Douluo Dalu: Starting by Tricking the Blue Silver Emperor

Bibi Dong, Hu Liena, Qian Renxue, and Qian Daoliu are the four major licking dogs in Wuhun Palace. The high-level officials of Wuhun Palace lick the enemy's high-level officials. If you can win, you'll be lucky! !

I hope Tang Hao and Ah Yin are not both in charge in the end. Maybe I am too evil. Well, it is possible.

However, if the heroine does not have Ah Yin, I suggest you not write too much about it. The more you read, the more uncomfortable you will feel.

Don't start a new book. It's just for reading your imagination. Slow down the pace a bit and don't be too hasty. Write more side content. Adjust the main content, don't update too much, polish it, don't think about digging holes all the time, just take your time.

It's normal that I can't finish writing. The author himself has written in a mess. Whichever cultivation system he chooses to follow, he should mainly write about that one. If he adopts the martial soul system, he should aim at evolving the martial soul to increase his innate soul power and absorb soul blood. The result is that the martial soul is still the same up to now. If it is based on the Qi and blood system, A Yin has already condensed the Qi and blood soul rings, but he threw them away halfway through the research. Anyway, it looks very messy and there is no main thread at all when doing research

How many levels are you at? I don't have any skills. Is it bad to slowly develop my luck in the Wuhun Palace? I have a backer to protect me, but I insist on showing off everywhere, for fear that others will not know my talent. In the Ice and Fire Eyes, I trust others too much. I was stabbed. If it weren't for the protagonist, he would have died a long time ago.

Can you please stop giving me the word count? It has deviated from the main plot. The protagonist's plug-in is a jade disk of good fortune, which can be deduced by luck, but now it feels like all kinds of weird plots are forced to be just for the sake of word count.       ，，cos，，？       ，，100 I know you are laying the groundwork, but it's not too long. It's obvious that there is a very good platform in Wuhun Palace. It can be used to spread the word to the world so that all people without soul power can practice and collect transportation, but they have to run out and wander around. In the words of the older generation, the protagonist is just fooling around all day long and not doing anything serious.

I have seen Chapter 93, and the more I read, the more something is wrong. I thought that A Yin had been banned and could completely restrain his aura. But why did everyone in Wuhun Palace seem to be blind when the protagonist left Wuhun City? Qiandaoliu and Qianxunji didn't react? Even if he didn't react at the time, Wuhundian didn't see the slightest reaction after the protagonist disappeared for so long. 😥 A character who will basically be Qian Renxue's Xiao He in the future is so ignored? And the protagonist also seems inexplicable. Do you believe that Ah Yin can protect you from the possible siege of Haotian Sect? This is not a waste, but stupidity. Not even a protector dares to be so arrogant. I wonder if the talk of luck has confused the protagonist's mind, thinking that he can do anything with his luck, but I don't see the use of this so-called luck other than deduction There are indeed many authors. Just these two chapters were put on the shelf and they were all brought out like this. I doubt if you lost your mind when you wrote this paragraph.

I have to say that a creature like the protagonist is extremely disgusting. It is really disgusting to collect something, be tortured, and harm Dugubo's family. Once the protagonist sees something good, he will be unlucky, and so will others, so this book is meant to disgust people.

It's a bit like Marika's book. I feel that the protagonist is too desperate. The reason why it feels like the author has been suppressing the protagonist's level. It's like the author has lost the watermelon to pick up the sesame seeds and is getting further and further away from the theme.