When Night Falls, Descend to the Mortal Realm

Chapter 3 is really poisonous. If someone doesn't let you in, you have to go in. After you get in, you won't listen to anything they tell you, and you even kick in the door. It's really your fault. This author's writing is even worse than Xiaobai's 😅

Strong writing skills, interlocking storylines, only things you can't imagine, Brother Tao V5

In this day and age, do people still write first-person online novels? ? ? ? Don't you think you're fighting hard enough?

To be honest, I can't stand it. The main character is an idiot in the beginning, but I wouldn't know it if I didn't watch the rest.

The beginning was too discouraging, and I had no IQ at all. A man weighing 180 pounds has 200 pounds of bone in his body, but he has to do it in the opposite direction. If others don't let you in, you have to go in; if they don't let you out, you have to go out; if you let others go, you won't leave; if you let them stay, you won't stay. As soon as I saw a stool calling to the old Taoist priest, I couldn't stand it anymore.

The protagonist is really disgusting, he has no qualities at all, he only causes trouble, shirks responsibility and punishes others when he causes trouble.

Do you think it looks good? I feel like I spent my money very unfairly. To be honest, New World and Tianhei are not that good. I can't stand New World anymore. The popularity of the live broadcast room is so low that I keep writing like this. . . . I can't believe this is what a pollster author wrote! ! I won't chase you anymore. The above only represents my personal opinion, die-hard fans please stay away.

The third golden chapter is about a mentally retarded gangster protagonist. . . . . . . It's still the first person, it's too old-fashioned

The protagonist behaves like a very smart person. He tells you not to go out but you go out anyway. He tells you to pretend not to see him and say it directly.

The protagonist who is hated by everyone has to use the first person, which makes the beginning extremely uncomfortable Wouldn't using the first person enhance the reader's sense of immersion? But with such a weird character, and then a plot about a wife remarrying and her son having a miscarriage... Shouldn't he be very popular, right? I understand that the author relies on the recklessness and stubbornness of the protagonist to promote the design of the plot, but it is really not likable... Or maybe it is just a personal statement. It was very discouraging at the beginning.