Fate Cultivation: I Have Full Level Divination

Look, what should I say! The outline theme is okay, not as fiddly as other books. It's just that the author is not good at emotions, characters, logic, and rhythm. It is too rigid and not delicate. How can I put it... The author should study more books by great masters.

The good thing is that it is well written, but the bad thing is that it is another work that pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger.

I hope that the protagonist will not help the heroine to ask for something in the end. After all, he just wants to be ordinary. To say that he wants to help, it is completely divorced from the original intention.

The protagonist wants to become an immortal, but he is still the prince of the previous dynasty. Marrying the princess of the current dynasty is already unfaithful and unfilial in terms of filial piety, but he also helps the current dynasty stabilize the country. Do you really not care about cause and effect? You borrow someone else's corpse to resurrect him, because his country should have been destroyed. It would be really disgusting if you go to help the Xia Dynasty stabilize its national destiny! ! ! Why would you help your woman if something goes wrong in her country? So why don't you revive someone's long-cherished wish? The previous government didn't care about it, and it shouldn't care about it now either. There needs to be a balance between the two ends. The Xia Dynasty will be destroyed if it should be destroyed, and the world of immortality itself will be ignored. How can the protagonist live a normal life if he participates in it?

The title of this book should not be called Buddhist Cultivation of Immortality. Three days is a big thing, two days is a small thing, there are so many things in one day.

Let me say a few words: 1. The author's writing skills are good, the writing style is relaxed, and small humors with meanings can be reasonably interspersed in it. He occasionally goes too fast, and there are very few typos, almost none. There are no words that fail to express the meaning, and there are no sentence fragmentation errors. It gives me a very good reading experience! Absolutely above the grain level. 2. The author has a correct attitude. I made a mistake in the article, but within five minutes, the author replied that I had corrected it! It can be seen that the author has put great care into this book. This is a sign of respect for the readers, himself, and the book! 3. About the setting: I have come back to comment after seeing Chapter 59. I feel that this setting is very novel, but I still can't see whether it will collapse in the end, so I will not comment on this point. Please read it yourself! It is still in the new book stage. I hope the author can carefully consider the setting, outline, and storyline to make it more rigorous and thoughtful, and bring you a good work! I wish the author this book a great success.

The writing is really okay, and overall the writing is pretty good. But I really don't like to read what the male and female protagonists wrote. There really is no end to hiding your identity. Not much to say, just keep reading. I really don't want to read it if there are these bloody or weird plots later.

I'm not the only one to tell you. This book turned into shit as soon as I went to the capital. I read it very carefully. It looked good at first, but later I hated going to the capital.

When I was writing about the female protagonist, I felt that the male protagonist was not taken into consideration by the female protagonist. The male protagonist was always thinking about the female protagonist when he was traveling around the world. He never discussed with the male protagonist what she did. I felt disgusting. This was to use the female protagonist to contain the male protagonist.

Even if the country is destroyed, you can still fight fiercely with your enemies. Isn't this a traitor in history?

It's becoming less and less Buddhist, and it's becoming more and more deviated from the title of the book.

The writing is of contract quality, but the plot is too stupid.

The first book I read was about the Buddhist cult of immortality, which suited my taste. I thought it was quite interesting. But halfway through, it turned into a dynasty struggle for hegemony, with husbands and wives fighting against each other. Then I read the title of the book, Cultivation of Immortality with Changes of Destiny. The more I read, the more awkward it became.

When the prince of the old dynasty marries a princess of the new dynasty, the key is that the princess is the end of the old dynasty.

The writing is pretty good, but the plot is a bit off-putting.

You give me an average feeling. You write something that's fun but not fun. You arrange the heroine so early and you can't write it well emotionally. The feeling you give me about this heroine is just to give LSP readers some yy.

All I can say is that this book is irrelevant. It is said that it is about destiny cultivation, but that plug-in has not been used since it was put on the shelves. I spent more than ten dollars reading this book in vain.

If you don't kill that opposite-sex king, the whole family will feel sorry for you, including his daughter.

Why do I get more and more boring the more I watch?

In the early stage, it is biased, ranging from low-level martial arts to cultivating immortals. It has a single female protagonist, no system, and the daily pace is slow. If you don't like it, don't join it.

It's hard to evaluate this book. My feeling is that it was written by two different authors before it was put on the shelves and after it was put on the shelves.

To be honest, it's completely obvious that the author doesn't know how to write about battles of wits. These schemes really have no brains, and it makes the heroine seem useless. She can't see the invincible bravery of the general in the past. [If you don't know how to write, don't write about battles of wits. Just practice being an immortal]

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I found a small bug and took down the dialogue in the Jiangnan state capital. It said that Dayan never said that he was destined for the 500th anniversary of the founding of the country, but didn't the White Dragon Jade Seal have the words "if you receive it from heaven, your life span will last forever"?

Are you going to be a heroine? Five characters, three female supporting characters.

It feels good, the emotion is gentle and looks very comfortable

I was wondering why this didn't look good before, but then I suddenly felt better.

I think it's pretty good-looking! Come on author