Immortal Journey

I finally understand why so many readers and authors like to engage in time travel. This native seems really uncomfortable. I can only say that the author's writing style is not suitable for me. I am also an indigenous person, but I don't feel like Han Li!

No time travel, no system, Golden Finger is currently relatively small, it is a traditional mortal flow, and the writing style is also acceptable. The current popularity of this book is not good. As the author of the book said, he did not grasp too much popularity in the early stage. As a result, it is now at the bottom of the book and it is difficult to stand out from the many new books. There are very few authentic Mortals in Qidian, but there are still a group of die-hard Mortals fans. Mortal Stream is difficult to attract people in the early stage, there are not many exciting points, and it is more of a realistic description of the world of immortality in simple language. Personal humble opinion: Mortal style is more realistic. It does not use too many gorgeous words, but only uses plain language to use full imagination. It displays the various skills of the immortal world, alchemy arrays, magic weapons, puppets and other features in a vivid and exquisite way. The relationship between the characters is mainly developed along the vertical main line. If you have the ability, cross the horizontal veins to network the relationship between the characters, so that the characters will be more full. The storyline can be old-fashioned, but it cannot be as plain as water. It needs to have ups and downs. Small adventures can be briefly sketched, while large dungeons need to be conceived and designed in detail to fully demonstrate the intrigues between the old monsters, gradually reaching the climax of the story, and then the massive harvest after the dungeon. The final harvest is the most satisfying. Since Mortal Style tends to be realistic, fighting is also an important part. Don't just come up in a fog and finish it in a few sentences. You must fully show your imagination and how both sides make reasonable use of magic weapons, talismans, puppets, and formations to attack and defend back and forth. Wangyu writes very well in the fighting part, and every move can be integrated into the reader's imagination. Persistence is the key to success. I think that the mortal who forgot his words also signed the contract very late. I hope the author can stick to what you said in your book, and wish you an early turnaround and take-off!

I feel that except for the slow pace of this book, the author's plot is pretty good. Keep up the good work!

There are too many realms, the early stage of foundation building, the middle stage of foundation building, the perfect early stage of foundation building, the peak of early stage of foundation building

Newbie, new book, please give me your support. If you have anything to say, you are welcome to come, thank you!

If there is a female protagonist, I hope she will be a tool. The emotional line is difficult to write, and it will be very toxic if it is not in place.

There are so few good stories about the flow of mortals. It's only Chapter 4 and they poison the streets.

A wave of support, I wish fellow Taoists to attain enlightenment as soon as possible! Recommend yourself, The Taoist heart will last forever, I hope all fellow Taoists can give me some advice!

After reading Chapter 3, I didn't see my parents offering sacrifices to heaven at the beginning, and they were former immortal cultivators. It's a little unexpected in a web novel. Revenge for my parents is a bit like a martial arts novel. In addition, the protagonist's name seems a bit like other novel characters, too popular.

Goldfinger is quite acceptable. I don't like Goldfinger's outrageousness. After all, growing up through hard work is more interesting.

After waiting for a long time, I finally found another orthodox mortal-style work. I like it very much😍

The reason why ordinary people have good grades is because of the real writing. I hope the author will continue to work hard. Don't upgrade too fast, but be realistic. If it is too fast, it will become a cool article. Don't write the villain in a brainless way, otherwise it will be too intellectual.

Isn't the master of the author's protagonist, Brother Yang, Mo Tianxing? There is also an old man named Mo Tianxing in the Fallen Immortal Mountains. Did they have similar names?

After reading more than twenty chapters, I have already learned a little bit about "Get Out". The next step is to use "Drip, Slide, Turn" flexibly 😃

I've read Chapter 11, and all I can say is that I frequently poison myself. See you soon.

I gave up when I saw the beginning of Chapter 19. The glass bottle in the previous chapter was too dramatic and I always felt awkward. Then another very detailed percentage appeared in this chapter, which directly made me feel particularly uncomfortable. This description feels out of place with the larger context of the book. It might be better to change the percentage into a few percent. After all, the background of this book has nothing to do with modern times. It is uncomfortable to read such a modern term suddenly popping up.

The names of the protagonists are so special. They are all Changsheng, Li Changsheng, Wang Changsheng, Zhang Changsheng, Han Changsheng, Liu Changsheng, Zhao Changsheng. Do you dare to be more professional? Assembly line work is nothing more than that.

Author, you feel that this book is too fake in not dealing with the murders. Also, did the protagonist think that the person who killed his father would not investigate his father's relationship? , When he met his grandfather, he never thought that his enemy would also come. The same treatment in this village was too fake.

There was a problem with the initial setting. Since it was a sect of cultivating immortals, it could not use the assessment standards of Jianghu sects. There should also be no previous spots. There is a problem of forcibly adding drama. Moreover, since spiritual roots are the most important in the sect assessment, the first item in the assessment should be spiritual roots, and the more men and women of the right age, the better. This is only logical. It is entirely possible to write that the eighth-level sect wants to recruit disciples nearby, and the son goes home and tells his father, which reminds his father of memories and brings out past events. On the one hand, a pit is buried in advance, so that the story can be advanced reasonably and not abruptly. The first level depends on perseverance, and if one day the spiritual root is not enough, it will die.

"Humanity Continent" is too difficult for newcomers! Please support me.

Why is it displayed before the end? What does this mean, cut?

Come on, it has been collected and evaluated, and I hope to visit again and make progress together.