Naruto: Founding a Martial Path in the Ninja World

Why are all the protagonists who practice martial arts so plain-looking? Were the authors influenced by those martial arts protagonists?! Evolution represents optimization, so why can't they optimize themselves too?! Don't these ugly characters have any self-awareness?

Yesterday I was reading someone else's Naruto novel and I noticed that breaking up original pairings gets you flamed. I was a little worried about getting flamed myself, but then I realized nobody reads my book, so it's fine now. 😁 Also, should I just write "Kushina, the only female lead" in the synopsis and break up the main couple pairings to make it easier for everyone to choose? What do you all think?

I haven't read it yet, but it's strange lately that several fanfictions feature Shin Kuna as the heroine. Personally, I can't accept that at all. Of course, everyone has their own preferred storylines, so I can only apologize.

Kushina Uzumaki is special in Konoha; does that mean anyone can just approach her? Just by looking at the female lead, you can tell this is a brainless story. I'll read a few chapters to see if it's worth it.

That's well written, but don't write it again next time.

You're telling me you're hiding yourself, yet you're teaching the red-haired guy martial arts? The red-haired guy is clearly being watched, how can he hide himself?

To be honest, the release of this game was a real letdown. Before its release, it held its own against Madara (one used a White Zetsu body, the other was rushing and only used taijutsu), but after its release, it lost all its prestige when fighting Konoha (and Kushina hadn't even made a move yet).

Hiruzen Sarutobi knew absolutely nothing about the Nine-Tails' chakra mode. He only knew whether or not he could control the Nine-Tails.

I'm actually quite curious about these guys who started out in Konoha. Aren't they afraid of being spied on by the Third Hokage when they're having sex with their wives in the village? Aren't they afraid of being spied on by Jiraiya when their wives go to the hot springs? Or do the male protagonists have some strange fetish?

Speechless. If you're invincible, why wear a vortex-feathered robe as a disguise? What's the point? Are you just pretending to be weak to deceive others while keeping your true identity intact? This is the first time I've seen such a despicable martial arts style. You dare to challenge the gods?