I Work Hard Every Day After Returning to the Past

It's a bit of a downer, especially after I was caught on the train... You can't ignore bullets even if you can't be careful.

The previous writing is quite good, I even think it can compete with I have a Jurassic. As a result, once the female characters appeared, the writing style plummeted. Although the story behind it is dull, it is still watchable, but as soon as it is related to the female characters, it gives people a very strong sense of separation, and it feels like the women in that world are not on the same level as ordinary people. The author is good at using all kinds of gorgeous words to describe women, but is there a possibility? You describe it too much. Each of the women you describe looks like a mysterious woman in the sky, like a fairy falling to the mortal world. However, most of the other people you describe restore the original appearance of that era, which gives me a very strong sense of fragmentation. Let's just say that the words you used are not worthy of the beauty of many anchors nowadays. This protagonist meets someone who is like this, who defeats modern beauty with no makeup. It's like they're not on the same layer, and if it's a video, it's perfect for the meme that your background is too fake.

If you don't play this good game, what the hell is the heroine who suddenly appears? It's boring.

Didn't the person who traveled through time inherit anything from his previous life? There were golden fingers in the 1990s, and they were just freeloaders, and they were really talented. The protagonist's character is a softie in reality, there is no development in the game (Goldfinger), and there is no one who can't use his brain in real games. The protagonist can't stand up and feel good. Forget it, withdraw.

The rest is okay, except that when the protagonist has abilities, ancient martial arts and various extraordinary characters will come out.

I suggest that you either write that the protagonist is older. You have not written a specific age, but it is revealed between the lines that the protagonist has just entered puberty and is about 13 years old. At this age, the protagonist is given a sex life, and there are a few quirks that I won't go into. I'll just figure it out for myself.

Is this a test pen or is it written just for fun... I was blind before I clicked in😫I will kill you directly

In this book, you must forget that you have a brain

This book is going to be pornographic, I told you.

Starts well, then drops off later