Douluo Dalu: In the Unrivaled Era, a Fake God

There was a big bug and Electrolux was not around. More people would die when Shrek met the messenger of death on the way to the competition. Huo Yuhao directly sniped with that person in the middle, neither dead nor disabled, but he came to the competition alive and well.

To be honest, it was Dai Yuhao and Tang Wutong who came to the end, not Huo Yuhao and Wang Dong. One of Huo and Wang went crazy, and the other was dissected into pieces.

In fact, Sun and Moon are really much better than Shi Laike. During exchanges and studies, Shi Laike's teachers are soul emperors, but Sun and Moon have sent out eighth-level soul masters. Moreover, Sun and Moon's students can't learn anything at all from Shi Laike. Soul master training only needs to learn a meditation method. As for those who are taught about soul beasts, they are as stupid as people nowadays who are taught by Xinhua Dictionary. Shrek is either practicing or fighting every day. Can't he upgrade quickly? Sun and Moon have to practice, learn soul tools, and have fighting experience. Obviously, they need to learn a lot more. The soul tools alone require much more courses than Shrek. A group of scientists and a group of professional boxers fight. It would be weird if they can win. It is really a loss to communicate with them.

What kind of Shura Blood Sword, Infinite Sword System, and entire spiritual soul ring are needed to have this martial soul? The soul skills are shared like Huo Yuhao's, and then the entire soul. If you build a signal tower behind, the Internet and AI will come, right? If you have a bigger brain, you can just use the whole, structure, analysis, and directly analyze the Herrscher😊 Or use the Ice and Fire Eyes and the Fire Dragon King corpse as the core of the Flame Law. Each person has a pseudo-Sage of Heavenly Fire. If he plays like this, he can even give Huo Yuhao one. The plot is that Huo Yuhao shouted to Tang San, "Sky Fire, take out the sheath." (ಡ艸ಡ)Pfft, it's all written as a fan. It's hard to watch if you don't have a lot of imagination. It's just normal martial arts and plot upgrades. Whether it's QQ or Qidian, there are a lot of them, so it's fun to do things~(￣▽￣~)~

I don't know why I'm complaining. After reading so many Douluo fans, this is the first time I see a protagonist who can't even control his martial soul. He used to swallow everything, but now he also swallows the Eye of Destiny and the dragon spear of the auspicious beast, so he just grabs it, but after grabbing it, he doesn't see how much the protagonist has strengthened, which is outrageous and outrageous. Douluo's fantasy sewer is also a fantasy. Setting the inherent barrier according to the moon is the miracle closest to magic, but it is not magic after all. Red A is a protagonist in the moon, but his strength is far from the real bosses of the moon. Karna, the little sun, can't beat him. Moreover, the moon's own worldview is just a surface regardless of the outside world. Yi Lao, a demigod from the Holy Demon Continent who didn't want to become a god, was unable to do anything with the martial soul-formed Infinite Sword System. He couldn't even figure out what was going on. He couldn't do anything about the Infinite Sword System's repeated forcible actions. I can't say whether he was trying to make the Infinite Sword System look bad, or suppressing the protagonist's strength, or suppressing Yi Lao, or weakening the auspicious beast that turned into a human being? It's not that the author's writing is not good, it's actually pretty good, but to be honest, I really can't accept this terrible situation where the protagonist can't even fully control his own fundamental power. I've tolerated it several times before, and I'm still here now. Why don't the author directly tell me what else the Infinite Sword System needs? When the protagonist becomes a god in the future, will he appear again and eat the protagonist's divine core and divine status to strengthen the Infinite Sword System?

The author's writing is quite good, but the emotional scenes are a bit stiff. Then there's the same problem. The previous part was too slow to warm up. Douluo fans feel that it's important to have some impact at the beginning, so now the fans are basically the main body martial soul, the mythical beast martial soul or the ultimate. Wuhun, at least, is a twin martial soul. In short, the main purpose is to attract people's attention. This book is a bit dull at the beginning. Some readers left before they saw the hot spots. It is a rare Douluo fan without any poisonous points in the whole book. This is a good book. The above is my personal opinion. Then later readers at least saw that the competition was the climax. The author's design was quite good. So far, there has been no character collapse or combat power collapse. The protagonist is not a bully or a stallion. He is quite rational, has a flexible bottom line, and is decisive in killing. The Dai brothers will kill as they say. Currently, the heroine is the Snow Emperor, and the teacher is Electrolux, who belongs to the sun and moon camp. The time traveler is familiar with the plot, and has confessed to Electrolux. The old man said that he has never seen anything small like a big storm. He is hostile to Tang San, the enemy is overt and we are covert, and he has picked peaches several times without being noticed. Electrolux is now dissecting Tang San's spiritual consciousness, and helps the auspicious animal to block the disaster so that she will not become Wutong's nourishment. The current plot is Shrek's exchange student. Protagonist Martial Soul: Unlimited Sword System (cos Emiya Shirou) Realm: Soul King (First Soul Core) Mental power: Titled Douluo (Secret Technique passed down by Ilex) Combat power: Invincible under Contra Achievements: Defeated everyone under Contra in Shrek's inner courtyard, shot Dai Yaoheng to death, one person defeated Huo Gua and Wang Dong's fusion skills Soul bones: Millennium Silver Wolf 🐺 arm bone, ten thousand year tardigrade torso bone, ten thousand year time skull ps: The protagonist's soul bone is transformed into a sword bone after fusion. The age is meaningless, just depends on the ability. The tardigrade is equal to Tang San's Blue Silver Emperor leg bone. Weapons Reserve: Golden Dragon Spear (cut off Hu Tang San's, saved the auspicious beast) Emperor Sword Red A's clothes, double swords, and bow are enough for cos anyway Hidden identity: Son of the World (dark) (On the surface, the Son of the World is Huo Gua, but Tang San arranged a dog leash, and everyone understands, so it is considered useless) Backer: Snow Emperor (level 99 combat power, wife?) Electrolux (a demigod with extremely high gold content, and a complete version, not a disposable fuel like Huo Gua) , the teacher of the protagonist, a real closed disciple, Master knows all about it, a big scientific research boss, he directly knows what skills the protagonist needs, he is studying Tang San's divine consciousness, and it is visually estimated that he must be at least a top-level god in the later stage to become a god), Kong Deming (the Sun and Moon Empire walks sideways) Soul skills: According to the red A, directly search the Baidu Heroic Spirit Illustrated Book of Wei Gong Shirou

6. A game from 140 to 240, I regret booking all

I've taken a rough look at it now, and there are a few things I don't like about it. The biggest drawback is that the protagonist is weak. The first is swordsmanship. The protagonist's swordsmanship turns out to be from the Snow Emperor Sect. . . In my opinion, there is no decent swordsmanship in Douluo's skill-based battle. Even Tang San's martial arts may not be comparable to the heroic spirits in Fate. Swordsmanship like Red A may be lost before the opponent's skills are used. It is better to arrange the swordsmanship ability of Red A for the protagonist. The second is the soul skill. I thought that the protagonist would be given a red-A treasure phantom, such as the Sevenfold Ring of Blazing Heaven, but so far there is none. The fourth soul skill is an inexplicable enhancement. I don't understand why it is an enhancement? Forcibly arranging the projection is too weak and then using a soul skill? The third is the protagonist's body. So far, he doesn't have a hundred thousand year old soul bone or soul ring. He dares to absorb a thousand year old soul bone. I really don't know what to say. The current physical fitness of the protagonist is okay in Dou 1, but not good enough in Dou 2, and may not even be as good as Huo Yuhao in the second ring. At this level, I still want to take on Tang San, but for now I can't compare to Huo Yuhao, unless he becomes a heroic spirit in the future. Next is the infinite sword system. The infinite sword system feels quite embarrassing. It is too strong to be copied, and the number of weak ones cannot be piled up. Maybe the halo of the protagonist ranks first. (Fate/EXTRA line) At present, the protagonist is holding the unlimited sword system of this line. Another one is magic power/soul power. Projecting weapons and opening inherent enchantments require a lot of magic power/soul power support. Later, the protagonist will also learn necromancy. I don't know if the magic power is enough. Why not the author arranges a Holy Grail for the protagonist (laughs) Although the author continues It emphasizes that the protagonist is strong, but it cannot be seen so far. It feels like even Huo Yuhao can't beat him without the protagonist's halo. After all, Huo Yuhao's ice blast is no worse than Psychic Storm, and the ice blast uses less soul power. If he adds martial soul fusion skills, it feels like the protagonist will be killed instantly. . . . I hope the author will strengthen the protagonist, arrange the seven-fold ring of blazing sky and other treasures, open the inherent barrier as soon as possible, and strengthen the body swordsmanship as soon as possible. What are you doing here, waiting for the finale to show up again? The emotional line is quickly advanced, and the 400,000-word male protagonist and female protagonist have a few dialogues to count. It's so worrying. But in general, it is Liang Cao +, and it is considered to be better written by Douluo II!

I just finished reading "Ice Demon Yuhao" a few days ago, and I started reading this book today. To be honest, the first half of it was really boring. I feel like half of the characters in this fanfic are original. I came here for the purpose of fanfic and I really have no interest in originality. Then the previous plot was too bland and not exciting. The last thing Douluo is afraid of is cheating. Dou Duo has a pair of gods to hold Tang Buddha and send him to the God King; Dou Er starts with seven hundred thousand year soul beasts behind the million year soul beast, and there is also Extreme Douluo to teach his skills, with Lao Yi as the teacher. Huo Gua's configuration can be said to be heading towards the God King. If he hadn't been targeted by Tang Buddha, it wouldn't have been so miserable. If Huo Gua had not The Buddha of Tang Dynasty in Du Dou is a piece of rubbish; after Tang 50 in Dou San, he has an artifact (Golden Dragon Spear) and a super artifact (Poseidon Trident) by his side, and the origin of the Golden Dragon King guarantees that he will become a god in the future; in Dou Si, it seems that the rotten salted fish comes with a super artifact (Tian Sheng Split Abyss Halberd) and a bunch of artifacts behind it, and the Dragon God bloodline is heading towards the God King. If you don't cheat in the early stage, readers will feel uncomfortable watching it, and if you can't retain readers, there will be fewer people who cheat in the later stage. This book currently has two shortcomings. One is that there are too many originals in the early stage, and the other is that it is not very enjoyable in the early stage. The Ice Demon Next Door doesn't start out strong or invincible, but the characters from the original work are posted on Next Door, which looks interesting and a bit refreshing. Having said all that, the point is not whether you can cheat or not in the early stage, but the pleasure brought by cheating. This is purely a complaint about what I feel unhappy about now. I still hope that the author will be less original when writing fanfics and write more original characters. Otherwise, what is the name of a fanfic?

Don't lick Huo Yuhao, he is such a disgusting person. He is the only one who is miserable when he is licked by a bunch of Dou Er. There are a lot of Dou Er who are even worse than him. They blow up the sun and the moon, build a tower soul-destroying beast. He has taken all the good names and good deeds.