I Am the Right Way to Defeat You

The combat power is a bit broken, and as a result, after 240 chapters, the protagonist is still in the realm of a fighting master, but he can defeat a fighting spirit. I don't know how the main plot will be followed. Is it necessary for a character to appear every time that makes the protagonist of the current level fight hard and then faint. There are too many daily interactions between the heroines, not to mention the descriptions of multiple heroines being jealous of the hero. The hero is too innocent, and his resistance to charm is extremely low. After he fainted after being kissed, he immediately forgot about it when he woke up. I don't know what happened. It may be that the resistance is reduced due to extreme suppression of desire. I went back and looked up the title of the original work, and the progress is indeed synchronized (I don't remember the specific plot development very well), but I don't fully understand Yunying's motivation for massacre, and I don't understand the emotional drive behind it. It may be pure law of the jungle, but I personally don't feel good about that section. I feel that the current protagonists interact more with the characters, and things like practicing elixirs are mentioned briefly. Previously, Po Edan suddenly said that the Ice Emperor's cultivation was broken because he took the elixirs made by Xiao Yan, and there was no sense of accomplishment brought by the progress of training and upgrading. Anyway, I paid the money, I just said a few paragraphs, and then started to wait and see. I will come back when I feel better.

I felt that the author's portrayal of the protagonist was too upright. It was okay at first, but towards the end I couldn't stand it anymore and it always felt awkward. It is said that if the water is clear, there will be no fish, and if people observe it, there will be no disciples. Integrity is an advantage, but being too upright can turn into a disadvantage. Perhaps the author wants to create a unique protagonist. It is undeniable that in the novels I have read, the protagonist's character is unique. After seeing the character of the protagonist and its influence on the surrounding characters, I thought of the kind of harmonious society in "Peach Blossom Spring". Perhaps this is also the social appearance of the author's inner hope or imagination. I have never thought about whether there are such people in today's society. If so, I hope that he can be a little more selfish and smooth in dealing with things. Society is a big dyeing vat, and it is easy for him to be "splashed with ink" when he is so pure and flawless. The above is my nonsense that I didn't sleep at night Excuse me, sleep Good night💤 The last sentence, the author does not need to pay attention to what I said, come on and write well 💤💤💤

Hmm... I haven't seen a book like this for a long time, where the protagonist can stick to his own principles and implement his own principles. Instead of being utilitarian like most people nowadays, appearance is justice. This will make the book appear to have no core idea. Even after reading a book, there is nothing that moved me except that I felt refreshed. How can it be possible to publish a good book if it doesn't even have anything moving? ! So I still like the author's setting very much. There are also bad points: For example, the protagonist is too upright, even like a baby bird. He looks very much like a stubborn idiot who has never seen the world and is stupid because of reading. This is not good. Furthermore, the adaptation of many plots of the original work is not very smooth and far-fetched. Some connections are contradictory and are forcibly connected with the plot of the original work, which makes no logic. This is also the biggest reason why I gave up this book. Originally, I was quite interested in the multiple female protagonists at the end. After all, now that public documents are rampant, it is really boring to practice, upgrade and install coins. I still miss the old way of writing.

I feel like it's okay to watch as a side story, emmm, I'm not sure if this is considered a fanfic, I feel like it's not, you can check it out if you like it.

Read it on QQ, you can read it there. It gave me a headache, but I didn't want to give up the book. I can only say that the personality and behavior of the protagonist are too tiring to watch. But in my opinion, this final ending still does not touch upon the thing behind "the law of the jungle". But by the way, is Hunying really gone? It was completely destroyed, but the monument to my beloved wife at the end was the biggest ridicule. It is also a call to a new thing. This is what I think this book pursues, but it is an alternative. It is just a replacement of one dominating logic to another. Wash away and go to sleep. It made me feel uncomfortable reading but I didn't want to give up the book, but in the end I still gave this book my own disapproval.

Can I change this? It looks a bit awkward.

The author's writing style is the original idea of ​​writing fan fiction ten or even fifteen years ago. A simple summary is that the plot follows the original work to a large extent. The main purpose is to make up for the regrets of the original work, improve the logical deficiencies of the original work, and to a certain extent help fill in the pitfalls of the original work. Fewer additional time traveler protagonists are introduced. The impact on the world line in the early stage is only reflected in each event, paving the way for the future. In the middle and late stages, it will gradually change the direction of the plot in a form similar to the butterfly effect, leading to a better ending. The advantages and disadvantages of this writing method are obvious. The advantage is that the threshold is low. At the same time, because it closely follows the original plot, it eliminates a lot of work in outline planning and logical thinking. There is less chance of overturning in the early and mid-term. It is one of the best choices for new authors to hone their writing skills. Moreover, in the writing process, some pitfalls in the original work can be avoided, and the overall plot and text quality are guaranteed to a certain extent. But on the contrary, this kind of retro style is naturally lacking in novelty and excitement. In today's fast-paced era, it is basically difficult to gain more popularity. This can be reflected from the number of posts. On the other hand, since the plot is very close to the original work, if the article is not innovative and clever enough in plot treatment, it will easily appear boring and be criticized as criticizing the original work. So far, it seems that the author's words have been carefully crafted and it is very comfortable to read. The treatment of Yao Lao also made my eyes shine (white hair! Red pupils! Hiss!). For someone like me who can accept this style, the overall feeling is good and worth looking forward to.

One sentence to evaluate the current plot: Xiao Yan is about to gather the eldest ladies of the eight tribes.

The author's protagonist's character setting is undoubtedly a breath of fresh air among today's lowly people, but I personally feel that the problem is quite obvious. The first is the collapse of the training system. Similar to the start of the game, the younger generation of the Xiao family ignores their talent resources. Just relying on the protagonist's communication and supervising training, each person has surpassed many levels of combat. It is outrageous. And to be honest, writing like this except destroying the originally relatively solid training system, I don't see any effect. Maybe it just shocked passers-by a few more times? Secondly, the protagonist's justice becomes fragile and childish when it comes to the point where every penny counts. The protagonist feels that he can be driven to death by just a few calculations.

Everything else is okay, but the character of the protagonist is really stubborn and gives people a fake and empty feeling. It's not impossible for the protagonist to be a righteous protagonist, such as the protagonist of the Divine Seal Throne (although the three dogs are now rotten), the innocent heart, but your protagonist is really a bit awkward to watch. It can only be said that you use too much force.

People who read this book because of the harem should not read it. Except for the Little Medical Fairy, Yun Yun, Cai Lin, Feng Qing'er, Nalan, and Xun'er, the other so-called female protagonists are all just female supporting characters, and most of the characters, even if they are effeminate, are just NPCs with more roles at most. Of the six female protagonists just mentioned, two of them were persecuted by the author, one got pregnant early and raised the child by herself, one was jealous, and the other was a cuckold. The more you read, the less like a harem.

Just add Qinglin to the character page, such a cute little girl 😊

There is a lot of bad life, but when I see this Ziyun Winged Lion King returning to his ancestors and directly beating Taixu Ancient Dragon, I can't help but complain😇

Did the author have the idea to write a fool who is against the protagonist but just wants the protagonist to grow to what he needs and then achieves a goal at his own sacrifice? This is what the author wrote. It always feels like a timeline, a world that feels perfect and beautiful among thousands of world lines. Although beauty makes people feel happy, only regrets can make people remember them for a long time. After all, they are fans, and most of them are written in the hope of a perfect ending to solve the regrets in the original work. (I really look forward to the author writing his own original plot after the ending) After all, the author seems to have reached the level of strength (but I also want to see the author continue to write fan fiction to make up for the regret)

What I have seen so far, I really want to complain about the collapse of the combat power in the early stage. Everything else is fine, but this combat power... The fighting master kills the fighting spirit, the fighting spirit kills the fighting emperor... I am really numb.

As one reader said, the writing style is very relaxed and not so violent. It is unique among Dou Po fandoms (at least among the ones I read). It is very comfortable. I hope I can keep writing.

Brother Xiao Yan is so lucky~~

Drug dust turns into drug sink, 6. The protagonist becomes more serious, which is quite comfortable to watch. If it can be put on the shelves, I will subscribe and support it.

Current reading thoughts The writing is relatively Japanese style, which may be offensive to people who are not used to it. A protagonist like Emiya Shirou, but not very suitable for a fantasy world. Because Dodou's original work has no shortage of righteous people, and the right path that the protagonist wants to practice is a more universal virtue, which can only be achieved by order, and this order is similar to our modern laws, rather than sectarian rules, but this is difficult to achieve in a fantasy world. In fact, what needs to be considered is what kind of plot is set up to allow the protagonist to master the ultimate violence (after all, many plots are created by himself); in a fantasy world where extraordinary people are everywhere, it is difficult for extraordinary people to keep order, but it is easy for them not to follow order. How to deal with this plot is more reasonable (it is best not to rely on words to escape or influence). The other is the female protagonist group. I am an LSP and I admit that I clicked in after seeing a bunch of female protagonists in the character profiles. But there is a big problem at present. The male protagonist is the same as the traditional harem male protagonist in Japanese comics. His emotions are too slow. If the author is familiar with Niqing or Japanese comics, he will know that this type of male protagonist is becoming more and more unpopular now. In addition, if it is a real harem, it will damage the protagonist's overly dignified image. If it is a fake harem, the more interactions with the heroines are written now, the more disgusting it will be in the later stage. However, judging from the current situation, the probability of a real harem is higher. Yun Yun cannot run away. Thanks to the author for his creation and best wishes😘

Yunyun

She didn't feel happy for a moment that Nalan Yanran was about to succeed. The person who was about to be laughed at was the ancient clan's eldest lady, Gu Xun'er, a rare divine bloodline in the past millennium! ! !

Well,,, how should I put it? This book is indeed a breath of fresh air among the novels written by a group of coquettish bitches. I have been reading novels for ten years. There are no more than five protagonists in this kind of novel. They are principled and honest. Let's put it this way, the protagonist is an idiot like Guo Jing, but it is a little better. It is really impressive. The family relationship is also well managed in it, and the atmosphere is very comfortable. But there are some poisonous points. First of all, you must understand what the protagonist does. The protagonist sacrifices his own cultivation speed so that the supporting characters can keep up. He does not give up any of his ideas and gives up his own resources to other supporting characters. This approach is really great and selfless, but also in the context of Dou Qi Continent, this approach is extremely stupid. If you are dedicated to others, even your family, will others be devoted to you? It's not that simple. People's hearts are too complicated, and there are still a lot of people. But this book has very simple logic. The author describes a family-style utopia. Furthermore, in the Dou Qi Continent, the law of the jungle is to the extreme. If you don't quickly improve yourself to help others, you really have no vision at all. This is something that should be considered only when there are no external considerations. It is worthy of consideration. You are a weak chicken. Maybe one day something bad will happen to you and bring disaster to you. No one can withstand it. Just wait for death for those who are strong in appearance. The Xun'er family is powerful but the protagonist doesn't know it. In addition, the protagonist doesn't know that Yao Shen is being chased by powerful enemies and only has a soul left. He doesn't have the slightest worry and keeps sacrificing his own cultivation speed. What can the protagonist do to resist when the powerful enemies come? With a sense of family belonging and happiness? Also, there are too many concerns about the Xiao family. I think the author wants to write that the whole family is strong, and Xiao Yan leads a large group of family members to fight. But in order to make everyone watch it happily, the protagonist must not be weak. What if the supporting characters can't keep up with the protagonist? The supporting characters are forced to cheat. The strength of the Xiao family is so ridiculous that they can almost catch up with the protagonist of the original work. You must know how remote this place is, and the talents of the people themselves are extremely low. How can the protagonist help them overcome the talent gap? The article doesn't make this clear, it just talks about practicing without risking one's life in general terms, this,,,, Above

There is no need to engage in sex change. This will dissuade many people.

If the protagonist really wants the right path to spread all over the world, then there is only one way. Set up a banner, clarify the concept, gather fellow travelers, form a torrent, sweep the world, and then legislate, teach, and spread down. From this, the world will be changed, and everyone will do it.

I originally wanted to raise him, but is this the case for a eunuch?

Most of the emotions are well written, but Xun'er's emotional line is a bit rushed. Also, the combat power is really poorly written, which is a major drawback. Overall it's still very good 🤓

I heard that the heroine has a soul and a heavenly emperor. Is this true?😰

I have finished reading this book. In fact, I feel that the best emotional scene in the early stage is that of the Little Medical Fairy. Not counting Nalan who has been persecuted in the middle. In fact, the best one in the whole book is Hun Tian Emperor Hun Ying. I can't help but feel that

The most miserable character in the original book, Qian Bai Er Lao, was just mentioned and then disappeared!

The author and heroine should add Zi Yan