In the Endless Sea, I Raise Monsters to Pursue Immortality

Actually, the power-up you gave the protagonist is pretty awesome, but you wrote him too recklessly. Every time he escapes death, it feels too contrived.

In a secret realm, the protagonist was ambushed twice, and he was the only one ambushed. This kind of writing really doesn't make sense.

The book is good, but I really hate the weak start. It's so formulaic, always having to torture the protagonist. I don't understand, do they not know how to write a story without a weak start? Why is the beginning still stuck in the era of "Battle Through the Heavens"? I really don't understand (=_=)

The humble author apologizes online. (Please feel free to comment if you have any complaints. The author acknowledges their mistakes and is willing to correct them!!! This is my first time writing, so there are many problems. Please forgive me; these are not particularly harsh words. Trust the author! Waaah… I can take it!)

I have to say, the protagonist is really pathetic. The Camel Mountain Tortoise is universally acknowledged as incapable of transforming into a demon beast, but the protagonist arrives and everyone can transform instantly. Does he think those powerful figures are idiots? You, a poor kid, suddenly start spending money like water—just wait and see if the police investigate you, and that's it. And then he brings out his blood essence—his IQ is that low?

I'll see when you wipe out the family.

To be honest, the protagonist is from a prominent family, but when he first begins cultivation, it's not explained what techniques he has or what his family knows beforehand. Instead, it's explained that he knows nothing about cultivation. Every time he breaks through a level of spiritual power, it's as if he knows nothing at all.

I had a daughter and I don't want to look at her anymore.

I've read over thirty chapters, and I'm feeling rather unsatisfied; the protagonist even seems a bit resentful. This kind of protagonist isn't popular these days.

Please, no Cthulhu stuff, that's just mental pollution.