Mortal's Road to Change

Who is the heroine? I think Nangong Wan can consider it

When writing fan fiction, you don't need to copy the entire plot, but you still have to stick to the big framework. Basically, the title of the book and the names of the characters are the same as those of mortals, and everything else is taken for granted. You can see that when you start a new book, you are afraid that you won't be able to write it well, so you rely on mortals. But if you keep writing like this, no one will read it. It's a thankless job. It's better to write a brand new novel.

This novel is unreadable. It just licks Old Devil Han hard. You can tell me that you have a plug-in and don't take the small bottle. But after you look at the back, you won't go to the ancient teleportation array. You ask Han Li to go and give the spider eggs, the Great Teleportation Order, the Mending Pill, and the residual map of the Xutian Palace to others, and they won't accept the Taoist companions. , He took Han Li with him to the Chaos Star Sea. He also said that he was going to break into the Void Heaven Palace. Han Li didn't tell you anything when he got something. He didn't just keep silent about making a fortune, but he still licked it hard. Later, he was worried that Han Li would miss the gold-eating spirit worm, so he specially brought him a spirit worm ranking list.

I suggest the author not to worry about prices. No author can compile reasonable prices. Prices are all blurred in ordinary people. I really worry about many prices in ordinary people that are unreasonable.

Then everything turns out to be just a dream for the protagonist

Your prices are too expensive, and the protagonist is worthy of a high-level monk killing people and grabbing treasures.

Mortals are cannibals in the way of heaven. The highest level monks are food in the way of heaven.

Recommended, Mortal Immortal Way

I took out that secret method just to find a reason to go to Chaotic Star Sea.

It's okay, just don't write if you don't know how to write about women. Just explain it clearly. Readers shouldn't force authors who don't know how to write about female protagonists to write, and don't force authors who have a harem not to write.

With such a big cake, those golden elixirs will kill you without looking at what kind of world it is for mortals to cultivate immortality. For a world where dozens of spiritual stones can kill people, how many thousands of spiritual stones do you have? In the early stage, you may not be cool or hide behind the scenes. Besides, you have already obtained the little jade bottle. Do you still lack resources? Why don't you hide and practice? There is no shortage of elixirs or anything else. You can buy them all in the mall anyway.

Today is already Tuesday. It seems that he is undoubtedly a eunuch.

Updates are too slow

If I remember correctly, Chen tide seems to be the "Fu Huang", right? Has he been reincarnated and rebuilt?

Readers, take a look, it's troublesome