I'm Working Hard Every Day to Get Back to the Past

It's a bit of a downer, especially after I was caught on the train... You can't ignore bullets even if you can't be careful.

The previous writing is quite good, I even think it can compete with I have a Jurassic. As a result, once the female characters appeared, the writing style plummeted. Although the story behind it is dull, it is still watchable, but as soon as it is related to the female characters, it gives people a very strong sense of separation, and it feels like the women in that world are not on the same level as ordinary people. The author is good at using all kinds of gorgeous words to describe women, but is there a possibility? You describe it too much. Each of the women you describe looks like a mysterious woman in the sky, like a fairy falling to the mortal world. However, most of the other people you describe restore the original appearance of that era, which gives me a very strong sense of fragmentation. Let's just say that the words you used are not worthy of the beauty of many anchors nowadays. This protagonist meets someone who is like this, who defeats modern beauty with no makeup. It's like they're not on the same layer, and if it's a video, it's perfect for the meme that your background is too fake.

If you don't play this good game, what the hell is the heroine who suddenly appears? It's boring.

Didn't the person who traveled through time inherit anything from his previous life? There were golden fingers in the 1990s, and they were just freeloaders, and they were really talented. The protagonist's character is a softie in reality, there is no development in the game (Goldfinger), and there is no one who can't use his brain in real games. The protagonist can't stand up and feel good. Forget it, withdraw.

I suggest that you either write that the protagonist is older. You have not written a specific age, but it is revealed between the lines that the protagonist has just entered puberty and is about 13 years old. At this age, the protagonist is given a sex life, and there are a few quirks that I won't go into. I'll just figure it out for myself.

The rest is okay, except that when the protagonist has abilities, ancient martial arts and various extraordinary characters will come out.

In this book, you must forget that you have a brain

Is this a test pen or is it written just for fun... I was blind before I clicked in😫I will kill you directly

I like the genre. It's well written. I've read five or six chapters. Except for the problem of selling eggs through magic, it's pretty good.

The first few chapters were written with great care. A woman came out and wrote it by hand. A few more women came and started writing with their feet.

Starts well, then drops off later

This book is going to be pornographic, I told you.

Write less official ones. I sent the previous ones that had too much.

Sofa, give yourself a sofa

When many authors write about female characters, they make people feel that they are so poisonous that they are not professional writers.

When Sister Hong comes out, the plot is boring! What lies ahead is struggle, having goals, and the refreshing feeling of upgrading and becoming stronger. After meeting Sister Hong, all the focus was on love and daily life, and the previous advantages were gone. Judging from the experience of fighting Zhu Xian, Sister Hong will either go abroad or die.