An Ordinary Mountain Village, an Extraordinary Man

The ones I picked taste better than the ones I bought. Although they cost money, they're only two yuan a pound, which is quite cheap.

The beginning was alright, still readable, but the video shooting part got boring. Even writing about pruning and shaping potted plants would have been better than writing about video shooting. The number of words is so low and it's no wonder so few people read it. If you want to see the video shooting process, there are tons of tutorials online. Why come to a novel only to be shown a video shooting process? Is that really meaningful? 😅😅😅

There should be fewer self-questioning and self-answering sentences. You could try a different way of describing things. The rest of the writing is quite fluent, but the self-questioning and self-answering is distracting!

There's no clear main plot; it's written too haphazardly.

Keep it up? I've already tried my best to post more, but unfortunately, no one is giving me the motivation to post more.

The book is quite well-written, so why isn't it popular? Maybe it's just not ready to blossom yet.

Life is as bland as water! Is the female lead missing?

I've finished writing. I'll check it to make sure some parts don't read smoothly.

How do you create posts? It's all up to you.

Are there really no readers pointing out typos to the author? So many typos...