Douluo: Humans in This World Are Fake Gods

The author's writing is quite good, but the emotional scenes are a bit stiff. Then there's the same problem. The previous part was too slow to warm up. Douluo fans feel that it's important to have some impact at the beginning, so now the fans are basically the main body martial soul, the mythical beast martial soul or the ultimate. Wuhun, at least, is a twin martial soul. In short, the main purpose is to attract people's attention. This book is a bit dull at the beginning. Some readers left before they saw the hot spots. It is a rare Douluo fan without any poisonous points in the whole book. This is a good book. The above is my personal opinion. Then later readers at least saw that the competition was the climax. The author's design was quite good. So far, there has been no character collapse or combat power collapse. The protagonist is not a bully or a stallion. He is quite rational, has a flexible bottom line, and is decisive in killing. The Dai brothers will kill as they say. Currently, the heroine is the Snow Emperor, and the teacher is Electrolux, who belongs to the sun and moon camp. The time traveler is familiar with the plot, and has confessed to Electrolux. The old man said that he has never seen anything small like a big storm. He is hostile to Tang San, the enemy is overt and we are covert, and he has picked peaches several times without being noticed. Electrolux is now dissecting Tang San's spiritual consciousness, and helps the auspicious animal to block the disaster so that she will not become Wutong's nourishment. The current plot is Shrek's exchange student. Protagonist Martial Soul: Unlimited Sword System (cos Emiya Shirou) Realm: Soul King (First Soul Core) Mental power: Titled Douluo (Secret Technique passed down by Ilex) Combat power: Invincible under Contra Achievements: Defeated everyone under Contra in Shrek's inner courtyard, shot Dai Yaoheng to death, one person defeated Huo Gua and Wang Dong's fusion skills Soul bones: Millennium Silver Wolf 🐺 arm bone, ten thousand year tardigrade torso bone, ten thousand year time skull ps: The protagonist's soul bone is transformed into a sword bone after fusion. The age is meaningless, just depends on the ability. The tardigrade is equal to Tang San's Blue Silver Emperor leg bone. Weapons Reserve: Golden Dragon Spear (cut off Hu Tang San's, saved the auspicious beast) Emperor Sword Red A's clothes, double swords, and bow are enough for cos anyway Hidden identity: Son of the World (dark) (On the surface, the Son of the World is Huo Gua, but Tang San arranged a dog leash, and everyone understands, so it is considered useless) Backer: Snow Emperor (level 99 combat power, wife?) Electrolux (a demigod with extremely high gold content, and a complete version, not a disposable fuel like Huo Gua) , the teacher of the protagonist, a real closed disciple, Master knows all about it, a big scientific research boss, he directly knows what skills the protagonist needs, he is studying Tang San's divine consciousness, and it is visually estimated that he must be at least a top-level god in the later stage to become a god), Kong Deming (the Sun and Moon Empire walks sideways) Soul skills: According to the red A, directly search the Baidu Heroic Spirit Illustrated Book of Wei Gong Shirou

Protagonist Martial Soul: Unlimited Sword System (cos Emiya Shirou) Realm: Soul King (First Soul Core) Mental power: Titled Douluo (Secret Technique passed down by Ilex) Combat power: Invincible under Contra Achievements: Defeated everyone under Contra in Shrek's inner courtyard, shot Dai Yaoheng to death, one person defeated Huo Gua and Wang Dong's fusion skills Soul bones: Millennium Silver Wolf 🐺 arm bone, ten thousand year tardigrade torso bone, ten thousand year time skull ps: The protagonist's soul bone is transformed into a sword bone after fusion. The age is meaningless, just depends on the ability. The tardigrade is equal to Tang San's Blue Silver Emperor leg bone. Weapons Reserve: Golden Dragon Spear (cut off Hu Tang San's, saved the auspicious beast) Emperor Sword Red A's clothes, double swords, and bow are enough for cos anyway Hidden identity: Son of the World (dark) (On the surface, the Son of the World is Huo Gua, but Tang San arranged a dog leash, and everyone understands, so it is considered useless) Backer: Snow Emperor (level 99 combat power, wife?) Electrolux (a demigod with extremely high gold content, and a complete version, not a disposable fuel like Huo Gua, the teacher of the protagonist , a real closed disciple, Master knows all about it, a scientific research boss, what skills the protagonist needs is directly revealed, he is studying Tang San's divine consciousness, and visual inspection indicates that he must be at least a top-level god in the later stage to become a god), Kong Deming (the Sun and Moon Empire walks sideways) Soul skills: According to the red A, directly search the Baidu Heroic Spirit Illustrated Book of Emiya Shirou I originally wanted to submit a character derivation, but I don't know how to do it, so I will post one alone.

It seems to be pretty good. Why do so many comments in the comment group say it's not good? Although it is a little slow to warm up, it is still very good, especially this kind of step-by-step improvement. After all, this is not an invincible novel. It is still very good to slowly grow from weak to strong step by step. However, the number of words is still too few, so I will start a custom version and keep it.

There was a big bug and Electrolux was not around. More people would die when Shrek met the messenger of death on the way to the competition. Huo Yuhao directly sniped with that person in the middle, neither dead nor disabled, but he came to the competition alive and well.

To be honest, it was Dai Yuhao and Tang Wutong who came to the end, not Huo Yuhao and Wang Dong. One of Huo and Wang went crazy, and the other was dissected into pieces.

In fact, Sun and Moon are really much better than Shi Laike. During exchanges and studies, Shi Laike's teachers are soul emperors, but Sun and Moon have sent out eighth-level soul masters. Moreover, Sun and Moon's students can't learn anything at all from Shi Laike. Soul master training only needs to learn a meditation method. As for those who are taught about soul beasts, they are as stupid as people nowadays who are taught by Xinhua Dictionary. Shrek is either practicing or fighting every day. Can't he upgrade quickly? Sun and Moon have to practice, learn soul tools, and have fighting experience. Obviously, they need to learn a lot more. The soul tools alone require much more courses than Shrek. A group of scientists and a group of professional boxers fight. It would be weird if they can win. It is really a loss to communicate with them.

What kind of Shura Blood Sword, Infinite Sword System, and entire spiritual soul ring are needed to have this martial soul? The soul skills are shared like Huo Yuhao's, and then the entire soul. If you build a signal tower behind, the Internet and AI will come, right? If you have a bigger brain, you can just use the whole, structure, analysis, and directly analyze the Herrscher😊 Or use the Ice and Fire Eyes and the Fire Dragon King corpse as the core of the Flame Law. Each person has a pseudo-Sage of Heavenly Fire. If he plays like this, he can even give Huo Yuhao one. The plot is that Huo Yuhao shouted to Tang San, "Sky Fire, take out the sheath." (ಡ艸ಡ)Pfft, it's all written as a fan. It's hard to watch if you don't have a lot of imagination. It's just normal martial arts and plot upgrades. Whether it's QQ or Qidian, there are a lot of them, so it's fun to do things~(￣▽￣~)~

I don't know why I'm complaining. After reading so many Douluo fans, this is the first time I see a protagonist who can't even control his martial soul. He used to swallow everything, but now he also swallows the Eye of Destiny and the dragon spear of the auspicious beast, so he just grabs it, but after grabbing it, he doesn't see how much the protagonist has strengthened, which is outrageous and outrageous. Douluo's fantasy sewer is also a fantasy. Setting the inherent barrier according to the moon is the miracle closest to magic, but it is not magic after all. Red A is a protagonist in the moon, but his strength is far from the real bosses of the moon. Karna, the little sun, can't beat him. Moreover, the moon's own worldview is just a surface regardless of the outside world. Yi Lao, a demigod from the Holy Demon Continent who didn't want to become a god, was unable to do anything with the martial soul-formed Infinite Sword System. He couldn't even figure out what was going on. He couldn't do anything about the Infinite Sword System's repeated forcible actions. I can't say whether he was trying to make the Infinite Sword System look bad, or suppressing the protagonist's strength, or suppressing Yi Lao, or weakening the auspicious beast that turned into a human being? It's not that the author's writing is not good, it's actually pretty good, but to be honest, I really can't accept this terrible situation where the protagonist can't even fully control his own fundamental power. I've tolerated it several times before, and I'm still here now. Why don't the author directly tell me what else the Infinite Sword System needs? When the protagonist becomes a god in the future, will he appear again and eat the protagonist's divine core and divine status to strengthen the Infinite Sword System?

6. A game from 140 to 240, I regret booking all

I've taken a rough look at it now, and there are a few things I don't like about it. The biggest drawback is that the protagonist is weak. The first is swordsmanship. The protagonist's swordsmanship turns out to be from the Snow Emperor Sect. . . In my opinion, there is no decent swordsmanship in Douluo's skill-based battle. Even Tang San's martial arts may not be comparable to the heroic spirits in Fate. Swordsmanship like Red A may be lost before the opponent's skills are used. It is better to arrange the swordsmanship ability of Red A for the protagonist. The second is the soul skill. I thought that the protagonist would be given a red-A treasure phantom, such as the Sevenfold Ring of Blazing Heaven, but so far there is none. The fourth soul skill is an inexplicable enhancement. I don't understand why it is an enhancement? Forcibly arranging the projection is too weak and then using a soul skill? The third is the protagonist's body. So far, he doesn't have a hundred thousand year old soul bone or soul ring. He dares to absorb a thousand year old soul bone. I really don't know what to say. The current physical fitness of the protagonist is okay in Dou 1, but not good enough in Dou 2, and may not even be as good as Huo Yuhao in the second ring. At this level, I still want to take on Tang San, but for now I can't compare to Huo Yuhao, unless he becomes a heroic spirit in the future. Next is the infinite sword system. The infinite sword system feels quite embarrassing. It is too strong to be copied, and the number of weak ones cannot be piled up. Maybe the halo of the protagonist ranks first. (Fate/EXTRA line) At present, the protagonist is holding the unlimited sword system of this line. Another one is magic power/soul power. Projecting weapons and opening inherent enchantments require a lot of magic power/soul power support. Later, the protagonist will also learn necromancy. I don't know if the magic power is enough. Why not the author arranges a Holy Grail for the protagonist (laughs) Although the author continues It emphasizes that the protagonist is strong, but it cannot be seen so far. It feels like even Huo Yuhao can't beat him without the protagonist's halo. After all, Huo Yuhao's ice blast is no worse than Psychic Storm, and the ice blast uses less soul power. If he adds martial soul fusion skills, it feels like the protagonist will be killed instantly. . . . I hope the author will strengthen the protagonist, arrange the seven-fold ring of blazing sky and other treasures, open the inherent barrier as soon as possible, and strengthen the body swordsmanship as soon as possible. What are you doing here, waiting for the finale to show up again? The emotional line is quickly advanced, and the 400,000-word male protagonist and female protagonist have a few dialogues to count. It's so worrying. But in general, it is Liang Cao +, and it is considered to be better written by Douluo II!

I just finished reading "Ice Demon Yuhao" a few days ago, and I started reading this book today. To be honest, the first half of it was really boring. I feel like half of the characters in this fanfic are original. I came here for the purpose of fanfic and I really have no interest in originality. Then the previous plot was too bland and not exciting. The last thing Douluo is afraid of is cheating. Dou Duo has a pair of gods to hold Tang Buddha and send him to the God King; Dou Er starts with seven hundred thousand year soul beasts behind the million year soul beast, and there is also Extreme Douluo to teach his skills, with Lao Yi as the teacher. Huo Gua's configuration can be said to be heading towards the God King. If he hadn't been targeted by Tang Buddha, it wouldn't have been so miserable. If Huo Gua had not The Buddha of Tang Dynasty in Du Dou is a piece of rubbish; after Tang 50 in Dou San, he has an artifact (Golden Dragon Spear) and a super artifact (Poseidon Trident) by his side, and the origin of the Golden Dragon King guarantees that he will become a god in the future; in Dou Si, it seems that the rotten salted fish comes with a super artifact (Tian Sheng Split Abyss Halberd) and a bunch of artifacts behind it, and the Dragon God bloodline is heading towards the God King. If you don't cheat in the early stage, readers will feel uncomfortable watching it, and if you can't retain readers, there will be fewer people who cheat in the later stage. This book currently has two shortcomings. One is that there are too many originals in the early stage, and the other is that it is not very enjoyable in the early stage. The Ice Demon Next Door doesn't start out strong or invincible, but the characters from the original work are posted on Next Door, which looks interesting and a bit refreshing. Having said all that, the point is not whether you can cheat or not in the early stage, but the pleasure brought by cheating. This is purely a complaint about what I feel unhappy about now. I still hope that the author will be less original when writing fanfics and write more original characters. Otherwise, what is the name of a fanfic?

Don't lick Huo Yuhao, he is such a disgusting person. He is the only one who is miserable when he is licked by a bunch of Dou Er. There are a lot of Dou Er who are even worse than him. They blow up the sun and the moon, build a tower soul-destroying beast. He has taken all the good names and good deeds.

The biggest advantage of this book is that the author's writing style is very good and there are almost no poisonous points, so it is easy to keep reading. Also, the single heroine Snow Emperor is very novel, which is also a reason to stick to it. However, after reading more than 400 chapters, I felt that the protagonist did not feel any pleasure when acquiring soul rings and soul bones. The protagonist's fighting method also felt to me that it was too one-dimensional, and he would GG if he was targeted.

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If you want a eunuch, at least send out an announcement that he is running away, and stop baiting readers.

It's basically not poisonous, but there are too many flaws, mainly reflected in the author's poor control over the cool points. One of the great cool points among Douluo fans is the leapfrog absorption of soul rings. Then others were surprised when they saw it. In the end, you basically just brushed it off, just like one yellow and two purple are very common. I don't know what the use of your second thousand soul ring is. You can't pretend to be a b, and soul skills and soul rings have nothing to do with each other. There is also the issue of combat power. I feel that the protagonist's combat power is a mystery. You can say he is weak, but he is not weak and can leapfrog levels. But if you want to say where he is strong, you can't tell. It feels very fragmented and confusing. There is no clear reflection of combat power. The fighting process is very thin and not three-dimensional. The protagonist's fighting style also feels unsystematic. In addition to character creation, I don't know if you want to reflect the growth process of a protagonist. I feel that the protagonist is often very ruthless. A time traveler behaves like a little kid. Many very simple problems require other people to remind them, "Oh, so that's how it is." I have to say that I have never thought of what happened. Let the dyed guy bring it up, which gives people a feeling of imbecility. Also, I don't know if you have any obsession with candied haws. I'll give you a novel about the candied haws. There is no need to use such childish gimmicks to create the character. If you want to write about the growth and changes of the protagonist from childhood to adulthood, then don't set it as a time traveler. This will only appear very contradictory and fragmented. Finally, there is the issue of pacing. Needless to say, less than half of the readers will survive the 100 chapters. There is really nothing exciting at the beginning. Fans are really digging their own graves by writing like this.

I hope the heroine will add Meng Hongchen, Bingdi and Ruibeast

I have read Chapter 256 so far. How can I put it? It's okay, but it's really a bit uncomfortable. One hundred chapters in one game, six really, it's really numb, and there are plug-ins. The author describes it. Is this really an infinite sword system? It's not that the protagonist cannot grow slowly, but it just feels not as good as Huo Gua. I feel that the second ring paired with Wang Dong can beat the current protagonist in seconds. In addition, there are typos and incorrect sentences. Except for the first few chapters, which I forgot, there are typos and incorrect sentences in almost every subsequent chapter! Occasionally a typo is not a problem. You have read almost every chapter. Because of these typos, I have wanted to abandon the book several times, so Q

I originally wanted to be more poisonous. After all, the plot concept is very good, and the relationship between the single female protagonist is not bad, but when I saw the point 335, I really couldn't stand it. What a lofty ideal, Shrek rescued the villagers who were killed, and then killed the villagers because he was afraid of the villagers being retaliated. Then the protagonist saw the people who killed Shrek, but was stimulated by their words, and then fell into a simulation, and came up with something that I didn't expect. The answer, his decision to kill the villagers after rescuing them, is a problem with my three views. Why can't I really understand this approach? I overcame the poison and boredom in the past, and thought it was going to climax, but I didn't expect it. In the eyes of the soul master, civilians are not important. Saving them is just for their own achievements and sense of honor, so I kill them after saving them just to prevent the evil soul master from disgusting me. As a time traveler, I understand very well that he stayed away from Tang San and lived a happy life for himself, but as a person who received compulsory education, I really didn't expect him to do such stupid things. Did the author just come out of prison? His brain circuit is really fresh. Speaking of which, the Wuhun Palace in Dou Yi's original work didn't know how to do anything. From that moment on, I felt that the protagonist was more disgusting than Tang San. I was really curious about why he didn't kill all the civilians like this. Did he think that this way the evil spirit master would have no one to torture, and his justice would not be reflected? I really can't figure out what kind of person can write such a protagonist. Did you kill your family members when they were terminally ill to prevent them from being tortured, and how much money it saved you? It's very reasonable, no, no, when he learned that he had given up on himself because of the terminal illness, you should have said that your disease can be saved, but the money is not enough. Instead of spending the money on you, it is better for me to kill you, so that you will be tortured less and I will spend less money. I really can't figure out why he can write such wonderful plots. Can any kind-hearted person give me an answer? Why (●.●)❓Is it because the author likes the feeling of hope first and then despair, and then grafts it onto the protagonist? It is true that you have no obligation to help those civilians who were killed. I can understand this. Continue reading disgustingly to see those advantages, but why do you decide the fate of those civilians who have nothing to do with you? The young man who slays the dragon will eventually become an evil dragon. You have developed a heart filthier than the dragon before you slay it! No solution? You can't motivate yourself to improve your abilities, and the world will be clear in the future. You don't need the world to be free of dark sides, but you can at least be as good as Wuhun Temple. You can take them to the sun and moon to settle down. First, save as many as you can, and bring in that person's perspective and hand it over to the local government. If they don't do anything, it won't mean that none of them can survive. I don't hate indifferent people so much. I really hate people who think they are deciding the fate of others. Anyway, I can't stand it anymore. Maybe you don't lack me as a reader, but I still want to advise the author that the three views really need to be improved. They can be tortured by evil soul masters. This is their fate, because they are evil soul masters, but you kill them yourself. This is also their fate. But what is the difference between you and the evil soul master at this time? No, this is not as good as the evil soul master, and it is not as calm as others. I remember that the book "Bing Shen" was very good and I liked it a lot. Why did it change when I changed the book? Did you blink because you were threatened? I think there is a book by Dou Yi called Qianli Cultivation? There is a plot in it because Qian Renxue gave priority to civilians after weighing the pros and cons for the undercover mission, but the male protagonist parted ways with her directly because of this. Maybe this is due to the male protagonist's disappointment in Qian Renxue and his self-blame for not teaching her well, but I really think this male protagonist is really likable, because since he is in charge, he will take care of it to the end and try his best in everything. And instead of killing them directly, if you just ask if you want to be tortured to death, I can give you a happy one now, and I think it's okay. People with bad thoughts will not have a smooth life. I really advise the author to be kind.

What is it written about? The first part is fine, but the second part is getting harder and harder to understand what I'm writing. After watching it, I kept saying that such-and-such double standards are disgusting and hypocritical. The protagonist seems to be a little too much, and. Why do you feel that the protagonist is becoming more and more like what he said? The protagonist always likes to stand on the highest moral point, which is really not common.

If it's cool, you can either hit it or not Deliberately downgrade the level at the beginning In the Soul Fighting Competition, the protagonist fights a Soul Sect with its own martial spirit. He can't skip the level, and he has to break through the Soul Sect and defeat the Soul Sect When the protagonist's trump card is removed It was the two arrows that killed Electrolux that killed the Bloody Soul Emperor The Snow Emperor beat Xuanzi violently and deliberately refused to kill him. He also had to conceal the Snow Emperor's identity and refused to let the Snow Emperor join Sun and Moon. He had to let Shrek continue to compete, which made me sick

A new chapter tells the truth, they don't betray. Wang Dong, it's strange that Huo Yuhao doesn't betray. In a sense, it doesn't count as betraying them. There should be no such thing as loyalty, and their loyalty seems to be to the Academy of Warcraft and the God King, in the original work.

Author Tang Ya. There are some things you did in this plot that are not very good, not very good, just terrible. I haven't finished watching it yet, but with the way it starts, I feel that there will definitely be no good stuff later. First, avenging your parents is a matter of course. Second, when he killed someone while under control, it was not his own doing. Since it was not his own doing, how could he be guilty? It's not something you did. There's nothing wrong with it. At most, he was just used or manipulated. No one can forgive her for others, but no one has the right to blame her. If your parents were killed, could you resist taking revenge? If you were mentally controlled by someone, what method could be used to control you, and you ended up killing her? You killed someone, and you didn't kill it yourself, you were just used by someone to kill that person with your own hands. What does it mean? Nothing can mean sin. The evil soul master is the culprit, not her. The most is to let him spend the rest of his life to make up for the mistakes he made. It's not what you said. Kill him. What happens after killing him? Is it useful? It's useless. It's better to let him live to make up for the mistakes he made without his knowledge.

In fact, I have wanted to ask for a long time about the Infinite Sword Crafting Spirit's questions about the opening and closing of soul rings. Hey, the Seven Treasures Glazed Sect and the Nine Treasures Glazed Sect don't exist, right? Or the Nine Treasure Glazed Tile Pagoda and the Seven Treasure Glazed Tile Pagoda never existed. The martial soul soul ring seems to be similar to a switch. The protagonist still needs to study the infinite sword system? It took so long to confirm that his martial spirit was not similar? It looks the same. The infinite sword-made martial soul soul ring is just a switch. It still takes so long, and the writing seems to be like it. Only the protagonist's martial spirit is special. The Nine-Hearted Begonia is almost the same. Does the protagonist not have that memory? Haven't you seen the protagonist's previous life? In fact, I have wanted to ask for a long time. Have you ever seen the protagonist in his previous life? What are the attributes of the protagonist? What are the attributes of the Holy Spirit? I can't understand it anymore. Why don't you do that? Ma Xiaotao and Zhang Lexuan were killed. It doesn't sound good. They are all from that college. Why keep it? In a sense, it is really problematic for the guy from Zhang Lequan to join that college. In a sense, other fan fictions can be said to be a conspiracy theory and I agree with it, but after all, he is also from that college, and why do you want to recruit those few who want to destroy that college and then destroy them all, leaving no one alive? It's wrong, don't you understand? But they are all subordinates of that certain god king. How to say it? As for the plot. I always feel a little unsmooth, unnatural, and a little uncomfortable. Are you okay? Infinite sword-made martial spirit. Is to copy its characteristics. Well. The Golden Dragon Spear follows. Characteristics of the Silver Dragon Spear. The characteristics of the golden dragon gun are swallowing and sharpness, while the characteristics of the silver dragon gun are elemental control. The Silver Dragon Spear won't devour it. That doesn't seem right. Author, I have no problem with you changing it beyond recognition, but you should at least make it clear. In this novel, I feel more and more confused about what you are writing about?

I have never seen such a trashy protagonist in a trashy novel

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