Passing Down the Sword, Starting with One Person

Taiwu is less popular than one person, and Nuanxue is less popular than Taiwu. You know how to stack debuffs.

Isn't Xia He's outlook on things a bit shattered? According to what you said, he killed many people because of his miserable childhood. Why don't you save them all?

I read everyone's comments and found out that my writing skills are not good enough to attract everyone. After beating the Zhu family and opening the system that will be used later, I will just write it back to one person. I will update the chapter of Nuanxue in my spare time [extra].

I feel like I can play with some of Taiwu's schools, otherwise the techniques would be too complicated, such as Gu Zhenren, Counter-Injury Bastard, Xuanyin Finger, Hundred Flowers Needle, etc.

What's wrong with you? Writing a plot like this where going back to the past will affect the current timeline? Why don't you create a new timeline? No, do you really think you can control this butterfly effect plot that spans decades? I really admire you for having the guts to write this kind of thing that is meant for whoever writes it.

Some people don't quite understand whether girlfriends can also inherit. If it comes to marriage, and the male protagonist changes his body, the female protagonist will have to be intimate with different people. Although they know that the soul is the same person, the body and appearance are different, how can the relationship remain unchanged? It really feels too strange, it is better not to have a female protagonist.

When I clicked in, I was attracted by the Taiwu picture scroll system, the plot of Under One Person, and the recently played Nuan Xue. The main point is to see how the descendants of Taiwu can revitalize the characters in Under One Person. Liu Yanyan hopes that the protagonist will not lose his horse. By the way, can Qiyu travel to some unpopular martial arts game worlds?

How to say it. . . You are not telling a good story. Your work is like mistletoe growing on other people's works. If I had not read Under One Person, I would not know what story you are telling. The protagonist's motivation is also very disordered. At first, he wants to become stronger and fight against the heavenly master, but then he wants a perfect ending. I think the character you wrote is okay, but why is it so confusing?

The writing is good, but it's not that exciting. After practicing the skills, he doesn't show that he has become stronger. Whoever he fights is injured first. Everyone is stronger than the protagonist at every turn, and then the protagonist wins inexplicably. There is no description of the fact that the protagonist has become stronger. Everyone thinks that the protagonist is not simple, but they all think that he is weak. The Taiwu sword hilt spirit is equivalent to a protagonist cheating, but it is not shown at all. The fact of cheating, what are the enhancements of those skills, what special effects do they have, what are the differences from one person's skills, what are the special places, what are the advantages that are equivalent to cheating, just like if you write about Naruto system and go to Pirates, you have to write about the place where ninjutsu is the symbol and personality of the protagonist, the superiority of ninjutsu, the special role of this otherworldly power in pirates, the ability to tread water and control water, etc. When going to Naruto in the Pirate System, you have to write about how evil Haki is and how cool and powerful Devil Fruit is. So it's better to study how to write it more comfortably.

The part about Luo Tianda's dip was not well written, and the feeling of tearing was too strong. Regardless of the content, the front foot followed Liu Yanyan's mortal flow, and the back foot danced with Sister Bao'er as a great fairy. Both ways of writing were fine. The mortal flow was not much and said that it was much more fun on the day. Dancing with the great god was also okay. After all, the protagonist is a sword. When the truth was revealed in the later stage, it was okay to say that the protagonist was a sword. It was enough to re-cultivate and meet Sister Bao'er, but the two styles were very speechless when they appeared together, and the sense of tearing was too strong.