Conquering the Heavens, Starting with Ip Man

Get your screws in properly, don't waste time.

What do you all mean by looking down on us authors? Always telling people to "fix screws" (a euphemism for being a novice writer)? New authors need confidence and support. You all need to be compassionate. (Author's note: I'd recommend you to be a screw fixer.)

Not very good, goodbye.

Brother, Japan probably didn't have missiles back then, yet they were so accurate. Foshan isn't small, and the protagonist could be targeted and bombed even after hiding in a random pharmacy for a day. If you're going to suppress the protagonist's growth, don't be so deliberate.

The protagonist is such a loser and a good-for-nothing, haha.

At this level, a bunch of people who just coast along and never actually write are far better than the author. There are plenty of people who write better than you at 15 yuan per thousand words.

The beginning was barely watchable, but the later parts were really bad. First, in the real world, people buy Nissan Sylphy cars for free, even the middle-aged women on the street still buy them, and secondly, people blindly lick Apple products. Second, starting to flirt with girls in Demi-Gods and Semi-Devils is truly idiotic.

The protagonist of a transmigration novel with a task-based system is like a wooden puppet; to put it bluntly, he just causes trouble to gain experience, and if he can't keep going, he abandons the story, making it easier to write a rambling account.

The author must be a recent graduate. It's very well written, but please don't write like that again! Go find a factory to tighten screws; your emotions are too volatile!

The Type 38 rifle is too contrived; don't use machine gun terminology to describe a single-shot bolt-action rifle.