Passing Down the Sword, Starting with One Person

Taiwu is less popular than Yiren, and Nuanxue is less popular than Taiwu. You know how to stack debuffs.

Is Xia He's worldview a bit shattered? According to you, since many people have killed others because of their tragic childhoods, why don't you rescue them all?

I've read everyone's comments, and it's clear that my writing skills aren't good enough to attract readers. After defeating the Pig Clan and unlocking the system I'll need for the next phase, I'll go straight back to writing about one person. I'll still update the Warm Snow chapters in my spare time.

I feel like it would be good to combine some different martial arts styles from Taiwu, otherwise the techniques are too mixed up, like the Gu Zhenren's Counterattack Turtle Profound Yin Finger, or the Hundred Flower Needles, etc.

What's wrong with you? Writing a plot where going back in time affects the present timeline? Why not just create a new timeline? Seriously? You really think you can control this butterfly effect plot spanning decades? I truly admire your audacity to write something that would flop anywhere.

I don't quite understand how girlfriends can be inherited. If it comes to marriage, and the male lead keeps changing bodies, does that mean the female lead has to be intimate with different people? Even though we know the soul is the same person, how can they maintain their feelings if the physical appearances are different? It really seems so strange; it would be better if there was no female lead at all.

I clicked in because of the tags: Taiwu Scroll System, Under One Person storyline, and the recently played Warm Snow. My main interest is to see how Taiwu's successor will mess with the characters in Under One Person. I hope the protagonist won't be exposed when Liu Yanyan comes along. So, is it possible that my next adventure will take me to some obscure martial arts game world?

Well... You weren't telling a proper story. Your work is like mistletoe growing on someone else's work. If I hadn't read Under One Person, I wouldn't have known what kind of story you were trying to tell. The protagonist's motivation is also chaotic. At first, he wanted to become stronger and fight against the Celestial Master, but later he wanted a perfect ending. I think the characters you wrote are okay, so why are they so inconsistent?

The writing is good, but it lacks satisfying moments. After mastering the techniques, the protagonist doesn't seem to become stronger; he's always the first to get injured, and everyone else is constantly stronger than him, yet he inexplicably wins. There's no depiction of the protagonist actually becoming stronger. Everyone thinks he's extraordinary, but everyone also thinks he's weak.

The section about Luo Tian's grand sacrificial ceremony was poorly written; the disconnect between the two was too strong. Regardless of the content, the story jumps between Liu Yanyan's mortal cultivation and Bao'er's shamanistic ritual. Both approaches are fine; the mortal cultivation is more exciting that day, and the shamanistic ritual is acceptable since the protagonist is a sword.