Longevity Martial Arts: Beginning with Tai Chi Health Cultivation

The book is very good, the content is excellent, and there are no problems with the overall development and hostility But, can it not be so confusing? There are only a few sentences in one chapter to tell the plot, and the rest is just hydrology, all kinds of explanations, from the beginning to the end, wherever I think of it, I say one sentence above, it takes thousands of words to see the content of the next sentence, and I also like to give various examples Tell me about the status of a pharmacist, a few times for beginners and a few times for intermediates. Advanced again a few times, and again when others praise it, is it interesting? I read one chapter intermittently, because there are always various explanations. For example, the protagonist said that I want to go to the toilet, okay, there will be no other people to answer the question, and there will be no action to go to the toilet. Instead, the author immediately started to talk about why he wanted to go to the toilet, and why he went to the toilet at this time. Going to the toilet is very important, and why he can't do it if he doesn't go to the toilet. Yes, what is it like to go to the toilet when your cultivation level is low, what is it like when your cultivation level is high, what should you pay attention to when going to the toilet, why is it like this, how to go to the toilet if something happens, etc. After two thousand words, I saw the protagonist going to the toilet... This kind of unnecessary forced explanation is too much. If you don't have to write, you can just write about the life of the supporting character... In daily life, you are a leader, and you talk nonsense for two hours.

Can the content be more refined? There is a lot of talk.

Isn't this the same as Changsheng Martial Arts starting from Wu Qin Xi?

I don't recommend having a female protagonist. It's too confusing. Don't bet on whether you can write it well.

Instead of looking for a heroine, he casually hangs out in a brothel and has sex with ordinary maids. What kind of character is this author? I want to give up the book

It's almost a thousand chapters. In the early stage, I was afraid of death and just kept going. But in the later stage, I was almost at the peak and I was still stubborn. People are always pressed on their heads. The martial arts of this world have come to an end. Outsiders from another world have come again, but they are still pressed 😒

Body quenching stage (leather tendons, bones, organs, marrow and blood) Perception of internal strength → External refining of copper skin (bronze, brass, bronze) → External refining of steel bars → External refining of iron bones → Internal refining of the six fu organs → Internal refining of the five internal organs → Grand master of marrow cleansing (3 times of marrow cleansing) → blood exchange for the Martial Saint (9 times of blood exchange) Divine Vein Stage Refining the Divine Aperture → Casting the Divine Sea → Yun Divine Body → Providing the Divine Palace → Nourishing the God (God-Man Realm/Venerable) → Refining the Godhead (True God Realm)

Speaking of Gou, the author really treats the protagonist as a dog and pulls him out at every turn.

Don't let the number of great masters flood. In the beginning, Qingyun Sect, as the oldest sect leader in the continent, was only a perfect master. Now why are there so many great masters everywhere?

I found that there is an unexplainable point. The Bull Demon, Tiger Demon, and Jiao Demon Skills should be part of a series. It stands to reason that once you have mastered the Jiao Demon Skills, the first two skills should be integrated into the Jiao Demon Skill. But now it feels like those two are independent, which is very strange.