As an Immortal, I Was Reincarnated as a Muggle.

The protagonist is indeed very strong and soulful, but the interaction between the protagonist and Harley is a bit lacking. The character of Harley has no sense of existence at all. I think the author should write more about the interactions between Harley and other people.

Why didn't Malfoy change his gender? The arrogant blonde noble lady

To be honest, you might as well write the protagonist as a pervert. So far, there are too few elements in the black soul. Most of them are elements of the magic circle. You should at least learn crystal magic. You, who wears memories, can't even use a soul arrow? Anyway, I don't see much soul elements. You can say that if you delete the setting that the protagonist is an immortal, the novel can still be written as a Ring of Magic fanfic.

It always looks like an orthopedic surgery

I'm convinced, the writing is good, but it turns out that the patron saint of China is a game character. What's the picture? Disgusting?

Speaking of which, this book will go into space and other worlds in the future. After all, Ron's last book mentioned the study of space, and it will be a very grand world. As far as this book is concerned, I believe that planets in space also have souls, and I feel that I can place stories from different worlds on different planets, and then use Nick Flamel's alchemical technology to explore the stars, explore death (after all, death is a great adventure), explore the source of magic, and then discover the true secret of the wizard in the process, and solve some enemies to recover and improve the protagonist. Even Harley can participate in this process. At the same time, wizards left the earth and separated from Muggles, perfectly solving the problem of the wizarding world being afraid of being discovered. Then there is the issue of Dementors and the United States. I feel that this land can be given to Dementors for colonization. After all, they are so loyal and can regularly collect taxes (that is, soul power). The specific process can be cooperation with Lao Deng and others, or it can be deliberately spreading news about controllable Dementors, secretly making deals with the United States to deceive the United States, and then letting the Dementors bite back and provoke a civil war among American wizards (Muggles are exempted, so as not to cause trouble with the book). It feels very interesting. Then the dementors themselves can be used to build power. The leader feels that they can be used as housekeepers and bodyguards to protect Harley. After absorbing enough souls, he can have a form similar to a human being embedded in a black robe. With some etiquette, isn't it possible that Miss Harley's temperament will come. Other dementors can also be taught some martial arts and soul magic, and integrate these into their souls (so that this knowledge will be passed on when they are divided, so as not to delay things with multiple teachings). Finally, the form of the dementor can be a sword in one hand, a long staff in one hand, or a large tower shield, shotgun, hand cannon (similar to the hand cannon like the royal giant in Clash Royale), and because dementors have no emotions and are the purest souls, never mind Life and death can exude despair and absorb happiness, and the social hierarchy is extremely strict. It can fly, dive, use no oxygen, and can be resurrected. It can reproduce with a little happiness and can move forever. It is not afraid of absolute zero (dementors themselves are cold). It can use sea, land, air, and interstellar. It is simply the best weapon and army. It is handsome and practical. Imagine where the protagonist will go. No matter what the scene is, the black wind will surge in an instant, and a bunch of dementors will look so handsome. You can even build a planet for them, develop a clan society, rule by the strong, and then develop countless dementors who are loyal to the protagonist and continuously provide soul power. How interesting. Furthermore, the magical golden age of the world itself is also worth exploring, looking for alchemy technology and adventure. It feels like it can be linked with the previous book, such as seeing a red-haired gorilla hunting dragons on Dragon Island, etc. You can lift Hogwarts into the sky and turn it into a floating city, raise a few dragons for decoration, you can also make golden trees, plant them on stars or in the United States, trick the Americans into using new magic, and finally suck out their souls (in short, there are many ways to kill the American wizarding world), which is also good. In short, I am still looking forward to this book this time. I don't want it to be just a map like Ron's book last time. I hope the world view will be larger so that it will be enjoyable. The author's HP fanfic seems to be very unique, and the author has his own understanding. I hope the author can be more creative and create more enjoyable plots. I also hope the author can pay attention to his health and stop staying up late and killing sperm! Finally, I wish this book can become a god, come on😊! I feel free to take the things I am interested in. If I take too much, just delete my comment to avoid spoilers!

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I don't know how to describe this book From my personal point of view, the main plot is a bit confusing, with too many realistic factors included Entertainment products are basically an abstraction of reality, and viewers will not assume too many realistic historical positions, just like the Communist Youth League As Tuan said, liking Japanese comics does not mean that he is good at Japanese movies. Most of the people who watched Harry Potter didn't think that Voldemort was good at killing them, since they were all Angsa people. Most of the people who watched Ultraman didn't think that Ultraman should die quickly, because the people who died were all Japs anyway. Realistic entertainment works also exist objectively, but what the author has done is equivalent to adding a realistic main line to the non-realistic original work, resulting in many contradictions in perception. A simple example. The protagonist and Harley are both pure-bred white-skinned and out-and-out Angsa people. Now the plot has to analyze the sins of Americans and beat up Americans. People can't help but wonder, at least the United States has not invaded China. What is the Eight-Nation Alliance? The army has really entered the Forbidden City, and the Yankees also have something to say, ah, what did I do? What I did is what you left for fun. When the sun never sets, the empire colonized the world, you were no better than me. Why are only the state officials allowed to set fires, but the people are not allowed to light lamps? This is just one of the contradictory perceptions I had after the plot of this book forced me to take a realistic stance. Under normal circumstances, there are many ways to avoid this problem in normal works, such as establishing individual villains instead of group villains, such as HP's own Voldemort and Grindelwald, such as avoiding extreme labeling, such as Lucius Malfoy being a good father and husband, etc., But I didn't see it in this book. To be honest, I find it difficult to grasp this main line writing method...

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​                                                                                                If there are later readers who think this book is to your liking and want to continue, here is a suggestion, of course it is just a suggestion, that is, don't read Chapter 74 and 75. Even if you like Genshin Impact, it's best not to read it, because the entire climax of the plot collapses here. In the climax of the plot where the protagonist is furious because of Harley and ignites the First Fire and restarts reincarnation at the cost of sacrificing three-quarters of the world, inserting such a plot of the protagonist and Zhongli drinking and "discussing gods" can be said to directly pour cold water on the hot atmosphere at the end of the first volume. It makes people feel uncomfortable all over.

The twelve zodiac mechas I saw before

This author has definitely seen "Harry Potter and Hogwarts" in a certain community

The biggest problem with this book is probably that the twist is too blunt... At the beginning - Immortal + Harry Potter It's pretty good Sudden insertion - Genshen Liyue Zhongli (12+ games) The plot collapses - Liyue exchange student + spiritual mecha These three styles of painting have nothing similar. , Put together without any foreshadowing (it took at most one or two chapters to talk about the fun) It can be put together, but you have to foreshadow it in advance, because the painting styles of these three things are too different It feels like Maleficent + Spongebob + Little Fresh Bodyguard Insistence is as weird Collapse

I personally think that it is not good to replace the power of China with the original god.

Ah, my missing book review section. It seems that the previous posts have not been restored and are empty.

Female version of Harry, I just want to see how the old bat can add points.

After seeing the book friend's comments, I went to watch Harry Potter at Hogwarts.

Has the author started screening readers? How could there be such an idea that Snape had to thank James? Snape is not a good person, and neither is James! Snape is from the villain camp, and even the final deaths of Lily and James have something to do with him, but you can't say that to JK Rowling, what she said is wrong! James is a complete bully.

The writing is pretty good, but Genshin Impact doesn't feel like it goes well with Harry Potter 🙂

The power system of the magic ring is really many: poison, scarlet corruption (representing the corruption of nature, except that gold at the beginning cannot cure it, but later on, pure gold, or the power of other forces will not be afraid of it as long as it can burn), gravity, moon, stars (pyroxene), darkness (Assassin 1 kind), crystallization (I don't know who created the race), gold (divided into three stages, ancient golden tree, golden tree, golden tree fundamentalism), black flame (deprived of the destined death, the remaining power remnants, the product of the combination of the ancient spells of the Gemir volcano), spiritual fire (the ancient dragon time The power of the Death Bird faction representing death), cursed souls (powers that cursed souls and dead people can use, omens and headless horsemen), blood (the power of the outer gods thirsting for wounds and blood), beasts (the power of the orcs in the age of ancient dragons), fire (the power of the evil god of fire), cold Ice (the group of Samir people living in the snow-capped mountains), Epileptic Fire (simply want to destroy the world), Dragon Thunder (the ancient dragon is no longer weak in thunder, and can also release thunder), Death (real death, not artificial at all), Life (the ancestral spirit system, every time it is about to die, it will extract other lives to enrich itself, and it will grow more horns).

In countries such as the United Kingdom and the United States, they will not call people who are not related to you by blood, uncle, aunt, grandpa, etc. These titles can only be used for people who are related by blood. Others who are not related by blood, regardless of age, are called by their first names.

It's no exaggeration to say that I have no feelings for the original god. But I can't help but the pictures of Genshin Impact everyone posts are all of roasted chicken. When the word "Wish to God" appeared in this book, it was automatically mapped by the brain, so. . In short, it feels like separation.

I don't know how to evaluate this book. Let me tell you some of your own thoughts. Just say whatever you want. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. I divide the online articles on the market into two types. One type is purely for making money. The author writes whatever the reader likes to read. This type is also the vast majority. The other type is like this book. The author writes it for himself. The plot, logic, characterization, and readers' opinions are all unimportant. As long as you are happy, you can write even if the results are not good. It doesn't matter whether you make money or not. In short, I wish this book will get better and better, keep up the good work.

Oh my god, I started a new book this morning and finished it tonight. This is too uncomfortable.

You don't understand the value of dispelling Muggles at all. If you drive a gun to dispel Muggles, you will die.

I will update diligently

Inexplicably, everyone went to Hogwarts in Chapter 3?

"One day you will meet your destined death." Is this the origin of the title of the first volume?

I haven't read it yet, but I remembered the "If Harry Were a Girl" series on Bilibili

It's weird, it seems that the protagonist doesn't understand Chinese and is blond and blue-eyed. The most awkward thing is that the protagonist has to learn Chinese and is not familiar with Chinese yet. It's so awkward.

... Isn't this the limited edition of Harry Potter, the school belle's personal master? If you change your characters, the plot will be basically the same.