The Cute Girl Has a Thousand Layers of Tricks

I see a lot of people are asking for two female protagonists. I only speculate in Little Fox's stock, but I can't buy it. Those with single female protagonists are here to gather and escort 😏

I still don't want two female protagonists. Although you have hinted that you want both through the male protagonist, I still don't want this to be the result. The templates for Xiao Yu'er and Shen Youchu are already bad, and they all follow this type, but do they really have the writing skills? Character creation is difficult. If you want people to be emotionally involved and truly treat the character as a living person, a true friend requires a sense of realism, and the general dual heroines have already weakened this sense of reality, because we all know that life will not be like this. After all, the character of the novel is too strong. Again, not everyone has the writing skills like Lao Liu, who can make people emotionally invested despite the debuff of a refreshing literary flavor. Only when the characters stand up can the book make people feel more emotional. At that time, the characters are no longer just cold words, but a flesh-and-blood friend to the readers. Of course, if I continue to write in the same way as Shuangwen, I believe this book will still achieve good results, but I hope this book can reach a higher level. I have been reading a lot of books recently, and my emotions have been a bit infected, and I have expressed my feelings. My tone may be a bit presumptuous, so please forgive me for any inappropriate words.

After the college entrance examination, the content of the article has declined a bit compared to before. I personally think that the author should set a main line for the book. Before the college entrance examination, Jiayu worked hard to get rid of rebirth, and he and the fox were separated until they finally got married. The quality of the articles in the early and mid-term is very good, which is inseparable from the promotion of the main line. But now, Jiayu seems to have no goal. The whole text is just for sweetness.

According to my personal reading experience of more than ten years, the author's writing techniques and the content of the work are absolutely excellent. The book uses the adaptation of The Little Prince as a hidden plot and it is so matched with the main plot. I have only read one book in the past. This is also what I personally think is the most amazing content of the book. The author also looks sweet but not greasy when giving out candy. I hope the author can maintain this level and look forward to the day when the author orders thousands of books. (New readers can be more tolerant of new works. After reading Chapter 20, you will find that this is a very good book.)

In fact, the male protagonist died on the day after the college entrance examination because he did too poorly and suffered a cerebral infarction caused by heart disease. The stories in the book were all his fantasies before his death. There were no roses or foxes at all, let alone dishes. After Shen Jiayi finished the exam, she went home directly without even looking at the male protagonist. I heard that she later went to study in the United States and married a wealthy businessman.

It doesn't matter whether it has a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists, but I think based on the author's writing style, it is a pity that there is only a single female protagonist. If Lao Liu had originally had a single female protagonist, it would not have become a hit. After reading it now, I really feel that this book has the potential to become a hit, and I sincerely want to see the author become a hit. After all, digging for gold is fun. Just like Lao Liu at that time, there was a feeling that he was involved.

Author, how do you manage to sleep at such a young age? Hurry up and stay up late to update

Everyone please vote monthly. In addition, I strongly recommend that the author simply revise Chapter 108 and delete one sentence: Your mother is just a fish vendor. Personally, I don't think it was Shen Nianchu who said it, even if he was angry. This sentence caused Shen Nianchu's status or impression to drop significantly in the minds of many people.

Interesting characters, plots you want to read (romantic or non-romantic), including interesting stories from everyone's high school, if you want to include them in this novel, you can leave a message here. (I want to copy a little bit.)

After reading the introduction, why can't the author directly say that Shen is the main line of the plot? The story of Cai and the male protagonist started because of Shen. I will make a bold guess here. Shen represents the relationship between the author and his ex-girlfriend, and their ending is that they can't love each other (here is the author and his ex-girlfriend who can't love each other in reality). The male protagonist keeps reincarnating because the author went through a period of depression after the breakup, and the author has never been able to get out of it, so the male protagonist keeps reincarnating. The appearance of the little fox is the only variable that appears in the male protagonist's continuous reincarnation (the little fox may be the author meeting a girl he likes during the trough, or it may be the author suddenly realizing that life will continue during the trough, and there will be a beautiful love like the little fox ahead.) The male protagonist's indecisiveness is more like the author wanting to get out of the shadow of that relationship, but he is afraid that he will continue to be hurt in a new relationship. Therefore, the male protagonist uses coyness to protect himself, and even though he understands the little fox's feelings, he does not dare to express his feelings. I haven't watched the rest of the plot yet. I guess the changes in Shen's family may be due to the growth of the author and his ex-girlfriend after their relationship broke up. Both of them had immaturity, but they have missed it as they grew up, so everything is in the past