
Xuanjian: I Am the Sun!
玄鉴:我就是太阳!
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 262k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Eastern Xuanhuan
- Updated
- 5d ago
- Source
- Qidian
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66Monthly votes
987Recommends
21Fans
73Chapters
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The indigenous protagonist, whose background is Tianxia, actually wants to prove the Sun Fruit?
You don't take 🐢 and Dongjun seriously at all, and you want to prove the Sun Fruit without any hesitation. At the very least, you have to rely on 🐢, so you choose Tianxia. Then do you have any great news and achievements that can make Taiyang Guo look at you or even favor you? Besides, both the Sun Fruit and Taiyin Fruit have been picked up by 🐢, so even if you make a move, you won't be able to succeed.
Come on
I like watching doujins, and Xuanjian doujins are better than Muchi Jianying. As long as the revision is not too heavy, just respect the setting. (In Xuanjian, the true king behaves like an underage child. I really can't stand it.) 🙂
Let's talk about the protagonist cultivating the sun. What will he do if he asks for money? The positions of three yin and three yang are difficult. 🐢With the help of the power of "flow of yin and yang", you can control the taiyin when hiding, and you can directly control the sun after appearing in the world. What role will the protagonist seek when the time comes?
The indigenous protagonist wants to get ahead without Gui, it's bitter
In the birth world of Xuanjian, there are no big ones, and even small ones may not be able to get along. Especially if you write an indigenous protagonist and cultivate the sun, you will simply go to jail. If you write about indigenous people, you are likely to have a downward cultivation of thinking. In this book, only the golden elixir has an upward cultivation of thinking, and everything below gold is a downward cultivation. It is impossible to achieve gold by cultivating your thinking downwards, and you will be blocked at both ends. If you write that the protagonist has an upward cultivation of thinking, it will be OOC. If you cultivate your thinking at the bottom of Xuanjian, unless you cultivate some scraps of Taoism, you can cultivate your thinking downwards and be fed into gold, but the protagonist is also the sun of cultivation, which is suffering. Xuanjian's novel makes people despair to the point that if you write a fanfic and write about a time traveler with a charade, readers will only think that your charade is too small, unlike other novels where the entire system is hamstrung. Readers will feel that it is unreasonable to destroy the balance, and it is absolutely impossible.
The start looks a bit weird
Under normal circumstances, if someone bestows the Sun Spirit Art, this family would be a hot potato. No Zifu would provoke them, let alone use them for blood. Occasionally, if someone has short-sighted eyes and shows signs, the local forces will kill them. In the Xuanjian world, when people like Xue Yang go out from Zifu on the mountain, everyone will hide.
It's a lot of nonsense, and it's all about content that can be skipped. Can you write something meaningful? What is the difference between what you write and the kind of mortal cultivating immortality?
Xuanjian colleagues are basically not interesting in the early stage, so hurry up, Xuanjian only looks good when you go to Zifu.
The author can consider these later
I have already cultivated the sun, and I am not allowed to show my sage in front of people at home. I am not cultivating the sun in vain. The rest of the writing has nothing to do with the original work. After reading it for a long time, I feel like I have read the little white novel about cultivating immortals ten years ago.
I'm afraid that the sun is not easy to prove. In order to seek the first ray of truth, those adults will not let the sun be too yin, and the twelve energy fruit positions have their own owners. Runyu may have a chance, it depends on how the author comes around
Even the introduction has typos... Can I still read this novel?
As title
Aboriginal people? Not interesting. What kind of writing power do you dare to write about aborigines? Great masters may not necessarily write well.
If you cultivate the sun, you can only prove the residual position. Sun cultivators are not even good at leaps, or they really have the strength to prove one in vain.
I hope the author can take a look at the following suggestions for the protagonist's spiritual practice.
The only solar power known to the author so far is Shitiantong, which is Fenyang Chai. The author has to compile the remaining four magical powers, and they must all be yang powers. So I wrote a few myself, all with reference to Taiyin, for the author's reference. If the writing is not good, please don't criticize. If the author thinks it is good, please reply. [Yu Yi Chapter] This magical power corresponds to the knot chapter of Taiyin. This magical power is naturally the Yu Yi Immortal of the Sun. This must exist. If you write it, you don't need to be afraid of the turtle's back thorn. [Jingwu Day] This magical power corresponds to the moon of the lake and autumn of the lunar calendar. My thoughts on this magical power are as follows. The first is autumn, which everyone can easily associate with the Mid-Autumn Festival, one of the four ancient festivals in our country. Therefore, this solar magical power will definitely be selected from the four major festivals. It is definitely not appropriate for the Lantern Festival to have a late meaning, so I can only choose the Spring Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival. I think the word "spring" for the Spring Festival is too Jiaomu, so I chose Dragon Boat Festival, and the lake is related to Fushui, and the real fire corresponding to Fushui, I feel that the status of Douxuan Lord is too high, and the sun is unlikely to be related to the real fire. For the strong character of the sun, I chose Gen Tu, which is in the upright position of Tu De, and the one that best embodies the essence of Gen Tu is crystal. It just so happens that the word Jing is composed of three Japanese characters, so I chose the magical power of Jing Wu Ri. Removal of Old Dirty First of all, why did you choose this name? According to the original text, we know that the sun restrains the demonic cultivator, breaks the concealment and escape method, and restrains [Duwei] and [Bingyun]. First of all, from the perspective of restraining the demonic cultivator, which Taoism is the most consistent with demonic cultivation. Yes, it is our [Shangsha]. This [Drinking People's Blood] alone is completely boundless by the demonic way. Not to mention that Wuzhuan Dao also requires various costs and evil methods. However, Dapo hides this. I originally thought it was too much. Yin, but then I thought about it, the Taiyin ritual is a loss of Yin and a lack of Yin. This should be the change of the virtual reality of the jade. This shows that the sun has great restraint on the three ancient wizards. Therefore, I guess there may be a true king of the sun, and his intention is to use It ended the bloody and cruel ancient era and opened a new era of the Three Mysterious Immortals to prove their merits. This also reflects the restraint of the Sun Taoism on the three witches. As for the candidate of this true king, my first guess is Wugui, and the second one is Dongjun.
The writing style is actually quite good. The author doesn't have to write about fan fiction, but he can still make money by writing about mortals cultivating immortality. Your writing style is fine. Talk to other people: First of all, the sense of immersion of the indigenous protagonist is next level. After reading more than 20 chapters, I only know that the protagonist is very talented, but in Xuanjian, the talent is much better, which is not cool. The protagonist's trap needs to be opened a little wider. First of all, it must not be directly seen through by the boss. If you don't state the protagonist's fate in the first chapter, the protagonist can only be a chess piece later on, and cannot be transformed into an upward revision perspective. If you force it to be written, you must design an opportunity for the protagonist, but Xuanjian's opportunities are all hooks, and the further you write, the harder it will be. If you were to report the turtle's thigh, and you set the protagonist to be from Beihai, how would you contact the turtle? It's a pity. I feel that your writing style is quite similar to that of Ji Yue, but if the setting is not good, it is still in vain
Ah
I looked at the first few pictures and they seem to be indigenous people😓
There was a story about this guy before and it was pretty good, but since TJ has changed, the author can't be his trumpet. If so, please leave first as a sign of respect.
The protagonist is too ordinary. His identity is inferior to that of the Crown Prince. He can't feel anything except the sunset at the beginning.
Come on, author, I really want to read the Xuanjian fanfic
Improper details
There can be less content if there is not much content, and the focus should be on the protagonist.
Fen Yang hairpin
When will the protagonist come out? I can't wait to see the overbearing power of the sun. 😍😍😍
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You must persevere, author
It's so cool to have Tianxia at your back
Did the author rewrite it?
There seems to be a similar book, but the author said it wasn't signed so I didn't write it.