Konoha: Start with Tom and Jerry

I hope I don't want to become Jiraiya's teacher. Others see Jiraiya being very moved, but I feel disgusting. Hehe, the child of destiny is being led by a group of beasts. Uzumaki Naruto was not around when he lived like a dog. No wonder Tsunade despises Jiraiya. Whatever moved him, Jiraiya only moved himself.

In the world of Tom and Jerry, nothing can be better than them, including the cat's owner. This conceptual species, the starting point is the end point, semi-invincible

You can write about Tom chasing Jerry with a fly swatter and circling Konoha Village. All the houses have holes in them. This is the correct way to open Tom and Jerry.

It can already be imagined that Tom and Jerry are treating Konoha Village as a battlefield, after all, they are tearing down every professional household.

First there was Tom and then there was Heaven, splitting trees with crotch and competing with gods

It's disappointing that Tom and Jerry can talk, but considering the difficulty of writing, it's understandable and the creativity is really good.

These two guys can now hang up Liu Dao and beat them when they play. It should be said that they can hang up Emperor Huang Tian and hammer them. There is no upper limit to their strength in funny animations!

It was okay in the early stage, but I feel like I can't grasp the character's personality as I go on. It's like someone suddenly changed. It's too abrupt.

It looks so weird, I feel like Naruto fandom is not suitable for such purely funny ideas.

I already have a picture in my head, Kaleidoscope Tom and Kaleidoscope Jerry

Jerry is cute, but the mouse is hateful

After reading Chapter 70, the creativity is good, but the writing style needs to be improved. I was attracted by the creativity in the early stage, but as the plot develops, the too bland plot (basically follows the original plot), the OOC characters, and the somewhat stretched writing style all prevent me from reading further. I can only say that it is a pity.

It's okay, it's okay. In the early stage, there was too much "hee hee". The most outrageous thing is that Metkai still said "hehe." But it's still okay. At least you can watch it. You can still watch it in your spare time. But at your pace. It's seven or eight hundred thousand words and it's over. But that's no problem. At least you can watch it. Come on.

Since you're writing about fan fiction, then write it well. It's boring for you to write about Sasuke in the original Boruto's time and space. If you want to write about it, just write about the time and space in the fan world.

Write more funny plots, let Tom and Jerry come up with more funny plots

I also want to see Tom Cat and Jerry Mouse fight in Konoha

It is conceivable that Tom and Jerry turned Konoha Village into a battlefield. After all, they specialized in demolishing households.

Come on, man. I really like the storyline you wrote and look forward to your future updates.

In fact, it's not bad. It would be good to write them one after another according to the plot. Anyway, I have seen more than 80 episodes of the anime, Flower Country, and there it is, but as for the follow-up, I don't know if the follow-up will develop like this. I feel that there is a bit too much foreshadowing here. Let's see if it's me who reads it faster or you who update it faster. I'll continue watching it after you update it to that point.

Asking for more refinement

Come on! You wrote well! I'm optimistic about you!