Draw Cards to Become a Hero in Cyberpunk

I would like to give the author a few comments, personal introduction: 1. I discovered a problem when I saw Leaving the City to Escape the Company. The writing was too messy. I know the author wanted to describe the scene in his mind, but the writing did not have a sense of picture and the writing was not good. I suggest that the scene be described as small as possible. The author cannot grasp the big scene and it is easy to collapse. 2. There are some gaps in the plot, such as biotechnology. When I was reading, experimental question 610 appeared inexplicably, and the following content was also a bit inexplicable. It is recommended that you try to lay down some foreshadowing or clues when writing, and make the article run through, otherwise it will feel inexplicable when reading. 3. When writing supporting characters and villains, it is recommended to write down some characteristics, otherwise there will be too many names and you will not be able to remember them. When this character appears, try to bring his characteristics, such as his own aura or scars or appearance on his face, to leave an impression on the readers 4. I haven't read the following plots yet, but I suggest that I go back to the plot of Edgewalker. The author's writing style is not very good, so some plots are not good-looking and thankless to write. It is better to continue writing about Roman helping his cherished characters escape from their original destiny again and again. 5. You can write more emotional lines. I believe that most readers will be disappointed when they read cyberpunk novels. The Mann team can appear less often, and more plots between Roman and Lucy or Rebecca can be written. This is pretty much the suggestion I made. I will continue to ask questions if I read the book later. I hope the author will continue to update (o^^o)♪

I would like to give the author a few comments, personal introduction: 1. I discovered a problem when I saw Leaving the City to Escape the Company. The writing was too messy. I know the author wanted to describe the scene in his mind, but the writing did not have a sense of picture and the writing was not good. I suggest that the scene be described as small as possible. The author cannot grasp the big scene and it is easy to collapse. 2. There are some gaps in the plot, such as biotechnology. When I was reading, experimental question 610 appeared inexplicably, and the following content was also a bit inexplicable. It is recommended that you try to lay down some foreshadowing or clues when writing, and make the article run through, otherwise it will feel inexplicable when reading. 3. When writing supporting characters and villains, it is recommended to write down some characteristics, otherwise there will be too many names and you will not be able to remember them. When this character appears, try to bring his characteristics, such as his own aura or scars or appearance on his face, to leave an impression on the readers 4. I haven't read the following plots yet, but I suggest that I go back to the plot of Edgewalker. The author's writing style is not very good, so some plots are not good-looking and thankless to write. It is better to continue writing about Roman helping his cherished characters escape from their original destiny again and again. 5. You can write more emotional lines. I believe that most readers will be disappointed when they read cyberpunk novels. The Mann team can appear less often, and more plots between Roman and Lucy or Rebecca can be written. This is pretty much the suggestion I made. I will continue to ask questions if I read the book later. I hope the author will continue to update (o^^o)♪

By the way, can the author add some elements of Titanfall? After all, Titanfall is also related to Apex, or you can smoke Ash and give him a Ronin, etc. I have no other meaning, I just want to see the protagonist - "Titanfall Crush" - Adam Hammer 🤭

Can you use the doomsday stewed egg to give Adam a heavy hammer to destroy the world? No other meaning

Will there be a League of Legends source plan in the future? That world view is similar to this one

With the current trend, is it possible that the protagonist traveled through time a long time ago or that the protagonist is a native who was inserted into the thoughts of people from the old era, was caught by the company/joined the company by himself/founded the company by himself (unlikely), and then formed the source plan by himself/extracted the ideas and created the source plan after being studied. Maybe the protagonist is the leader of the third undercurrent in the Overwatch world and is attacked by them to 2077. Or the protagonist discovers 2077 and hopes to bring the third party forces with him when he travels through time 🙂

Now reading novels Watching Naruto and planting red flags in Naruto Watching One Piece and planting red flags in Pirates Watching Wuxia and planting red flags in Martial Arts Watching Another World and planting red flags in Another World Now watching Cyberpunk and planting red flags I really can't do it, brothers...

Wife cake, heavy hammer cup

A very good novel, but it's a pity that the CP was removed

The protagonist is so hungry that he can't choose what to eat. David doesn't say anything, even Hanako Arasaka is so ugly that he can get in there.

I read about twenty pictures. The protagonist's abilities come from the system. The external excuse for the protagonist's ability is wasteland and biological research and technological transformation. But the problem according to the description in the article is that the protagonist seems to have really stayed there for a period of time and been transformed. But the problem is that there is no performance at all,

The protagonist saved David's mother. He didn't thank the protagonist, nor was he happy. He wrote it like a note.

You will not live if you do something wrong

Power Armor and Titans

Come on, author! There are not many novels related to Watching nowadays 😢

The ending is over, will there be a new cyberpunk one?

What should I say, the previous plot is a bit rushed, and readers who don't know Cyberpunk 2077 and Edgewalker may not be able to relate to it at all ∠( ᐛ ∠)_

It suddenly occurred to me that it would be interesting to add Kamen Rider Amazons

It's really a hodgepodge, with all kinds of chaos thrown in. The important thing is that the characters' backgrounds are not explained at all, and they suddenly come across. The brothers are really big-hearted.

It's no problem if you want a little extra 😌

Got it this time

Hey

Why are they number 32 and number 63 on the new light novel list at the same time? It's outrageous

It's really confusing, and there's really no real sense of whether the protagonist has become stronger or not.

Come on🤗

What about that big cockroach, and the situation Vayne mentioned, why does it feel like the rule confusion that occurs when the low-level world in other novels is upgraded, and the AI ​​awakens?