A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: This Cultivator Is Far Too Righteous

The novice gift pack actually gives out ten rebirth fruits at a time, which only makes it look less precious. The system should focus on improving the protagonist's strength, rather than giving so many to train others, which makes it a nanny story. In fact, this kind of plot is quite boring. It is just repeating the process of the author's previous books, "Shui Man Jin Shan Er". I read it from the time the author wrote the first book to now. I used to read it on QQ Reading, but then I stopped reading it on QQ completely! The next recommendation on Qidian. Com was the author's book. To be honest, it was quite a connection. I often read Douluo fanfics at that time! I really want to see you grow, but for now it seems you are still stuck in the past. I will continue to subscribe and read it when I'm bored~

Only at the fourth level of the Qi training stage will the spiritual awareness greatly increase. The protagonist can sense hundreds of meters away at the third level of the Qi training stage. This is too exaggerated. Besides, the mortal system is very biased. After the monks in the alchemy stage lose their spiritual power, their physical strength is the same as that of ordinary people. The protagonist is ten years old and has not learned any spells at the third level of the Qi training stage. Even adults cannot defeat him. How can he defeat a wild boar weighing four to five hundred kilograms? It is really full of flaws. The spiritual power has almost no blessing on the body. Mortal immortal cultivators can be said to be brittle. They have no protection like dragon beads and can be broken by a pistol.

There are too many hang-ups. As a level 4 author, I hope it won't crash.

What is the spiritual root? Mutated spiritual roots are mutated from the basic five-element spiritual roots. Now you have five-element spiritual roots and mutated spiritual roots. After arranging so many spiritual roots, I can still cultivate a hair fairy. I don't even understand the spiritual roots, and the content is even more outrageous. Han Li is the only one in Han Li's family who has spiritual roots. The eldest sister got married early, so where did Han Li's elder sister and younger sister go to cultivate immortality. He died of poisonous hair.

Is this what level four writers are? Hahahaha, so funny

Eunuch as soon as possible, this kind of white text should not be at the starting point.

Goldfinger is too exaggerated and doesn't suit my liking.

Whatever you write, I suggest you just cut it and re-imagine it. Don't write it as soon as your mind gets hot. Senior Brother Li can write thousands of things, it's not about his writing skills. It's more enjoyable to write in single memory. If you fall apart at the beginning, what else should you write?

It's just writing blindly, please be obedient and let's go to the construction site to move bricks.

There is a recent book shortage. Do you have any good novels to recommend? In addition to this book on my bookshelf now, I also read "The Mortal's Story of Immortality" and "The Monk's Family". As everyone knows, "The Monk's Family" is almost 3 million words, and I feel it's okay. The author's writing is very exciting, and the adventures are one after another. Looking at the later stages, the articles are not messy, and there are more than a thousand chapters now, with a lot of foreshadowing, and the map is getting bigger and bigger. I just like this kind of grand world view setting. What is commendable is that as the map becomes larger and larger, the author has also made the various supporting characters very fleshed out. It tells a family story, probably a novel about a group of cultivators. I think this is more difficult to grasp than a novel with a single protagonist. It is not easy to get all the way to this point. I thought it would be a trap at first, but so far, the plot constructed by the author is very rich and the reading is very smooth. The character descriptions are just right, including demeanor, dialogue, appearance, etc. The copy tasks of the article and the main tasks switch naturally. A small problem is that in some chapters, the family ranks are inconsistent. The author can make these basic settings a dynamic item, so that there will be no differences as the context goes. In short, the writing is very good, the setting is grand, the plot is ups and downs, the characters are full, and the reading is smooth and natural. I recommend it.