The Darkborn Demon Sword of Douluo Dalu

I've written everything, yet it seems I haven't thought of anything at all; it's tasteless to read, but a pity to throw away.

I heard the author likes to wear black stockings, so I came to check it out.

I don't know if it's because I didn't like it, but it felt disjointed. It was like you wrote everything, yet nothing at all.

6. The synopsis describes the character as ruthless and decisive, but all the characters are women, and the protagonist is portrayed as deeply affectionate, which feels somewhat jarring.

It seems that the concept of "evil soul masters" doesn't exist in the first installment of the Douyi series. If we had to define it, Bibi Dong and Ma Hongjun could be considered evil soul masters, right?

When I saw that the protagonist was going to recruit Zhu Tiancai, I actually felt a little excited. Why?

Well written! I read it all! The character settings are very reasonable. From my perspective, I also like the female leads Qian Renxue and Zhu Zhuqing! I don't understand how you're going to handle Bibi Dong later! And from the author's point of view, the mother-daughter relationship will definitely improve in the future! Overall, it's a relatively high-quality Douluo Continent fanfiction. The author might be a beginner and the writing might be a bit stiff, but I believe the author will improve!

Author, could you please add Zhu Zhuqing and Zhu Zhuyun as female leads?

The author has a suggestion: there's no need to repeatedly and meticulously describe the corruption of the nobles (government) of the Star Luo or Heaven Dou Empires. Just a brief mention would suffice. The original work didn't actually delve too much into the status of the two empires and the Spirit Hall among the common people.

Not good, not bad, just okay, but too bland.