I Work Hard Every Day After Returning to the Past

It's a bit of a mental lapse, especially after being caught on the train... You can't be too careful and still can't ignore bullets.

The beginning was quite good; I even thought it could rival "A Jurassic Park." But once the female characters appeared, the writing quality plummeted. While the later story was bland, it was still readable, but whenever female characters were involved, it created a strong sense of disconnect, as if the women in that world were on a completely different level from ordinary people.

Why did this female protagonist suddenly appear when we were just playing a perfectly good game? It's so boring.

If you traveled back in time, you didn't inherit anything from your previous life, did you? In the 1990s, someone with a silver spoon in their mouth could become a gigolo; that's truly remarkable. The protagonist is a freeloader in real life, but his game (with his cheat ability) doesn't progress. It's unbelievable that he doesn't use his brain in either reality or the game. The main character isn't compelling enough; there's no satisfying moment. Forget it, I'm leaving.

Everything else is fine, except that after the protagonist gains power, ancient martial arts and various supernatural beings start to appear.

I suggest you either make the protagonist older. You haven't specified his age yet, but the text implies he's just entering puberty, around 13 years old. Good grief, giving a protagonist that age sexual activity, and several other problematic points—I won't go into them—you can think about them yourself.

Is this a practice piece or just something I wrote for fun...? Did I click on this because I'm blind? 😫 I might as well just delete this post.

This book requires you to forget you have a brain.

This book is going to be scrapped, I told you.

It started well, but the quality declined later.