I Can Tell the Future, but the Hints Are Wrong?

I have now read Chapter 18 of this book. I would like to comment on it. How should I put it? It can only be said to be a piece of shit. There is something wrong with Goldfinger. There is nothing wrong with making an article around this, but is the protagonist too mentally retarded? First of all, if there is a problem with the jade pendant, will there be a problem with the other jade pendant? Why don't you remind me of this? Then there is the protagonist. Since you have chosen an adult, there are some issues that should be clear based on his experience, and the connection between the before and after, and then even if the protagonist did not understand at the time, there is also a problem with the other jade pendant, so what happens afterwards? Afterwards, why don't you communicate with the third prince? At least you have to find a common enemy, win over one faction, and suppress another faction. Don't you understand such a simple truth? And I don't know what the author thinks, but I just don't understand why the emperor wouldn't investigate secretly. Even if you made a mistake the first time, then the second time, when the mountain is blocked by heavy snow and something is obviously wrong, the emperor won't care. Don't tell me that the emperor doesn't care. If what happened around him is like this If he didn't know these things, then he would not be far away from being assassinated. Today, the mountains are blocked by heavy snow, and the prince is trapped. Tomorrow, the emperor practices swordplay in the martial arts field, and then accidentally pierces his back with a sword and dies. I don't want to say more about the rest. I can only say that the author's writing is really "great."

This reminder... Looks a bit retarded... Especially the one that blamed the emperor in the last one, and the fame of the fourth prince in the second one is also a bit...

The protagonist is a mentally retarded person who has a rivalry with Yi Xiaochuan. He has no brains and can't even speak while holding a golden finger.

Brother Qidian, I was really wrong. Please stop giving me excuses every day. I beg you.

It's so unconventional to see. Several six- and seven-year-old children talk like adults. A seven-year-old girl pulls a 100-pound bow for hunting. Is this a gibbon in disguise?

How did you come up with the idea of ​​letting the little brother Na Jin, a top-level title, and the protagonist Na Jing, a no-name title? Watch too many female videos?

Come on, author, even though there are plots such as subduing your wits, forcibly killing supporting characters, low-level wits, etc., I am optimistic about you.

Didn't you come to this world seeking immortality? Want to be emperor? I don't understand this idea. The world is so big and it's funny to be the emperor in a small place.

I don't understand. A 6- or 7-year-old talking like this? It's difficult even at the age of eleven or twelve, but it's almost the same at the age of sixteen or seventeen. This is really poisonous. And your family has already started to memorize etiquette at the age of 6 or 7? You really take it for granted, right?

This book is very strange. The writing style is okay, but it makes people feel angry after reading it.

The setting is very attractive, but unfortunately the author's writing is too poor and there are too many poisonous points.

I regret not reading the comment section, it's too vicious and the protagonist has no IQ

If the protagonist wants to take the road of immortality, he should not take the road of the emperor. In fact, the emperor's inability to live forever in fantasy novels is a rule of self-protection of heaven. The immortality of the emperor is like a sealed fish pond, smelly, dirty, and full of rotten smell. The way of heaven is like the owner of a fish pond, the fish pond is like heaven and earth, and the creatures inside are like sentient beings. It would be even scarier if we use modern scientific terms. Even super calculations cannot calculate a way out. The author imagines that if Emperor Xin of the Shang Dynasty lived to modern times, he would have an average of one woman every year. How many descendants would he have by now? Is there any way for anyone else to survive?

If it doesn't work, just write it with AI. The old blind man saw people emmm

The traces of AI writing are so obvious that I can't bear to run away from them.

Depriving a prince of his honors? Which country's prince still needs to take the civil service examination? Later, Qingmei blamed the emperor even more...

The protagonist is indecisive and chattering, and the plot is also dragging. I don't know if it's the author's inability or the character's framework that he can't grasp. The anti-routine theme is a bit new, but I can't stand it anymore 😅

What kind of rubbish is written in this 😰

In fact, this book is pretty good after reading it. The mechanism is good and invincible. But the author's writing style is really not good. The first few chapters are too poisonous. Rewrite it and revise the first five chapters. First of all, at this age, you have to write about the world's precocious wisdom, and then the eldest prince's mentality is too old-fashioned and has to be changed. The psychological reaction between this golden finger and the protagonist is extremely poisonous. It's too stupid to watch. Just change it to the protagonist and do different behaviors in order to test the golden finger. I write about the protagonist's doubtful psychology every day, and I end up acting like a stupid pig. The title of your book predicts the opposite, and the result does not reflect the opposite. Instead, it describes the outcome if the protagonist becomes the villain. In short, you still need to learn how to portray the characters' psychology. For example, the chapter about the death of Concubine De was too crude, which made readers think it was a little bit poisonous.

I just read the first few chapters, and the protagonist followed the two prompts given by Goldfinger. Then the protagonist made a mistake whether he wanted to follow them or not. I then thought about any time in the previous chapters that the protagonist failed to follow the prompts, or I missed it.

This book makes me want to vomit😒😒😒

Alas, people are always like this. When they can run, they have to walk slowly. The resource is tilted. Even a pig can climb a tree. Instead of taking off, they still crawl. When they are staggering, they have to fly. They know that there is danger, but they have to jump.

The Human Emperor cannot live forever. This rule is the self-protection of Heaven. If the Human Emperor becomes immortal, the Human Emperor's queens and concubines also want to live forever, and their sons and daughters also want to live forever. There are only so many resources. They are all given to you and the Human Emperor's family. It would be strange if the world does not collapse. If the resources are not enough, they will start to refine the human race, the heaven and the earth, and even the heaven.

There are a lot of small points at the beginning, but it didn't step on my thunder. The writing is smooth and interesting, and the important plot is handled well. I feel that the author has also grown. I look forward to the follow-up.

Full adult body

The introduction is good, but I can only say that the introduction is good

Dear book lovers, please read more, subscribe more, vote more, and comment more. The author greatly needs your support, thank you very much!

I'm a bit uncomfortable reading Xiaobai's novels.

Chapter 60: I'll give you two tickets.