Immortality Chart

I feel like this book collapsed again. I really like the author's book. It has a brisk pace and is easy to read. But there are more and more poisonous points, and the climax that I finally looked forward to is also a pig belly and a rabbit tail. Plot logic, character creation, golden finger wit. They all lack a lot. And to put it bluntly, the system flows quickly.

Leave my mark while you can still speak😃 Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh

After reading the introduction, I feel that the author still succumbed to the mainstream market. My grades were not good, so I cut them all, and I also had a small goal of 100 million lifespans. It also felt very naive and pandering to so-called readers.

There is no problem with upgrading krypton life, but most of them are written in this way The problem is that life is deducted like running water How many days of life will be deducted by just moving a few times in battle It is outrageous to see other people's life span being deducted for dozens or hundreds of days in battle. This warrior does not carry a medicine jar with him, and it is full of medicine. A single fight will not deduct a year of life. The writing is very exaggerated And the lifespan of the protagonist is deducted so that there is only 0.01 Days left No one really thinks that the protagonist will die, right?

Like me when you pass by, I want to experience the feeling of being liked

Lao Ya's writing style is still average haha, but the story rhythm is very good - the setting of Goldfinger is similar to that of a library, both of which can improve and modify the skills. Then in order to cater to the market, a negative effect is added, which is the upgrade of krypton life, and then a certain level limit is imposed on the protagonist, which is a rather tricky approach. At present, it is similar to a library. It is an upgraded and refreshing article with a relaxed and humorous style. ——I hope this book will get better as it gets written, and I hope it will become more enjoyable as it gets written later, and that it will become a more popular work than the Library of Tiandao.

Several great masters have written longevity style, and it seems that the popular style is to lie down and slow down.

The price is too expensive. Your two chapters are equal to others' two-in-one three chapters.

1001111 Happy marriage for a hundred years+1111 Happy 11th wedding anniversary to Yabai~

I remember the two authors I followed in junior high school, one was you, and the other was an author who wrote about gourmets from another world. During those years, my life was very gloomy. I was bullied by teachers and classmates every day, and I only got through reading your books at night! Grateful!

It's weird to kill the Iron Wall Bear. He's hiding from his family when his lifespan is almost gone. He shouldn't have eaten the bear on the spot. Besides, it's okay to find out that the bear was killed by the protagonist.

It doesn't matter that this routine of worshiping oneself as one's master and taking on one's disciples is not good in the first place. The author also particularly likes to use it. There are too many loopholes. In addition, the biggest shortcoming of the book is that the strategies are not rigorous. Many strategies are full of loopholes and the characters cannot see them.

I don't know what's going on. Nowadays, those great masters don't write novels well. They either pretend to be deep or float to the sky. This is the case for both great masters and minor masters. They can no longer find the feeling of chasing books before, so can't they write well? A book

This protagonist likes to be sneaky for whatever reason, there's no need for it, right?

It was said earlier that the 9 meridians are famous in the mainland. I have ten meridians, OK, but if you open the 9 meridians for your younger brother, I feel that you are harming your younger brother. Other families are not allowed to assassinate him madly. This is difficult to cover up. Even if you cover it up, will you still have a younger brother to use in the future? Will the family still let him out to hang out with the protagonist? All resources are not allowed. Invest in more protection. After all, you yourself said that the current head of the family only has 3.6 Meridians, and the ancestor only has 6 meridians, and he uses his own strength to open the pulses of others. Does that mean that the high meridians can help the low meridians? Does that mean that I can think that the head of the family can help the children of the family to open the pulses if the strength allows? I am very confused about my opinion.

The humble reader asked for an update online, but Lao Ya actually asked him to wait a little longer. He really couldn't wait any longer 😭

What is the use of adding finesse? By the way, my mirror has a fan value of 10,000 😏

Welcome back😁, although there is less, I still have to encourage you😜

It is relatively ordinary. First of all, the son of a clan leader only has 1,000 yuan. One tael of silver is really nonsense. Your younger brothers have more than 10,000, but your patriarch's son only has 1,000?

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---- Is the Picture of Immortality a fragment of the Library of Tiandao (What happened to Zhang Xuan if it is Zhang Xuan) ----- Whether the Five Emperors and the Five Emperors' Kung Fu in the book are directly related to Zhang Xuan. ---- Is the Tide Pavilion related to the Hall of Famed Masters ----- Welcome to discuss the plot together. There are actually many foreshadowings in the book. You can find them and discuss them together.

I read Endless Dantian and Tiandao in other places. I came to Qidian today to read the rest of the book. I have been reading it for a year and a half. It stayed with me throughout junior high school. I saw it at 3 a. M. Every day and I had to go to school the next day, but I really couldn't stop. It took me 14 days to finish Tiandao. It's amazing.

How come there are still people reporting fan value for extra points? Then my Mirror Management Bureau, 9500, invited my junior uncle, 5200, to join in the fun.

What's going on? Why did it suddenly end?

After the college entrance examination, I came back to Laoya

I have read more than 60 chapters so far, and I feel that the writing is quite innovative. The elder's son and the clan leader's son are finally not mortal enemies, but have become the protagonist's younger brother. The family is finally not in a life-or-death situation.

Well, 2 is finally coming out. 1 Was read in the novel column on the Huawei browser homepage. I don't know if the books there are genuine, because they are free. I may have seen pirated books here. I apologize to Lao Ya. For some reasons, I did not replenish my subscription to the Tiandao Library. The main reason is that I am currently ordering Eagle's Star Gate. After ordering Star Gate, I will replenish my subscription to Tiandao. Actually, I really like the book Tiandao Library. It was so enjoyable to watch Zhang Xuan pretending to be cool all the way. This is what a cool novel should be like. I am looking forward to it for 2. I hope that Lao Ya's Tiandao 2 can surpass Tiandao 1 and be collected by the British Museum again. Attached below is a screenshot of Lao Ya's official account to show that I am not fooling you

I think it's very interesting. I don't know why so many people are criticizing this book review. Everyone has their own opinion and everyone has their own feelings. Your comment in this book review really affects the reading experience. If you don't like it, just go away. The main thing is that this book is really okay. It's a pity that the author may have been criticized too much and gave up.

I'm so disappointed. Every book I've read since the library ended because I thought it wasn't well written. I've really wasted my money on reading the original version.

In fact, the picture of longevity is quite good, I laughed out loud in the middle of the night, but the updates are too slow and too short.