I Was Imprisoned by Seven Witches

Is there too much water these days?🤐

Prepare to write a fic. Get the Holy Ruins Chu Feng experience card at the beginning. Use it directly to kill the cave and kill seven female devils.

Seven people are killing people, how can there be a so-called fairy?

I feel that the protagonist is too innocent. He was sold to someone who knew he was going to die but still misses his family so much. Even if he was raised by him before, it is still a kindness. Moreover, the protagonist is still a time traveler. Fortunately, there is Jiang Hei. I hope the author can make the protagonist Jiang smarter and have a darker personality.

This plot is too outrageous. It's unnecessary to have multiple personalities now.

Let Jiang Hei be the protagonist! To be honest, Jiang Chun is quite brainless

We need eunuchs again, right?🙂🙂🙂

Neither Jiang Chun nor Jiang Hei are the protagonists. Have you ever seen the tiger charm in The Adventures of Jackie Chan? Let a person be divided into two people, one is a pure and kind person and the other is an evil and dark person. When these two people merge into one, they become the real protagonists.

A classic idiot novel where the protagonist has the same IQ as the author. Don't be too harsh on the protagonist's low IQ, because the author cannot write a being with a higher IQ than his own😅

The feeling of separation is too strong. The protagonist makes me feel like a time traveler (roasted chicken) and a native of this world (the first time his hands are so soft). His behavior and IQ are also the same, just like a schizophrenic.

Seven of them are demons, how can there be a fairy?

If you don't write about the harem in a harem article, but if you write about a bunch of daughters, isn't it just asking for death?

After reading it, these 7 are definitely female protagonists. All of Orochi's blood has been taken. You can't abandon them.

Cut again? ? Why don't you update?

? How did it turn into a story about a crazy kid giving birth to a baby?

Did you sleep with the boss? Or just do dual cultivation 🙂

Child? How can this mind be mature and naive at times? If the author wanted to write about an "innocent" like this, then you succeeded.

I always feel that the fairy is the same Ye Xingyi, but I also feel that the author will not write it so simply. I hope I am overthinking it.

Jiang Hei is probably a psychopath, and I feel that the current protagonist is very innocent. The protagonist probably has multiple personalities. When the protagonist becomes stronger, kill Jiang Hei quickly. I feel that Jiang Hei is a psychopath, and the world revolves around him. Yes, he also said that he can deal with those fairy sisters. They can kill him with a slap, and he can't even control his own body.

I don't know what you mean by hiding it from the readers. The protagonist already knows it. If you want to write that feeling of, oh, it turns out she is a fairy, you haven't written it yet. It reads inexplicably.

Halfway through, I felt that the interaction with the heroine was okay, but Jiang Hei was completely unnecessary, and it also lowered his intelligence. If I wanted to write about Jiang Chun's transformation from immaturity to maturity, I could have written about the impact of the experience. As for Jiang Hei, it was really a bit intellectual.

The subject matter is novel, but it is a pity that it will play with schizophrenia (i. E. Schizophrenia) in the future. If it is not written well, it will make people feel that they are cheating on themselves, that is, the writing style is not enough, and the two personalities can be written like two people.

Borrowing treasure land to sell melon seeds and asking Taoist friends to test the poison. "Immortal Tribulation One" has more than 300,000 words, all for free.

To be honest, it's not as good as the previous one

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Where is Jiang Hei? I looked at why I mentioned that Jiang Hei is no longer there.

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A story about two male protagonists, "The Last One" The first male protagonist is ugly and lecherous. He was supposed to be the devil in the world of demons. But by some mistake, he was recognized as the holy son of the fairy world. From then on, he embarked on the path of the prodigal son's return... The second male protagonist, his personality, is upright and handsome. He was supposed to be the holy son of the fairy world. But by mistake, he was destined to be the holy son of the fairy world. Next, he was identified as the Demon Son of the Demon Realm, and has since embarked on the path of becoming a villain... The story unfolds between these two half-brothers... This is the theme of this novel, if you are interested in reading it, read it, at least the logic is online, the plot is reasonable, and there are laughs and tears. Welcome to complain

It would be boring to become the grandpa in the ring.