Naruto: I Created Martial Arts in the Ninja World

Yesterday I was reading a Naruto novel written by someone else, and I found that if I removed the original CP, I would be criticized. I was a little worried that I would be criticized, and then I found that no one read my book at all, so that's okay😁 In addition, should I write the single heroine Kushina directly in the introduction, and remove the CP, so that everyone can filter. How would you like to give your opinion?

It's a dog in the early stage, but after it becomes invincible, it starts talking nonsense. Before the fight, he said a long paragraph of "Zhong Er". Crazy water word count, alas~~~

Author: A strong person should chop off his dick live, a strong person should stand on his head and run away, a strong person should...

Why do the protagonists who practice martial arts look ordinary? Was the author influenced by the protagonists of Chinese martial arts? ! Evolution represents optimization. Why can't you optimize yourself? Don't you have any self-awareness?

I haven't read it yet, but it's strange that the heroine in many fanfics recently is Shinkuna. From a personal perspective, I can't accept it at all. Of course everyone has their own favorite plot, so I can only say sorry.

It's very well written, don't write it next time.

Uzumaki Shinkuna is special in Konoha, so whoever wants to have contact with her can? As soon as I saw the heroine, I knew it was a mindless novel, so I'll give it a try by reading a few chapters.

While talking about hiding yourself, you are teaching martial arts to the redhead, right? The redhead is being watched when he discovers it, so how can he hide himself?

Actually, I'm curious about these Konoha starters. Aren't they afraid of being spied on by the third generation when they make babies with their wives in the village? Aren't you afraid of being spied on by Jiraiya when your wife goes to the hot springs outside? Or does the male protagonist have strange XP?

Sarutobi Hiruzen knows shit about Nine-Tails Chakara Mode. He only knows whether Kyuubi can be controlled

What can I say, it was really good when it was released. Before it was released, it was not inferior to Ban (one used Bai Zetsu's body, and the other was on the road and only used taijutsu). After it was released, Konoha had no strength at all (I mean Kushina hasn't done it yet)

I'm speechless. Is there any point in wearing an Uzumaki Hagoromo vest even though I'm invincible? Pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger while retaining your true identity? It's the first time I've seen such a vulgar person in the martial arts field. You deserve to see a god who is not bad.

The heroine is Uzumaki Kushina, okay, I'm done, let's run away.

Tmd, what the hell did you write? It's really rubbish. Oh, I wrote it, so that's okay.

When I saw the title of this book, I really didn't want to click on it.

Chakra is used to cut leeks. Judging from its purpose, we know that it cannot live forever. Using physical energy and mental energy to synthesize and refine chakra is constantly depleting one's body and spirit. Look at the current fantasy novels in which the cultivation system does not absorb energy from the outside world to replenish and strengthen itself. How can it be like this chakra, which consumes oneself to practice, and there is basically nothing to supplement it. It's best for the protagonist not to practice. It's best to cut other people's chakra like Otsutsuki to assist in martial arts training and healing.

I didn't write what I should have written, and there were a lot of things I shouldn't have written.

It feels like Naruto's mother is being fucked by someone else, and she feels weird.

Is this martial arts? This is obviously about cultivating immortals.

Is this the first full-strength attack? A barely surviving Madara can barely tie? The invincible and awesome rendering in the front is laughable.

I just read this book, but I already feel that his bloodline is not pure

You can see the saplings in the upper reaches of the Hokage, and it's only a matter of time before there are fewer people watching.

Not bad, well written!

Come on author, it has some minor flaws but it still looks good.

It's so beautiful that I can't sleep at night and keep reading for more!