Naruto: Return to Ancestor Hinata Breaks Through the Ninja World

After getting the turning eye, the plot and writing quickly collapsed. There were a lot of meaningless battles and embarrassing explanations, which made me want to vomit.

Traveling through Hinata's body, ordinary passerby ninjas, or Naruto's body, it is too bland, no violent points, no climax, Uchiha is not the same as the danger of losing his clan, being suppressed by the high-level officials of Konoha, and being plotted by Danzo, all are interesting points.

After reading the comments, I ordered two chapters to read. You, the author, have been writing books for a few years, and you don't avoid the poisonous points at all. I saw the Hinata heroine label coming in, and you ended up giving Hinata to Naruto. What's the difference between this and a cuckold giving away a girl? You tricked someone into killing him, right?

Good guy, after saving the Yondaime couple, the plot is all about Hinata. What's the difference between saving and not saving? What a ridiculous plot, extremely poisonous

Both Neji Raikage's new books are coo It seems that Neji is cursed

After reading Chapter 70, I have to complain It feels like the author knows nothing about the power of the protagonist he wrote! Possessing 100 cards of Chatunara, 5km Byakugan and Jounin Taijutsu, multiple shadow clones, Flying Thunder God Jutsu and advanced ninjutsu from the Book of Sealing. Still the young master of the clan, half of the Yondaime's half-disciple. How do you imagine 100 Jounin turrets that can convey 5km Byakugan? Put 100 A-level Fire Release/Thunder Release or Combination Ninjutsu at once. What's the difference from tailed beasts that can clone and teleport? I'm still afraid of the threats from Orochimaru and Danzo. At 7.8 Years old, I'm stupid enough to be a warrior. Isn't it good to be a legion-style sniper cannon or a teleportation-style bomber? If it doesn't work, just pretend to be Naruto Chatonra's fourth generation. 100 Clone-style Rasengans will do. It feels like such a big thing is not reflected in the protagonist at this stage.

I always feel like I have the courage to run away from this kind of development in other places. I can't stand it anyway. I can't do what Yuan Fei did with your Thousand Hands?

In the third and fourth generations, Hinata turns out to be so hopeless? Hinata wants to learn to be a Flying Thunder God, and the three generations have agreed. How can Danzo and several advisors come out to stop this? Let the protagonist, a 5-year-old child, challenge the 14-year-old Jonin Kakashi? He fucking won

I am a 5-year-old who has low self-esteem because I can't beat the elite Jonin. I will give this book 1 point if I can rate it.

No! ? Have you read the book about Hinata Hanabi's brother's opening? Who will die if this kind of book doesn't die?

When you see the heroine Hinata Hanabi, click to add it to your bookshelf. When you see the comment area, you can remove it in seconds.

When I was 5 years old, I defeated Kakashi (after three wars) MD, the average 99-ryu wouldn't dare to write about it!

I was shocked when I saw the protagonist actually thinking about using his white eyes to see through the mask of the masked man. She is afraid of being investigated. She has "100 calories" at the age of 5, and it seems that she will have to save the Minato couple in the future? After reading so many fan stories, the ones that save the Minato couple are basically bad movies, because the death of the Minato couple almost determines the direction of conflicts in the future. After the rescue, the author either can't write anything, or the rescue is the same as the non-rescue. Minato is like a wooden person who can't do things. Judging from the first few articles, the author's level is not very good. I don't think the author can write anything apart from the original work.

I'm here for the Hinata sisters, you're giving me a yellow hair

In the past five chapters, they were all talking to themselves, asking and answering questions, and there was almost no description of other characters. They were all about the protagonist, the protagonist's psychology, the protagonist's self-questions and answers, the protagonist's self-talk, and the protagonist's natural thoughts. Once the protagonist has this idea, everything around him will happen according to his ideas, and all his wishes will come true.

If you're tired of seeing Konoha's and want a change, Kumogakure Raikage's is pretty good. According to the official setting information, Kumogakure was the only existence that rivaled or even surpassed Konoha militarily and economically before Naruto grew up after the Nine-Tails Rebellion (I will attach the official setting diagram). Moreover, whether you say Raikage is just showing off or hypocritical, under the leadership of Raikage, Kumogakure's degree of unity and advancement is indeed far superior to that of the other four ninja villages, including the strongest Konoha. Kumogakure is indeed a good choice.

To learn to fly the God of Thunder, just fly the God of Thunder, and let the protagonist see other forbidden arts in the Book of Sealings. This is too brainless, and I hesitate to continue reading...

After it was put on the shelf, the writing was a bit stretched... I can feel that the author wanted to spread out the writing, but the spread was unattractive...

What the hell, a 3-year-old beats a 14-year-old Jonin Kakashi

Awesome, in order to make the protagonist more difficult, as the Hokage promised, he immediately regretted it when the person came?

. Seeing the third chapter, The protagonist has a hundred calories of chakra at the age of five, and feels that this is not a genius, inferior to Kakashi, Minato, and the Sannin... (Versailles?) The Sandaime and the Fourth Generation came to visit the family (a few months after the Nine-Tails Rebellion), and the protagonist wants to ascend to the ninja world It's a big stage (revealing information and supporting Konoha) (But with this kind of talent, you shouldn't develop it step by step, and wait for the talent to be realized before making a shining debut) (Not to mention where does the protagonist who stays at home come from, and where does he have the strength and status to make others obey him)

There are so many negative review writers in the comment area, but they don't come out to explain themselves, so they just concentrate on creating garbage?

You can only accept it in the early stage, but you want to read the Sealed Book too much, and you can read several of them, and beat Kakashi. As a ninja, Kakashi is an ANBU at this time. Will the ANBU underestimate the enemy? Although Minato is very correct, it is a bit bad for the author because it completely changed the plot. Minato became invincible. How did Minato die with the Flying Thunder God?

It was embarrassing at the beginning. Isn't it normal that you can't beat Rizu at the age of five? Then compare it to Kakashi Shisui Itachi, which of these five-year-olds can beat Hizoku? If you think you're not good enough, aren't you kidding me? Otsutsuki might not have been able to beat him when he was five years old. What's going on in your head?

I've been thinking about it this month, and I can't decide on the chapter title after reading it.

The Three Kingdoms I wrote in the past was pretty good, but now no one has read the new books.

Kakashi has the Sharingan. Do you want to see what time it is now? Minato is not dead yet.

If you can't continue writing, stop writing. How long has it been? At one glance, three chapters?

All kinds of pressure, a wealthy family like Hinata is being manipulated like this

There are quite a few poisonous points, and the sealed book can be read casually 😴 Then a few chapters pop up from time to time. The male protagonist is very scared, shivering every day, and feels like he is going to die when he is five years old. He is afraid of Otsutsuki. If you want to be like this, then you can open a plug-in and write the first chapter to get the superhuman bloodline. I am afraid that I have just traveled through time, and it is normal without a plug-in, but you are afraid every day. I really want to slap him, Learn to fly the Thunder God, follow Shisui Kai, and meet Orochimaru on the first mission? ? Then go back to the village