Data Cultivation, I Observe Immortality in the Five Elements

You are really stupid. In just two sentences of dialogue, you listed a lot of sects' geniuses, no less than 7 geniuses in one chapter.

I have read about ten chapters. According to my experience as a bookworm for ten years, the reason why this book is not popular is that it is a bit strange at the beginning. As the saying goes, a starting point book must have a story and writing. The story is the three golden chapters. Although it can be seen that the author wanted to write a plot about the world in the past, the protagonist's character is not prominent enough, okay? Fanxiu? Invincible? Black belly? It is very important to label characters, which is equivalent to telling readers about their family background, and I remember how many sentences did the author mention in one chapter? If you want to follow any genre, write the protagonist in the genre's way, instead of telling readers what kind of popular novel this is. What makes me a little disgusted is that the time span at the beginning is too big. In Xiuxianwen, you only have about ten chapters and it will be a year later. A few months later, you will be taking on tasks at the beginning, which makes me feel a deliberately busy feeling.

I have raised 100 chapters 😁 Any brother told me if I can kill him

The book was quite enjoyable to read, but there were too few.

Has the author ever met a woman who asked for a million-dollar gift?

I saw some that were good and some that were bad, and it was my favorite research stream, so I clicked on Chapter 55 and took a look Don't criticize me. When I saw how many spiritual stones are needed for one practice in the middle stage of Qi Refining, spiritual stones are polymers of spiritual energy. An ordinary pill can last for two days of practice. I also thought about converting spiritual energy into spiritual stones and building the foundation of heaven. I knew that the research of this novel was superficial. It was the kind of feeling that I was thinking about the underlying logical conflict Matter transforms into energy. Check it out for yourself. Even if it is a high-level energy like spiritual energy, it is also a spiritual stone. The difference in density between gaseous and liquid states, even if it is spiritual energy, has been marked in so many immortal cultivation novels. The surface form of the Qi Refining Foundation Pill's mana is like this. The quality difference is not small And I want to convert spiritual energy into spiritual stones, so as to study the foundation of heaven's way. In one sentence, I branded the practice background of that world as all unwise people. I am very curious, who preached the truth in the ancient times? Many cultivation novels will have new methods and differences between ancient methods, so there are several stages of research, which is a big change, and various related systems are updated. (In this novel, the environment of the world has not changed from ancient times to the present. I didn't say it, but where did the initial exercises come from? Who studied the civilization that later developed to its peak? Didn't these big guys understand the underlying logic? That is the essence of cultivation)

There are too many things to learn, and it's very complicated. It's a common problem in novels these days. You need to learn all the four side jobs of cultivating immortals. Why don't you know all about them? You need to know all the magic, five elements, thunder, wind and ice. The kendo body also needs to be practiced. I won't talk about anything else. There are so many things that are of little use.

I feel that your research must have data. This chip analyzes the data. There is nothing to base it on, so you analyze it out of thin air.

Writing a novel is not like writing a thesis in college or a lab. The novel needs to have a selling point, a plot, and enough appeal. What do you want to do with the numerous settings in each chapter? Write a lab report? It's not that I think the pace is slow, but the novel is dry and full of nonsense about the setting and the author. What on earth do you want us to see? Does it depend on your background settings and biome settings for the world of cultivating immortals? If you write like this, no one will have the patience to read this stuff. In fact, the author's creativity is good and his writing style is decent. There's nothing wrong with me except that I can't write novels.

This is a biological analysis chip, not a skill simulator?

You can learn the five colors of divine light by practicing Qi... Kong Xuan: Who am I, where am I, and what am I doing?

The elders of the sect asked the demon sect to curse their juniors to death, and then a demon sect could blatantly cast a curse in the home of an orthodox sect. Are all the elders of the sect dead? It's called experience, and you can help others by yourself. The author said that I took a knife to your house and robbed it, and then said that it was to train your reaction ability. What was your reaction?

Constant repetition, verbosity, and the psychological construction of one person in 2,000 words, which can be done in 1-2 hundred words, makes people very depressed.

The chip was originally the golden finger of wizard novels in the past. It relied on the chip to analyze the principles of everything. The highlight was to obtain information and summarize the rules. As a result, when it came to cultivating immortals, the principles were not written much, and the only thing left was to enhance understanding. Also, the chip is very suitable for writing Gou Dao. The protagonist must be written as something to fight for. It is almost the same as a genius protagonist, and the effectiveness of the golden finger is not fully utilized.

The plot setting, writing style, etc., Are generally good. It is just a little repetitive (part of the plot). Those who like to read this kind of novel are basically old bookworms. Many things do not need you to explain repeatedly

The writing at the end is too verbose, and the high-level monks are too cheap. Just because you have the potential to be funny, I have never heard of you being armed with a weapon and intent on killing yourself. Also, it's too difficult for high-level monks to kill a low-level monk. It's unreasonable to have all the cultivation that took hundreds of years to happen to a dog.

Chip flow must take the path of combining technology and immortality. Don't write it randomly. The puppet is a robot, the immortal version of artificial intelligence is the way of heaven, the formation runes are the key point, artificially replenishing spiritual roots and replenishing blood, cloning experiments can be done casually, alchemy and weapon refining assembly lines, who will read otherwise.

It's too confusing. After entering the true spirit world, there are too many and complicated settings. The theme is not outstanding and there is no explosive point. There are too many holes dug, it's getting more and more obscure, and I can't stand it anymore.

Able to incorporate 30% expository text and 20% argumentative essay content into the novel. . . Author, you are amazing. .

Scientists in the world of immortality

Goldfinger is a late-game type, but the protagonist has an inexplicable sense of anxiety! Why are you running around with such a low level of cultivation? Shouldn't the primary goal now be to master a skill, and then go out and have fun after reaching a high level of cultivation?

What rubbish is written next? Your plot twist is really disgusting🤢

Is this a mess? Very well written

😅 It was written that the creation of the upper realm started to collapse.

I see that there are more than 200 chapters to be updated. I can't stand it anymore! It feels like the author is writing an official novel wearing a vest of cultivating immortality! If you are afraid of censorship, just write about foreign countries or leave it blank! I feel that the author has been balancing personal power and system power when writing about cultivating immortality! But this is actually a bit contradictory! If personal power is stronger than the power of the system. Then the power of the system will serve around personal power. On the contrary, resolutely! Want to always maintain balance. It looks awkward! Because these two forces are fundamentally opposed! The protagonist in the lower realm is typically outside the system. But in essence it is still within the system! When it comes to the upper realm, it's actually written within the system! The protagonist has no power to break out of the system! Isn't this just official writing?

The plot and writing are okay, but too watery. I could write a few chapters on a small matter, and repeat the same meaning with a few words.

Boss, I have already voted for you with a new monthly vote. I will give you the monthly vote every month in the future. Don't let it go unfinished. As long as you don't waste it, I feel that your book will explode in the future

Old books are no longer being updated, and new books are not being released.

Why is there a eunuch in this book? I feel that the main plot of this book is quite good. Although the author likes to write about one thing from different angles, the plot is passable. Is it because my grades are too bad? Or maybe the author can't continue writing.

Is this the end or the eunuch?