The Darkborn Demon Sword of Douluo Dalu

I have written everything but seem to have thought of nothing. It is tasteless and a pity to throw away.

I heard that the author knows how to wear black stockings, so I came over to take a look.

I don't know if I don't like it, but I looked at it in a daze, and it felt like you wrote everything, but you didn't write anything.

6. In the introduction, the killing is decisive, the characters are all female, and the protagonist is the most affectionate, which is a bit of a drama.

By the way, Dou Yi doesn't seem to have the concept of an evil soul master. If I insist on saying so, Bibi Dong and Ma Hongjun can be considered evil soul masters.

When I saw that the protagonist wanted to take Zhu Tiancai, I was a little bit excited. Why?

Very well written! Read them all! The character design is very reasonable, even from my perspective, the heroines Qian Renxue and Zhu Zhuqing are also good! Bibi Dong, I don't understand what you are going to do next! And from the author's point of view, the relationship between mother and daughter will definitely get better in the future! All in all, it is a relatively high-quality Douluo fan novel. Maybe the author is a novice and his writing style is a bit stiff, but I believe the author will be better!

Author, can you add Zhu Zhuqing and Zhu Zhuyun as the heroines?

The author would like to make a suggestion. There is no need to repeatedly describe the corruption of the nobility (government) of Xingluo or Tiandou Empire. Just mention it a little. The original work actually does not pay much attention to the status of the two empires and Wuhun Palace among the civilians. You write the fan like this but it makes people feel uncomfortable. I can't find an adjective. That's about it. It's written too deliberately. Spring and Autumn style of writing is enough.

Not good, not bad, just okay, just too bland