of loss and then add Taoist heart. This kind of thing can add a bug similar to Canyu. A world wants to be reborn and wants to save itself, but it is powerless. In the end, the new body faces the past, and the human race is weak, similar to the natives of the mountain and sea world. There is a book called the Lord of Tribulation, and he has a certain understanding of the human heart. These aspects of the writing are really touching, the perfect counterattack against adversity, and the overwhelming feelings. Anyway, I have a low diploma and I can't say much about it, but everyone can roughly understand it based on their thinking. I have read a lot of books. Dao's writing style, understanding, concepts, etc., Are all unique and rare. I also I admire Dao Dao very much. After all, there is no book that has exclusive poems even for the supporting characters. The section about meeting Yuan Zun of Qingyang Palace, as well as the abilities of various realms, and many details are very impressive. The Yuan Ying seals the world, the airway clone of Xiang Xiang, the past and future of mortal transformation, all things go well with the True Yang, and the Supreme Great One. Virtue can only be eternally silent, and the perfect person's near-human ways are both classics. What impressed me the most was the scene where Fan Shen fought with that son or someone else. He wiped out all the past and future in an instant. To the outside world, it was just a punch. In fact, having said so much, I am not afraid of your jokes. I have wanted to write a book myself since I was a child. , I wrote when I was a child, but later dropped out of school. I highly admire literature due to the influence of my family. I have read almost 50 books, most of which are good and meaningful classics. I find that I am far away from reaching the writing diploma level that I want. It is too far away to reach it at the moment. I can only look up to it. I may not be able to achieve it in this life. I did it, but after all, it was my dream since childhood, so I still want to say a few words to Brother Dao without giving up. It doesn't matter if you can't see it. In terms of Dao Dao and Jian Lai, it is a kind of powerless forced self-comfort. It has solved the inner demon. If there is anyone who can read it, thank you very much. After all, it is not gray hair.

His facial features resemble those of Zhang Yan, so say Shen Chong, but that's not too much Customized avatar by myself

Brother Wandao returns to the classic fairy tale

Tai Ming's true cultivation of urinary nature must be realized by oneself!

I want to read Feng Haiyang, the only one in the whole book who has a back-and-forth with Big Eyes.

Didn't I say there are several chapters? Why is it only one?

How many of my friends Xuanhun and Tianren just can't stand it anymore? I really can't read it

The Dao Zheng Zheng has entered the pit, and I am about to finish reading the Xuanhun Dao Chapter. The writing style of The Misguided Person is my personal favorite, especially in the articles about cultivating immortals that do not describe the affairs between men and women and bloody plots. Comparing the two books, the first and middle stages of Dao Zhengfeng are better, while the early stage of Xuanhun Daozhang is a bit foggy, but the more I read in the middle and later stages, the more I feel that the author has a big imagination and strong writing power. Watching Zhang Yu from Dongting to Qingyang and finally to Qingqiong, the logic is clear and the plot is clear. It's reasonable. I personally think that the climax of the Xuanhun Daozhang begins with the destruction of Shangchentian. I'm currently reading about Yuan Xia's activation of the "resurrection cheat" and seeing the characters who died before come back to life in the book. I can only say that I really admire the author's imagination and writing skills. The protagonist of Dao Zhan didn't show much in the later period, but Zhang Yu in Xuanhun was active from the beginning, especially in the various performances against Yuan Xia. Although he still continued the invincible style, as a reader, I just felt happy after reading it. It was the kind of logical refreshing feeling. Looking at the catchy and elegant chapter titles, as well as the rigorous wording and the text without so much vernacular, it was even more enjoyable to read. Compared with many authors today who like to use vernacular words and play all kinds of jokes in the text, I personally don't like this style very much. The writing style of The Misguided Person is exactly what I want. After reading the Xuanhun Dao Zhang, I am going to read the third book of the Atlas of Heaven and Humanity. I hope it can still surprise me.

Why. Wouldn't it be better to come back and write about Xianxia?

Extra! 😍

Let me tell you secretly, there is a new extra chapter in Xuanhun. Free🉐

How can this be considered a new book released separately (laughing and crying)

The extras are free to watch. If you put the starting point behind the original, you will be charged. This is a separate benefit provided by the author.

What the hell are you writing about? Let's not talk about whether the writing is good or not, but let's talk about who is the protagonist? From the moment the protagonist ascends to the cave, there is often no one in sight for dozens of chapters. Finally, the author remembers the protagonist, makes a transition in half a chapter, and then starts to write about the supporting characters in dozens of chapters. I endured two hundred chapters and still looked like this. I couldn't bear it anymore and I deleted it (including all the books by this author, I'm afraid they are all in the style of group portraits). If the rest of the book is just about the protagonist making soy sauce, then what else is there to read? Anyway, I can't accept this type of novel.

Write a side story to explain Canyu's roots.

Yan Changsheng didn't ascend to the Dao in the end. This is bd

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