In the Endless Sea, I Seek Immortality by Raising Monsters

Didn't you say a word when you entered the palace?

In fact, it's quite cool that you gave the protagonist this hook, but you wrote this protagonist too frivolously. Every time I write about the protagonist escaping from death, it feels too deliberate.

In a secret realm, the protagonist was plotted twice, and he was the only one plotted. It really makes no sense for you to write like this

The book is quite good, but I really hate the crappy beginning. It's really just a thousand stories, and I have to torture the protagonist. I don't understand why I can't continue writing if I don't have a crappy beginning. Why does it still stay in the era of Fighting to Break the Sphere at the beginning? I really don't understand (=_=)

Humble author, apologize online. (If you have any dissatisfaction, you can come in and say it. The author knows his mistakes and can correct them!!! Because this is my first time writing, there are many problems. Please forgive me. It's not particularly unpleasant. I believe the author! Woohoo... I can bear it!)

I have to say that the protagonist is really low-level. It is recognized that Camel Mountain Turtle cannot transform into a monster, but all the protagonists can transform once they come. Do you think those bosses are fools? You poor boy suddenly spends money like water. You'll be done with it if the police check it. You even took out the blood semen. You have such a low IQ.

When will the family be wiped out? Let me see.

What's the matter? The protagonist is also a child of a big family, but when he first started practicing, it didn't explain what skills the protagonist had or what the family taught him. If the protagonist knew everything in advance, every time the protagonist broke through, the protagonist seemed to know nothing.

I have a daughter and I don't want to see her anymore.

I have read more than 30 chapters, and I feel uncomfortable and even the protagonist is a bit aggrieved. Such protagonists are not popular these days.

Don't come to Cthulhu, that thing is spiritual pollution

I feel like I want to destroy this broken family, I'm speechless😒

All I can say is that the plot is so trivial that I didn't even know what it was when I wrote it. Alas, it's really interesting. It feels very pity. I can only say that the plot is too unsatisfactory. They have all arrived on their own land. If you discover something, you don't report it directly. You are busy working here and there, making you feel like a lonely person. I'm afraid there will be another disgusting plot later. The protagonist has to personally handle every little thing, so why not report it to the family? There is no benefit at all. Alas, I really don't want to watch this kind of plot. It's just like letting shit out of poison.

How are the grades of treasures, spiritual plants, etc., And what are the corresponding levels of cultivation? I saw that a divine fetus has seven-grade spiritual plants (which is very different from the treasures I saw in "Hey, Demonic Way" next door).

Accepted, raise the demon well and become a daughter slave.

What you wrote, if I were the protagonist and had some strength, I would immediately leave the family and give it to a garbage monster, and I would have to wait 30 years to replenish it normally.

The author could write less about eating raw fish. I have always felt that eating raw food means eating raw fish and drinking blood. Moreover, there are many parasites in eating raw fish.

Hey, Demonic Way That book became popular, I have been chasing it for a long time

This setting is very familiar at the beginning. It seems to be a book called The Way of Demons.

My author, are you in, it's been so long?

It looks really frustrating. I want to know in which chapter I can kill this inexplicable big brother?